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sweetwater · 11-20-2004, 01:56 AM

very touching and very beautiful loneca...the first 3 lines are amazing.

extreme E fan 4 life · 11-20-2004, 12:35 PM

That was amazing, amazingly beautiful, I absolutely love it, I'd say it's my favourite piece of yours that I've read so far, beautifully wrote darlin <3

Loneca · 11-21-2004, 02:41 PM

thank you axeslinger0u812, sweetwater and extreme E fan 4 life for teh comments

I'm working on a new song that sould be ready by the end of this week
but by now I bring u this
My BMTL Instrumental Cover
well you all know already... right clic.. save target as...

Nd Zodiac · 11-21-2004, 04:23 PM

I can't really find the right words to tell you how good you are,your words are so powerfull,so full of emotions that I can feel them too when I read your work.
Nd

Loneca · 11-23-2004, 06:32 PM

thank u so much Nd

I'm working on a new song but i just haven't find the right words to end it...

it should be ready soon

Euge · 11-24-2004, 06:54 AM

I like your instrumental Loneca

It's you on a piano, right?
(I'm not very musical, lol)

Very Nice.

The last poem, November Nights, beautiful as well.

Quote:

you're so perfect, nothing seems
to defeat you, but

This little part stucked on me.

KoRnette · 11-30-2004, 03:58 PM

wow you're really talented!!! really. in fact first I heard your FOI cover and I really thought it was Amy in the beginning! your voices sound pretty much the same

Loneca · 12-01-2004, 01:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KoRnette

wow you're really talented!!! really. in fact first I heard your FOI cover and I really thought it was Amy in the beginning! your voices sound pretty much the same

that's so sweet thank you so much for teh comment!!

that made my day! *dances wildly*

Loneca · 12-02-2004, 11:39 PM

Nightmare

Lost [lost]
within my fears [fears]
left to bleed [bleed]
as you watch me
sweet [sweet]
memories
as disease
running through my veins

*Chorus*
Save me from this nightmare
[I built myself]
Heal my eternal wounds
Stay with me forever
[my only cure]
End what I'm through

Lies [lies]
were always there [there]
was it fair?
to be betrayed...

*chorus*

Seal through my world of darkness
find the missing piece
break the prevalent silence
as I abide in you

Dandi_Randi · 12-03-2004, 12:25 AM

Wow... You are incredibly awesome at singing and writing! i wish i had that kinda talent. Keep up the great work!

11-21-2004, 02:41 PM	#73 (permalink)
Loneca Thank God! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Colombia Age: 20 Posts: 710 Points: 2,448.98 Bank: 2,703.72 Total Points: 5,152.70 Donate	thank you axeslinger0u812, sweetwater and extreme E fan 4 life for teh comments I'm working on a new song that sould be ready by the end of this week but by now I bring u this My BMTL Instrumental Cover well you all know already... right clic.. save target as... __________________

11-23-2004, 06:32 PM	#75 (permalink)
Loneca Thank God! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Colombia Age: 20 Posts: 710 Points: 2,448.98 Bank: 2,703.72 Total Points: 5,152.70 Donate	thank u so much Nd I'm working on a new song but i just haven't find the right words to end it... it should be ready soon __________________

12-02-2004, 11:39 PM	#79 (permalink)
Loneca Thank God! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Colombia Age: 20 Posts: 710 Points: 2,448.98 Bank: 2,703.72 Total Points: 5,152.70 Donate	Nightmare Lost [lost] within my fears [fears] left to bleed [bleed] as you watch me sweet [sweet] memories as disease running through my veins Chorus Save me from this nightmare [I built myself] Heal my eternal wounds Stay with me forever [my only cure] End what I'm through Lies [lies] were always there [there] was it fair? to be betrayed... *chorus* Seal through my world of darkness find the missing piece break the prevalent silence as I abide in you __________________

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11-20-2004, 01:56 AM	#71 (permalink)
sweetwater Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 862 Points: 142.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 142.00 Donate	very touching and very beautiful loneca...the first 3 lines are amazing.

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extreme E fan 4 life Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Candy Town Age: 20 Posts: 277 Points: 123.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 123.00 Donate	That was amazing, amazingly beautiful, I absolutely love it, I'd say it's my favourite piece of yours that I've read so far, beautifully wrote darlin <3

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Nd Zodiac Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In a world that I've created Age: 26 Posts: 230 Points: 143.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 143.00 Donate	I can't really find the right words to tell you how good you are,your words are so powerfull,so full of emotions that I can feel them too when I read your work. Nd

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KoRnette n00blet Join Date: Aug 2004 Age: 21 Posts: 2 Points: 100.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 100.00 Donate	wow you're really talented!!! really. in fact first I heard your FOI cover and I really thought it was Amy in the beginning! your voices sound pretty much the same

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Dandi_Randi n00blet Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: merrimack, NH Age: 20 Posts: 20 Points: 101.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 101.00 Donate	Wow... You are incredibly awesome at singing and writing! i wish i had that kinda talent. Keep up the great work!

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