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04-29-2006, 09:43 AM
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Fledgling Post Monkey
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your last peice was really touching and posting related pics made it more powerful when read a second time. I think it's great that you were able to portray your strong emotions on this. i just learnt something about Chernobyl.
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04-29-2006, 11:24 AM
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05-02-2006, 02:18 PM
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Junior Member
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Embrace of Fire
What are you looking at? Hey?! I’m asking – What made you to stay? Are you afraide of beeing slave In this place, in this blaze? Can you imagine the hell embrace? Or you’d like to see it?! The air’s fusing and smells bad It smells with grief, it smells so sad! Black flakes of someones’ life are flying And someones’ hope is dying in the fire! Embrace of Fire is coming queit and slow – Encirclement – so, you can’t go! You’re asked for ardent dance – Be scorched, be ashes, be the past! And noone helps, they just keep silence – The last embrace, the end of trying! The gapers all cast down, The wind subsided in the town The end of Fire shows the ground! The hope ... burned... to the ground! 04.02.06 Last edited by Svetlana-S.V.D. : 05-04-2006 at 03:52 PM. |
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05-03-2006, 12:16 PM
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Junior Member
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I didn't want to study this morning at all... so I had an hour for Photoshop!
I'd like to show something I did.... a collage and a avatar (they're not really good or something... but I made an effort  )  Last edited by Svetlana-S.V.D. : 05-22-2006 at 12:34 PM. |
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05-04-2006, 03:46 AM
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Junior Member
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Thank you Claudine and FelycityS!
That's really strange poem! I live in a high-rise building, and several days ago we had a fire on the forth floor. I live on the sixth, so I couldn't see outside the window sometimes because of smoke! But the most offensive for me was to see a crowd of gapers... why were they standing there and looking how someone's flat was burning? for interesting? because of fear?... and I understand that every disaster of someone's life is gathering a crowd of gapers around... not for helping...not for crying...just for watching... Now I would like to post several of my old poems... [almost the end of night] Male voice: It would be nice to close the eyes, to fly so far ‘cause that’s enough to scare of night! That would be right to sleep for a minute and forerver! Female voice: Say me “Hello” I’m not alone I take the stone and make it go! My little hope is fixing hole! Even in grief never give in! Chorus: M.V. – F.V: Even if I – don’t live Stars will burn – the sky! Moment’s mine – enternity! Somehow I – will fly! Please don’t cry – I won’t! You’re so fine – I know! It’s your time – Not long! Time goes by – Short road! F.V: Cold rain dies I feel my smile It covered your arms They hold my soul so tight! They tell me “sorry”... I do not worry This is my world... This is my whole! Believe it’s worth that tears of rose! I give it all to live it all! This kiss is truth I am not you! Abondone fear – I want to live! Reality goes far than the hopes! Give me a chance – I need a defence! Chorus: F.V: Is it realy easy not to be sad? Think of me... please!!!When I…Just for… Voices: It is so nice to close the eyes… (that's about person who's living the last days and knows it... but trying to struggle bad feelings and to take more of this life) *** I do something wrong! I see myself in mirror But I don’t know her – She’s sad for her age She’s lost on the stage! Is it me? I used to believe But I don’t know in what I felt myself free Very long ago… And time goes slow Forever! And I can’t sleep at night I can’t sleep at night Always asking this “why” Why can’t I strive? Why have I lied To myself? I’ve tear up my soul Just to be “so good”! I don’t know the day I died! But how could I be so fool Thinking that being one Of the best of you Is really cool, Thinking that makes me happy? What am I trying to be? Do I know what I need? My space is darkness around me My life is darkness in me My heart is darkness that bleeds Just soul pretends that it lives… And I still believe it! And I will believe it! *** Like a leaf on the wind I am blind And there’s nothing to see, nothing to find I am scared of this world, I am deaf by my will ‘Cause I don’t want to know that this madness is real! My heart shivers of pain knowing that day by day We’ve no courage to save our land! On the way To the virtual heaven we leave corpse of the sins And I’ll never know how to live, I have nothing here to believe! Accidentally I’ve opened my eyes, I can’t stop this sight I guess I’ll loose my mind knowing that that’s all right Being greed for a love, changing marriage for a slut Making money on a shut, finding truth in the blood! And I’m going through the fight in me: little girl wants to live, Bets with a soul that bleeds… to see… to show… to feel… That there’s peace in the world and it’s worth to hold That another day of a war… They bet on me! Last edited by Svetlana-S.V.D. : 05-04-2006 at 03:57 PM. |
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05-04-2006, 06:39 AM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Ukraine
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I've found my drawings photos
 And photoshop edits for one of them - it's portrait of Count Albert from Consuello (J.Sand) as I emagine him   And this one I called Moon  Last edited by Svetlana-S.V.D. : 05-22-2006 at 12:33 PM. |
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05-06-2006, 05:13 PM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Ukraine
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a short rhymed esse
There was a misty morning when a mystery begun to breath!
It was not even a morning but false dawn indeed... And Night was falling asleep... was quietening down... She had to recede! It was look like She took offence at this town and decided to leave... But She promiced to get back to it! Feeling mistery She had turned back... but it was too late Because of cheeky pink-haired lad: There was Dawn crawling out from the bed! - What had happened to here? – the boy wondered... He opened his eyes, they were pure like dew He tilted his head and there’s an azure lock... or a few... - I don’t knoooooow! – flying princess Night said.... - I don’t .... nooo... – was the last breath! The whole world was in hiding... And all birds became silent... The wind had died down... Here was standing spellbound Dawn He was hearkening to mystery sound.... .... The Life was born in the April’s false dawn! several years ago I wrote an esse in russian (just for myself)... and yesterday I transleted it to english (I decided to do this for the Writers Group  ) ... that's what appeared!It's really close to the original I've just added one line to save some rhymed stuff that appeared in english version! and I've changed several words but not because of rhyme, because there is not exact translation of some words! After I finished translation, it seemed to me this poem became an independent thing! There's the same spirit in my esse and this... poem, I guess... but they have too much different forms... and languages make a big differences... |
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