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FelicityS · 07-25-2006, 12:48 AM

Bleed
Beautiful. It makes me think of how a child might draw a picture of their Family in class, so innocent, so happy. Then as time grows the truth seeps through and relisation is a burden of the fact that all things are not as perfect as they seem, innocence is lost, ignorance is bliss and why can't we all go back to when things seemed like a dream! okay sorry for babbling, in other words i really liked this peice!

Lost and Fallen
Pretty basic but i still got the gist...... I feel when i read this, the feeling of standing at the window and watching life pass by, a feeling of being captured in a certain frame of mind and time.

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 07-27-2006, 12:46 PM

thank you very much, Fliss, for coming back here again and again!
and I love very much your "babbling" about Bleed! It was really very close to the poem... and these words

Quote:

Originally Posted by FelicityS

the feeling of standing at the window and watching life pass by, a feeling of being captured in a certain frame of mind and time.

are exactly what I've felt in a moment of writting this piece!
thank you a lot!

Then...
I'd like to put here my entry for Forbidden thread! and I have to say it means to me a lot, because I had such unfortunate to have native language and first language as two different!

Forbidden Language

Don’t you see a sellotape on my mouth?
I was born like that without scream!
Almost like in 1867*
We have no word to talk, to sing!

This centuries with gag of interdiction
Broke our soul and made it withered, dumb…
And even now when we become free nation
We’ve lost the art of our song!

We keep on silence in forbidden language
And our children won’t hear a native lullaby…
When one of us deny what we have came from
One angel of our freedom dies!

Don’t you see a sellotape on my mouth?
I was born like that … it hurts
‘cause my words were stolen from my heart
Long before my Grand-grandpa was born!

But in the ashes of the history
I see the Phoenix comes to live –
Most perfect song you’ll ever hear
Will strive our apathy – I BELIEVE!!!!!

* There was Valuev’s decree was issued in 1867. It had added some points to Emskiy decree of 1863. By this decrees Ukrainian language was forbidden for publishing books, for making all types of performances and for using it in public in Russian empire. Ukrainian was proclaimed as a dialect. All over the history Ukrainian language was forbidden in different territories of Ukraine for about three hundred years. This caused to assimilation of nation in some regions and for changing of language in some regions to Russian in another to awful mix which we call mangcorn. And now we have problems of reanimation native language in some refions, this leads to split in society on the ground of language problem.

Tourniqueted · 07-27-2006, 01:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Svetlana-S.V.D.

Do you know how does it feel beeing nothing?
Noone sees you, noone means you! Nothing!

I’m walking down the street and looking for a nothing.
My heart has stood still two blocks back. It’s nothing!

I’m sitting in the grass, so limpid! They see nothing!
The grass’ll be covered with fall leaves, but it changes nothing!

And I go over human faces, I say them nothing!
I don’t hear, don’t scream, don’t ask, just dissolve in nothing!

Svetlana, this one is really deep.Omg, i like it terribly

And взагалi cool stuff.Drawing at the first page is very nice.

The latest poem is really meaningful for Ukranians.Thank you for posting it!Let the world know about your country's problem.

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 09-09-2006, 08:39 AM

First of all ... thank you Tourniqueted for your comment.... you've picked a poem I love much...!!!

And...
It took me really long to come back to this thread after my vacation... (and I'm quite busy now... it's sucks sometimes).... but I hope I'll find some time to post several pieces I have!!!

and... I've missed one topic of Evboard Writers Group

... but here go my The Open Door and Blurred Identity entries!!!

The next poem I did after seeing one funeral and one wedding the same day...
as usual I appiriciate each though about my works

This is just a life

This is just a life
This funeral is guide by bride
And no one can deny
The light
She has a light...

Oh! This is just a life
When I was born another died
And if she is a whore tonight
You are the saintest that I’ll ever find
It’s just a life!

A thousand times I’ve cried
No more then I have smiled
And this is not a fight
It’s just a life!

We are created to be happy
For what we are to find a grief
Somehow this world won’t let it happen –
The life will never be relief

So if you’re happy – someone’s crying
And if you’re sad – then someone’s glad
It’s just a life – it’s worth of trying
To love this balance that we have!

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 09-10-2006, 12:16 PM

so... I'm doing everything not like I supposed I would... but.. it doesn't matters

I've written another poem for Blurred Identity...
I didn't meat to make it for this topic... but when it came to the last lines I understood that I would!

and also... I'm tired of trying to do something better in this pic... so I'll just show it

(the quality sucks... sorry)

so what do you think?

FelicityS · 09-11-2006, 08:39 PM

I think it's AWESOME!

That is a great drawing (and i love the pic of Amy too) The shading is awesome <3

I love your writing, it's unique, it's your own.... I think that's great!

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 09-15-2006, 02:53 AM

Thank you Fliss

(and for the gift

)
I really love drawing of that picture... but her hands... it was something terrible...

I'm eager to show another drawing of mine!!!!
I made it several days ago... and had no opportunity to post it... it was incredible to draw it while listening to Lithium! It was something crazy... I love this song... and... why it's so short...?

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 09-18-2006, 03:57 PM

Ok! Here goes my entry for Empathy which was casted by one episode of.... "Charmed" That I've seen several years ago... I guess I was really impressed by the story

Also...

I'd like to post now two really different pieces of my poetry... the first one I've found in my text book...

Spirit of the Spring

I was born from singing of the blooming trees
As this sun was born from just one ray of light
Long ago I was burn with the snow and frost and melting of the night
Long ago... but now again
I was born from singing of the trees!

And I’ll carry song through whole of my life
Holding you and making your eyes shine
Giving you the sweettest love
Till that one cold day when I will die!

But we both know – when trees are blooming and begin to sing
I will be born again... and you will name me – Spirit of the Spring!

... and the second... is... what I have seen recently...

I do not believe

What if it was the only place in the whole world where she could live....
What if there was a reason why this crossroad was meant to be here...
But I don’t believe!

And now I see her brown-black hair bleeds
I hear no breath, no live
But I do not believe!

I see her bones are cracked
And eyes are deep with emptyness of death
But I do not believe!

I see her crashed... already dead
With button-nose is dry she’s left
Aside the road where she had lived...

But I do not believe
That human beeing
Could make this real!

What if this road was the only place where that dog could be...
I do not believe... but it’s real!

I would like to know what you think?

FelicityS · 09-18-2006, 07:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Svetlana-S.V.D.

This drawing is beautiful ^^ <3

PLEASE post you other picture.... oh i LOVE the song Lithium!

Spirit of the Spring Is beautiful and reminds me very much of Within Temptation's style <3

What if there was a reason why this crossroad was meant to be here...

Wow i love that line, really thought provking. A Powerful peice!

07-25-2006, 12:48 AM	#71 (permalink)
FelicityS Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,403 Points: 700.64 Bank: 41.06 Total Points: 741.70 Donate	Bleed Beautiful. It makes me think of how a child might draw a picture of their Family in class, so innocent, so happy. Then as time grows the truth seeps through and relisation is a burden of the fact that all things are not as perfect as they seem, innocence is lost, ignorance is bliss and why can't we all go back to when things seemed like a dream! okay sorry for babbling, in other words i really liked this peice! Lost and Fallen Pretty basic but i still got the gist...... I feel when i read this, the feeling of standing at the window and watching life pass by, a feeling of being captured in a certain frame of mind and time. __________________ My Space My Stuff

09-09-2006, 08:39 AM	#74 (permalink)
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 24 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	here i am again First of all ... thank you Tourniqueted for your comment.... you've picked a poem I love much...!!! And... It took me really long to come back to this thread after my vacation... (and I'm quite busy now... it's sucks sometimes).... but I hope I'll find some time to post several pieces I have!!! and... I've missed one topic of Evboard Writers Group ... but here go my The Open Door and Blurred Identity entries!!! The next poem I did after seeing one funeral and one wedding the same day... as usual I appiriciate each though about my works This is just a life This is just a life This funeral is guide by bride And no one can deny The light She has a light... Oh! This is just a life When I was born another died And if she is a whore tonight You are the saintest that I’ll ever find It’s just a life! A thousand times I’ve cried No more then I have smiled And this is not a fight It’s just a life! We are created to be happy For what we are to find a grief Somehow this world won’t let it happen – The life will never be relief So if you’re happy – someone’s crying And if you’re sad – then someone’s glad It’s just a life – it’s worth of trying To love this balance that we have! __________________ My stuff ... My band... My land ...the children of chernobyl...

09-10-2006, 12:16 PM	#75 (permalink)
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 24 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	so... I'm doing everything not like I supposed I would... but.. it doesn't matters I've written another poem for Blurred Identity... I didn't meat to make it for this topic... but when it came to the last lines I understood that I would! and also... I'm tired of trying to do something better in this pic... so I'll just show it (the quality sucks... sorry) so what do you think? __________________ My stuff ... My band... My land ...the children of chernobyl...

09-11-2006, 08:39 PM	#76 (permalink)
FelicityS Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,403 Points: 700.64 Bank: 41.06 Total Points: 741.70 Donate	I think it's AWESOME! That is a great drawing (and i love the pic of Amy too) The shading is awesome <3 I love your writing, it's unique, it's your own.... I think that's great! __________________ My Space My Stuff

09-15-2006, 02:53 AM	#77 (permalink)
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 24 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	Thank you Fliss (and for the gift ) I really love drawing of that picture... but her hands... it was something terrible... I'm eager to show another drawing of mine!!!! I made it several days ago... and had no opportunity to post it... it was incredible to draw it while listening to Lithium! It was something crazy... I love this song... and... why it's so short...? __________________ My stuff ... My band... My land ...the children of chernobyl...

09-18-2006, 03:57 PM	#78 (permalink)
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 24 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	Ok! Here goes my entry for Empathy which was casted by one episode of.... "Charmed" That I've seen several years ago... I guess I was really impressed by the story Also... I'd like to post now two really different pieces of my poetry... the first one I've found in my text book... Spirit of the Spring I was born from singing of the blooming trees As this sun was born from just one ray of light Long ago I was burn with the snow and frost and melting of the night Long ago... but now again I was born from singing of the trees! And I’ll carry song through whole of my life Holding you and making your eyes shine Giving you the sweettest love Till that one cold day when I will die! But we both know – when trees are blooming and begin to sing I will be born again... and you will name me – Spirit of the Spring! ... and the second... is... what I have seen recently... I do not believe What if it was the only place in the whole world where she could live.... What if there was a reason why this crossroad was meant to be here... But I don’t believe! And now I see her brown-black hair bleeds I hear no breath, no live But I do not believe! I see her bones are cracked And eyes are deep with emptyness of death But I do not believe! I see her crashed... already dead With button-nose is dry she’s left Aside the road where she had lived... But I do not believe That human beeing Could make this real! What if this road was the only place where that dog could be... I do not believe... but it’s real! I would like to know what you think? __________________ My stuff ... My band... My land ...the children of chernobyl...

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