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Rina · 06-30-2005, 09:53 AM

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Originally Posted by Im_Broken

Grade A+, eh? Awesome.. hehe

*stares at teh awesomness*

Im_Broken · 06-30-2005, 06:22 PM

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Originally Posted by swim_chick

*stares at teh awesomness*

Hehe.. Awesome.. sweet.

Rina · 07-24-2005, 11:04 AM

Update on the first page. Enjoy!

SoundOfSilence · 07-24-2005, 11:16 AM

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Push it Away.
I can't take it Anymore.
Take My Pain.
Let me breathe once More.

One More- And I'll be Done
One More- Watch my world come Undone.
One More- Is all I need.
One More- Make me Complete

Give it Back.
It's all I need.
Give me my Pain.
It Keeps me Sane.

One More- And I'll be Done
One More- Watch my world come Undone.
One More- Is all I need.
One More- Make me Complete
One More- And I'll be Done
One More- Watch my world come Undone.
One More- Is all I need.
One More- Make me Complete

Make me Completely Gone.
Make me Forget what you've done,
Make me Regret this drug.
Make me Believe.

One More- And I'll be Done
One More- Watch my world come Undone.
One More- Is all I need.
One More- Make me Complete
One More- And I'll be Done
One More- Watch my world come Undone.
One More- Is all I need.
One More- Make me Complete

i LOVE this poem! excellent job! it's so powerful and emotional. i like it very much. keep up the great work, i want to read more!
bye, nadine

Rina · 07-24-2005, 11:24 AM

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Originally Posted by SoundOfSilence

i LOVE this poem! excellent job! it's so powerful and emotional. i like it very much. keep up the great work, i want to read more!
bye, nadine

*didn't expect a response so soon* thank you! I havn't had a lot of time to write, since i've been in NYC and my family is here, and, I just got a new flute (YAY!) so, I've been practicing loads! I'm gonna try to write some more right now...

Thanks again!

SoundOfSilence · 07-24-2005, 02:36 PM

you're welcome. all your poems are great

really, i think you have talent in finding the right words. sometimes i write poems, too but i often have problems in finding words, which really fit.

Im_Broken · 07-24-2005, 04:03 PM

Aww, that's very cool. I really like that one. That's different to read, but it's fun to read at the same time. You did a very nice job with that. That's probably one of my favorite's. I hope to see more awesome stuff soon.

Rina · 07-26-2005, 10:35 AM

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Originally Posted by SoundOfSilence

you're welcome. all your poems are great

really, i think you have talent in finding the right words. sometimes i write poems, too but i often have problems in finding words, which really fit.

They're really songs. But, you can call them poems if you like!

Thanks I'm Broken!

And, that songs was kind of written for my brother... but, that's all I'll say...

Im_Broken · 07-28-2005, 02:38 AM

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Originally Posted by swim_chick

Thanks I'm Broken!

You're welcome. It was nicely written.

Rina · 10-21-2005, 07:28 PM

Be Nice, it's my first attempt, and Alarandiia was the victim. And I only have paint. I'm also making a few avaters. Which also suck.

*I heart Krissie as much as my paint skills suck*

btw, I know this says 'songs' but i was bored.. and would like some help with paint, so i figured i post it in my stuff, so you can see just how much i suck, and know where to start with the constructive critism *if anything constructive can come from it* ... Mods can change the title, if they want to.

EDIT It was surprisingly less blury on my computer, sorry!... And I thought it couldn't get any worse! *hides*

07-24-2005, 11:04 AM	#23 (permalink)
Rina Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: somewhere Age: 19 Posts: 958 Points: 413.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 413.00 Donate	Update on the first page. Enjoy! __________________ "Hey, she can't hear you. You're only talking, Send her a text!" "Mommy's one of the chosen ones, Daddy's one of the people that believe Jesus was Magic."

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SoundOfSilence Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Berlin, Germany Age: 17 Posts: 522 Points: 329.33 Bank: 0.42 Total Points: 329.75 Donate	you're welcome. all your poems are great really, i think you have talent in finding the right words. sometimes i write poems, too but i often have problems in finding words, which really fit. __________________ Alessandro Del Piero is teh best guy ever.

07-24-2005, 04:03 PM	#27 (permalink)
Im_Broken Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 1,397 Points: 470.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 470.00 Donate	Aww, that's very cool. I really like that one. That's different to read, but it's fun to read at the same time. You did a very nice job with that. That's probably one of my favorite's. I hope to see more awesome stuff soon. __________________ -Rach- ((Check out my stuff)) when it starts to rain break out the slip and slide

10-21-2005, 07:28 PM	#30 (permalink)
Rina Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: somewhere Age: 19 Posts: 958 Points: 413.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 413.00 Donate	Be Nice, it's my first attempt, and Alarandiia was the victim. And I only have paint. I'm also making a few avaters. Which also suck. I heart Krissie as much as my paint skills suck btw, I know this says 'songs' but i was bored.. and would like some help with paint, so i figured i post it in my stuff, so you can see just how much i suck, and know where to start with the constructive critism if anything constructive can come from it ... Mods can change the title, if they want to. EDIT It was surprisingly less blury on my computer, sorry!... And I thought it couldn't get any worse! hides __________________ "Hey, she can't hear you. You're only talking, Send her a text!" "Mommy's one of the chosen ones, Daddy's one of the people that believe Jesus was Magic."

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