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Old 08-10-2007, 02:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Ok, my turn... I've been writing things and I think it won't kill me if I just post it here so everyone can see :~
Here are some of my unorganized thoughts...


Sorry, I'm a Monster

Certain thoughts have become impossible to put in words
But I've been trying to show you how I feel
About you, about this whole thing
It's so hard to explain, only I can understand

I've done things I thought I'd never do
I ended up hurting you behind your back
And I felt good, I felt good
I've done nothing to change
Deep inside I know that's what I want
Deep inside I know I'm nothing but a monster

I'm sorry I couldn't be good enough for you
I couldn't make you forget those things that hurt you now
Sorry I couldn't make you happy
But I swear I've tried so many times
Although there are things no matter what I do
You're the only one able to change it
And I wish I could make you understand before it's too late

Right now I'm pretty much confused
And I know what I want is wrong
But I want to, I want to
You didn't cooperate, you didn't enjoy me
I shouldn't be doing it
'Cause I know it'll kill you when you find out
It hurts, but deep inside I feel good
And I'm sorry I'm a monster
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Old 08-10-2007, 03:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hey I loved ,great jobe. keep posting

Ps: meu inglês é #@$#$%$%$ espero que vc tenha entendido hahahaha
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Just for the record, I don't think you're a monster

Anyways, it's a really great poem =D
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Hey I loved ,great jobe. keep posting

Ps: meu inglês é #@$#$%$%$ espero que vc tenha entendido hahahaha
Lol, it's ok, of course I understand xD
Thanks :*

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Just for the record, I don't think you're a monster

Anyways, it's a really great poem =D
Oh, it's good to know you think like that x)
Thanks anyway
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