Very cool! I love that topic, and you did it well.

thanx!!! I'm about to post a little Amy drowing i did not so long ago, but i've few problems with my scanner... , I promise it'll be here soon!

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This is one of my old songs, (i'm still looking for the other ones lol) it's one of my shortest songs...

Waiting

And so i have taken so long
just watching the clock ticking
never thought i'd hate this much the fact
of your absence

with you i know i've learnt so much
things i know i won't forget
but i just can't find the reason why
i'm still waiting

For you
for you
for you

And i know for sure you won't come
back for me once again
if you have more things to do right now
i'm time wasted
i just stand beside the door and i
keep on waiting

For you
for you
for you

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That was awesome.

This line just leaped out at me. It also brought it all together.

Just beautiful.

That's great. It shows a big hope... wow.

awww... thanx!! I'll be posting some more songs soon!

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Very cool Loneca! I'm hoping that there's more coming soon. I love your stuff.

Uff.. back in the board after a 2 long weeks of studying.
Now, I give you one of my old songs written with tears in my eyes and blood in my hands.


Alone

I really thought you were there
now i see i was wrong
of this four walls i'm scared
can't make it on my own
tried so hard to pretend
didn't mean to wake up
as long as i believed in your voice
believed i could reach the top

Chorus
Now i know that i have fallen
and i realize i'm alone
with people around, still feel lonely
and back home, ain't way, no longer

The only thing now i hear
is the fake sound of silence
thousands of voices calling my name
begging for a chance
looking for the answers
but finding more questions
cannot stand on my onw feet
victim of your intentions

Chorus

Am i screaming to myself?
isn't here anyone else?

ChorusX2

Now i know that somehow
i've fallen into myself

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That was really amazing. wait, first things first...

Welcome Back! *throws confetti*

ok, I really liked this verse. Especially :"looking for answers but finding more questions". Loved that line! Awesome piece overall. Keep it up.

Hello everybody!!!, Well, i wanted to share this, which is one of my old songs (haven't written much so lately), hope you like it, and if not well you can still tell me anything in order to improve it!

Denied

I hope you hate it when you remember me
‘cause so will I
I really wish you suffer thinking of us together
‘cause so do I
I’m wondering if it had to be this
I realize there’s nothing left in me
But the emptiness once you filled

What’s for you
goes to me
And I just can’t handle it all alone

* Chorus *
You know I’m dying
You see I’m drownig
To save myself fighting
Denied
You know I was yours
And you’ll be falling too
We are forever cursed
Denied

I hope you cry while thinking of me
‘cause so will I
Now I want you to despise our memories
‘cause so do I
you know we could have avoided all of this,
we could have forgotten each other at least
haven’t you learnt the lesson?
I really hope you have.
Somehow I know I’ll be denied

* Chorus *
You know I’m dying
You see I’m drownig
To save myself fighting
Denied
You know I was yours (all yours)
And you’ll be falling too (too bad)
We are forever cursed (I’ll be)
Denied

* Chorus *
You know I’m dying (dying)
You see I’m drownig (drowning)
To save myself fighting (will I be)
Denied
You know I was yours (all yours)
And you’ll be falling too (too bad)
We are forever cursed (we’ll be)
Denied

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