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Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Ohio
Age: 19
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Well, here is my little thread devoted to my writing. I do draw as well, but not very well so don't ever expect such things to be on here. I'm only posting recent poetry and possibly some stories when I'm able to find them. The following are all written as Shakespearean sonnets. If you find that my meters/feet (iambic pentameter) are wrong, do not hesitate to correct me.
Flowers of a Façade A wreath of the palest recollections From which her stained palette she forever drew Days of bliss- an ever imperfection Of lurid shades beneath the impure hue With ivory stones my absence she masks Holding her the flowers rich of the new spring The earthen rays of gold in all life basks And through their auriferous crowning sing The buds with radiance of life still Stars of morning outcast in grandeur sweet A fragile glimpse of a winter chill An illusive night fraught with thy deceit Now lay below me a semblant morrow A lifetime of impenetrable sorrow Winter Reborn O Winter still sings mid flowers in June! A casket of white roses doth She bloom Wanton lands rest on absence rich in tune From tattered weeds bearing Summer’s lost womb Fragrant glimmers of ripe fruit flourish She unfolds the light sky of life weary A bouquet of pearl hues doth She nourish Till the flowerets blossom black and teary Within the snow-blown lands She sleeps anew Mourning for the triumph of promised rays Vain recollections of what She drew When dull glisters would seethe the flustered days To the rigid path of unborn floral She waits in June with newly sprung laurel Beauty's Final Insignia I hold a mortal perfection that threats Time dost dare take her to cherish and grow What mercy that hath yet to reign now regrets That 'pon her lifeless form death shall bestow O thine angel smeared with aging’s advance Cheeks that showed the ruing reds of fall gone What love now doth look upon thee and glance? Or not he look at all, lest life be drawn? Mine eyes hath yet to muse upon her face With fear, I do attain this brazen plight A beauty needs not my heart to replace All that contains her is worthy of sight Even after my heart starts its slow decree That which takes my love, hath no shame on she The Wake of Winter A breath of vividity, sleep sorrow The Winter’s virgin lined in pallid hues Awakes from Her damning rest, grieve ’morrow! As the reddened heart envelops in blues Oh, the Day returns to His lonely love Her lips press still against the ever mourned Solemn rays reposed at night come, His dove! Luster of austere ardour lay them scorned The early rising, but fades to the noon Where once was teeming, now gives to bare ground A wreath for Her parting, a last festoon Pardons upon Her ripening chest crowned Never, returns Her beauty, only woes That seasons flower, that deadens a rose
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Location: Dublin,Ireland
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I love your poems and I love the fact that there all connected to nature/seasons in some way.Is that were you get your inspiration from? |
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Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Toronto,Ontario
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All of your poems are great, all of your idea's and everything are wonderful; very descriptive and a great use of words, awsome writing!
-Alana
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Away from EvBoard for a while... I'll be back at some point *wink*
Age: 24
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Beautiful job on your poems, Marcassa! I love the titles. And the structure looks very familiar... are they sonnets?
I wanted to pick out a favorite from the four you posted... but I can't. They're all too good. Keep posting! |
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