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Skittle =] · 09-03-2006, 05:38 PM

hey thats another great one .. i think the best poetry is the poetry that is inspired by a event tht has hurt you or affected you in some way ... i love the way you word your poems it flows so well and the description is amazing .. also .. i love poems that tell a story .. and it definatley tells a story (as you already stated ) .. anyways ace work

morganna · 09-05-2006, 04:19 PM

Another poem, but this one is actually slightly more positive !
Written when i fell in love with my current boyfriend, who ive been with for almost a year <3 he's done a lot for me, so i wrote this for him

after the storm (on suggestion of FelicityS)

A gentle kiss upon these lips
hands entwined so tight
walking through a sea of rain
under the pale moonlight
within your eyes, i see your love,
reach out and hold it near
with your arms curved around of me,
i feel no worry, no fear
Dance along this narrow road,
let a breeze blow through your hair
kiss me underneath the stars
promise me you're there,
I feel your body close to mine
the warmth upon my skin
Gentle fingers comfort me
and calm the tears within
I lay here in your arms tonight
you raise me to the sky
i'll always be beside you, boy,
through every bitter fight

FelicityS · 09-05-2006, 08:48 PM

I love that poem ^ Raise me. Its just calm and soft...

Personally i dont like the title, it reminds me of a religious hymn. i would title it calm oceans or after the strom.... thats just my personal thing!

09-05-2006, 04:19 PM	#12 (permalink)
morganna Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Bridgend, South Wales, U.K Age: 19 Posts: 87 Points: 1,384.79 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 1,384.79 Donate	Another poem, but this one is actually slightly more positive ! Written when i fell in love with my current boyfriend, who ive been with for almost a year <3 he's done a lot for me, so i wrote this for him after the storm (on suggestion of FelicityS) A gentle kiss upon these lips hands entwined so tight walking through a sea of rain under the pale moonlight within your eyes, i see your love, reach out and hold it near with your arms curved around of me, i feel no worry, no fear Dance along this narrow road, let a breeze blow through your hair kiss me underneath the stars promise me you're there, I feel your body close to mine the warmth upon my skin Gentle fingers comfort me and calm the tears within I lay here in your arms tonight you raise me to the sky i'll always be beside you, boy, through every bitter fight __________________ I'mthebubblyenglishlasswhotalkstoomuchandthegirlur parentslovetohate - Morganna, baby! Last edited by morganna : 09-06-2006 at 01:12 PM.

09-05-2006, 08:48 PM	#13 (permalink)
FelicityS Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,403 Points: 700.64 Bank: 41.06 Total Points: 741.70 Donate	I love that poem ^ Raise me. Its just calm and soft... Personally i dont like the title, it reminds me of a religious hymn. i would title it calm oceans or after the strom.... thats just my personal thing! __________________ My Space My Stuff

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09-03-2006, 05:38 PM	#11 (permalink)
Skittle =] Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Age: 19 Posts: 44 Points: 54.66 Bank: 393.66 Total Points: 448.32 Donate	hey thats another great one .. i think the best poetry is the poetry that is inspired by a event tht has hurt you or affected you in some way ... i love the way you word your poems it flows so well and the description is amazing .. also .. i love poems that tell a story .. and it definatley tells a story (as you already stated ) .. anyways ace work

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