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Svetlana-S.V.D. · 01-04-2006, 02:58 PM

Hello to everyone!
My name's Svetlana! That means ligth...

Here is my stuff thread... you can find here my music, poetry, drawings, photos... anything I'd like to put here

... and I decided to change the very first post "a little" because I've lost in my thread for one time and coudn't find one poem... so I decided to add some navigation here

(I'm sorrrrry for making such a long post...and if it's useless... and if you know my thread *i hope so verry much* just skip it... but I wanted to do it for a couple days)

So...
first of all I would like to introduce you my band - S.V.D.! That's the great part of my world... (to enter our web site just click on the band name

) I realy hope you'll like it!

Then...
Here is my latest literary piece I'd post...

I do not believe

What if it was the only place in the whole world where she could live....
What if there was a reason why this crossroad was meant to be here...
But I don’t believe!

And now I see her brown-black hair bleeds
I hear no breath, no live
But I do not believe!

I see her bones are cracked
And eyes are deep with emptyness of death
But I do not believe!

I see her crashed... already dead
With button-nose is dry she’s left
Aside the road where she had lived...

But I do not believe
That human beeing
Could make this real!

What if this road was the only place where that dog could be...
I do not believe... but it’s real!

Also...
... my latest graphic (or visual) work... (it's a photo and the quality sucks... I'll try to do something)

And at last...
NAVIGAITON

there was sever changes... so I've lost in my writnings.... I'll fix it later... sorry

That's it!
I hope you're enjoying my stuff...
...oh! and I'd love to have any of your comments

excuse me one more time for making such huge post... but I hope it'll help someone... someday

Yours sincerely
Svetlana

Caligari_87 · 01-04-2006, 03:22 PM

I just listened to one of your songs and proceeded to download the rest directly to my library. Awesome stuff, I like!

Reminds me of Nightwish, just not so over-the-top, like they sometimes are. Keep up the good work, and I expect to see some good stuff from your band in a few years!

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 01-04-2006, 04:55 PM

And here is one of my favorite lyrics among our songs:

There was October in the park!
Going slowly, smiling to that child
He held cold night in backpack!

Golden Autemn was walking nearby!
Catching glance and making bird-leaf fly
She had a warm day in her deep-dark eyes!

Picking up smiles, finding secrets on the ground,
Taking strangers' hands they had found
Thet they were singing aloud!

October's blue eyes are falling in pieces - in love,
Falling in deep-dark and the golds are flattering above!
So many people walking way to long than two become one!

(the song is right here - http://h2.padonki.org.ua/~vovin/svd/....-.In.love.mp3)

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 01-07-2006, 04:21 PM

Except the band lyrics I do some other poetry.
It’s just something I’d like to express and it sounds in english. I don’t think it is something great, I just really like some of my poetry… So I’ll post something of mine here!
I’d like to hear what you think of it – anything you want – criticism, approval, wishes or noticing mistakes! Please!
(I really hope to leart to do this better!)

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 01-07-2006, 04:42 PM

Dear May,
Please come to me!
I dream of your sweet shine,
Of endless sky,
Of blooming trees,
Of gold that warms and covers night!

My sweet May,
I know you miss me,
Even if I haven’t noticed you!
I’m tired of grey,
I need to feel
The shiver from the glance of moon!

You know, these days’re
Completely frozen
Like sphere of glass with me inside!
And all these faces
Become a dozen dolls
I wouldn’t like to see at night!

Dear May,
Please promise me,
You’ll meet me once again!
I will be waiting
This to say
Sincerely yours, me!

Vampyyri · 01-07-2006, 08:37 PM

ARTEEST!!!

I really really like your music,it is great,i just downloaded "I have to go" and "Fairy Tale",and i have to say that you really got a talent

Keep up the good work

.
And about your writings i think they are really good too,i'd really like to read some more.

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 01-08-2006, 06:31 AM

Make me sleep in your arms
In the deep blue ocean!
Make me feel I am loved
By all stars at night!
I’m so tired of this fight
With shadows in my soul!
Is that all right
That I never know
Why I feel myself lone
While you’re here by my side!
What I’ve done to the world
That it gives me to you?
I am a child that’s to grow up
And you are my hope!
With you I’m in safe
You’re my only shelter!
And it won’t be too late
To undertand
Why I feel myself lone
Making you go!
Make me sleep for a while
With a sweet nice dream
‘Cause we have some time
For my soul to believe
That it can be read
Like a book. No mistake!
And you’ll stay
In my place
When I feel myself lone
You don’t have to go!

(This is something I made last night)

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 01-09-2006, 04:00 AM

Do you know how does it feel beeing nothing?
Noone sees you, noone means you! Nothing!

I’m walking down the street and looking for a nothing.
My heart has stood still two blocks back. It’s nothing!

I’m sitting in the grass, so limpid! They see nothing!
The grass’ll be covered with fall leaves, but it changes nothing!

And I go over human faces, I say them nothing!
I don’t hear, don’t scream, don’t ask, just dissolve in nothing!

Caligari_87 · 01-09-2006, 09:49 AM

Cool poems, even though it seems like your English is a little off. That's okay, though. Poetry trancends language, and yours is awesome. I especially like the one about "May", with the imagery.

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 01-10-2006, 01:08 PM

2Caligary 87: Thank you a lot!

2all! It would be great to tell me somehow if you see some stupid things in my poems

I really can do some mistakes

01-04-2006, 02:58 PM	#1 (permalink)
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 23 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	me and my S.V.D. Hello to everyone! My name's Svetlana! That means ligth... Here is my stuff thread... you can find here my music, poetry, drawings, photos... anything I'd like to put here ... and I decided to change the very first post "a little" because I've lost in my thread for one time and coudn't find one poem... so I decided to add some navigation here (I'm sorrrrry for making such a long post...and if it's useless... and if you know my thread i hope so verry much just skip it... but I wanted to do it for a couple days) So... first of all I would like to introduce you my band - S.V.D.! That's the great part of my world... (to enter our web site just click on the band name ) I realy hope you'll like it! Then... Here is my latest literary piece I'd post... I do not believe What if it was the only place in the whole world where she could live.... What if there was a reason why this crossroad was meant to be here... But I don’t believe! And now I see her brown-black hair bleeds I hear no breath, no live But I do not believe! I see her bones are cracked And eyes are deep with emptyness of death But I do not believe! I see her crashed... already dead With button-nose is dry she’s left Aside the road where she had lived... But I do not believe That human beeing Could make this real! What if this road was the only place where that dog could be... I do not believe... but it’s real! Also... ... my latest graphic (or visual) work... (it's a photo and the quality sucks... I'll try to do something) And at last... NAVIGAITON there was sever changes... so I've lost in my writnings.... I'll fix it later... sorry That's it! I hope you're enjoying my stuff... ...oh! and I'd love to have any of your comments excuse me one more time for making such huge post... but I hope it'll help someone... someday Yours sincerely Svetlana Last edited by Svetlana-S.V.D. : 09-18-2006 at 02:58 PM.

01-07-2006, 04:21 PM	#4 (permalink)
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 23 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	there is something else! Except the band lyrics I do some other poetry. It’s just something I’d like to express and it sounds in english. I don’t think it is something great, I just really like some of my poetry… So I’ll post something of mine here! I’d like to hear what you think of it – anything you want – criticism, approval, wishes or noticing mistakes! Please! (I really hope to leart to do this better!)

01-07-2006, 04:42 PM	#5 (permalink)
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 23 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	The Letter From December Dear May, Please come to me! I dream of your sweet shine, Of endless sky, Of blooming trees, Of gold that warms and covers night! My sweet May, I know you miss me, Even if I haven’t noticed you! I’m tired of grey, I need to feel The shiver from the glance of moon! You know, these days’re Completely frozen Like sphere of glass with me inside! And all these faces Become a dozen dolls I wouldn’t like to see at night! Dear May, Please promise me, You’ll meet me once again! I will be waiting This to say Sincerely yours, me! Last edited by Svetlana-S.V.D. : 01-16-2006 at 02:59 PM.

01-07-2006, 08:37 PM	#6 (permalink)
Vampyyri ☣T0x1c Inf3rnuM☣ Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Blasfemialandia Age: 18 Posts: 1,539 Points: 2,494.83 Bank: 350.81 Total Points: 2,845.63 Donate	ARTEEST!!! I really really like your music,it is great,i just downloaded "I have to go" and "Fairy Tale",and i have to say that you really got a talent Keep up the good work . And about your writings i think they are really good too,i'd really like to read some more. __________________ MYSPACE ☣An Ode To Acid☣

01-08-2006, 06:31 AM	#7 (permalink)
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 23 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	I Feel Myself Lone Make me sleep in your arms In the deep blue ocean! Make me feel I am loved By all stars at night! I’m so tired of this fight With shadows in my soul! Is that all right That I never know Why I feel myself lone While you’re here by my side! What I’ve done to the world That it gives me to you? I am a child that’s to grow up And you are my hope! With you I’m in safe You’re my only shelter! And it won’t be too late To undertand Why I feel myself lone Making you go! Make me sleep for a while With a sweet nice dream ‘Cause we have some time For my soul to believe That it can be read Like a book. No mistake! And you’ll stay In my place When I feel myself lone You don’t have to go! (This is something I made last night) Last edited by Svetlana-S.V.D. : 01-16-2006 at 03:02 PM.

01-04-2006, 03:22 PM	#2 (permalink)
Caligari_87 Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Do you want to know? No, do you REALLY want to know? You don't. Age: 21 Posts: 115 Points: 755.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 755.00 Donate	I just listened to one of your songs and proceeded to download the rest directly to my library. Awesome stuff, I like! Reminds me of Nightwish, just not so over-the-top, like they sometimes are. Keep up the good work, and I expect to see some good stuff from your band in a few years!

01-04-2006, 04:55 PM	#3 (permalink)
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 23 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	And here is one of my favorite lyrics among our songs: There was October in the park! Going slowly, smiling to that child He held cold night in backpack! Golden Autemn was walking nearby! Catching glance and making bird-leaf fly She had a warm day in her deep-dark eyes! Picking up smiles, finding secrets on the ground, Taking strangers' hands they had found Thet they were singing aloud! October's blue eyes are falling in pieces - in love, Falling in deep-dark and the golds are flattering above! So many people walking way to long than two become one! (the song is right here - http://h2.padonki.org.ua/~vovin/svd/....-.In.love.mp3)

01-09-2006, 04:00 AM	#8 (permalink)
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 23 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	Nothing Do you know how does it feel beeing nothing? Noone sees you, noone means you! Nothing! I’m walking down the street and looking for a nothing. My heart has stood still two blocks back. It’s nothing! I’m sitting in the grass, so limpid! They see nothing! The grass’ll be covered with fall leaves, but it changes nothing! And I go over human faces, I say them nothing! I don’t hear, don’t scream, don’t ask, just dissolve in nothing!

01-09-2006, 09:49 AM	#9 (permalink)
Caligari_87 Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Do you want to know? No, do you REALLY want to know? You don't. Age: 21 Posts: 115 Points: 755.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 755.00 Donate	Cool poems, even though it seems like your English is a little off. That's okay, though. Poetry trancends language, and yours is awesome. I especially like the one about "May", with the imagery.

01-10-2006, 01:08 PM	#10 (permalink)
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 23 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	2Caligary 87: Thank you a lot! 2all! It would be great to tell me somehow if you see some stupid things in my poems I really can do some mistakes

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