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NEW SONG!!! SMOKING IS BAD MMMK?

well... about your songs... r very nice... congratulations!....
when u have more post please!....

well... about your songs... r very nice... congratulations!....
when u have more post please!....
I'll be sure to! Thank you!

EDIT: Here is a poem I wrote last year:
(God I'm so emo.....)


The second of December
I had made up my mind.
I decided I was left way too far behind
All I wanted was to end my life with the cut of a blade
So I did it at a quarter ‘till eight
Yes, the plan worked and I had died
But where I went was a big surprise
It was far from heaven and far from hell
“I must be in a Gothic Paradise.” I thought to myself

I had dreamed of this place since I was a child
But I had dreamed of it tender and mild.
For this place were certainly not any of those
Unlike anything you would ever find in Vogue.

Welcoming me were fallen angels from the sky
And they asked me “What brought you to your suicide?”
I tell them “I was unhappy. I am a fallen angel, just like you.”
“Oh, young girl, you were far from us. You had so much left to do!”
“The world rejected me, all the time I was oh so blue!”
“Very well, one day, in this realm you will be a fallen angel, too”

I walk around and find that I am dressed differently than before my death.
My dark, raven hair curly and teased high
And a black corseted dress that is pulled tight.
Black ballet shoes grace my feet
Wrapped until the ribbon meets my knee
“I look beautiful for once in my life!”
And then I remember I’m no longer alive

I sit in the field of Midnight Blue daisies
Everything here seems a little hazy
Suddenly, a voice I hear.
He says “The end is near”.
I see the man who speaks these words
His face is hidden by a dark black hood.

He holds out his hand wanting me to hold
As I grip it I feel deep pains within my soul.
Roses bleeding the blood of torment and hate
But I fear, it’s far too late
Stabbed with the thorns of the bleeding roses,
I look to the clouds that the purple sky composes.
Ravens flying through the air screaming “Nevermore! Nevermore!”
And nevermore is right
I close my eyes and say goodnight

Critiquing as requested :)

Your singing isn't bad. It could use some improvement though. It sounds like you're not supporting your air when you go higher; that's why you went flat and died out when you reached the high notes in the BMTL intro. Don't try to reach for the notes, stretch out your neck/tilt your head up, or think that you're going catastrophically high. All of the above will make you go flat and/or choke up. Support yourself by pulling your diaphragm (i.e. stomach muscles) in as you go higher. Stand on two feet, don't sit. (And seriously? Think down. Like you're sitting on the pitch, not reaching for it) Then you'll have better support. Support = more strength, less flat notes, and more accuracy.

I would check out the Advice for Fellow Singers thread in the Completely Off-Topic forum; there's LOADS of good advice in there.

You're off to a good start. Every singer needs to aspire to be better than she is now; work at it, and you'll get better and better before you know it. :)

Critiquing as requested :)

Your singing isn't bad. It could use some improvement though. It sounds like you're not supporting your air when you go higher; that's why you went flat and died out when you reached the high notes in the BMTL intro. Don't try to reach for the notes, stretch out your neck/tilt your head up, or think that you're going catastrophically high. All of the above will make you go flat and/or choke up. Support yourself by pulling your diaphragm (i.e. stomach muscles) in as you go higher. Stand on two feet, don't sit. (And seriously? Think down. Like you're sitting on the pitch, not reaching for it) Then you'll have better support. Support = more strength, less flat notes, and more accuracy.

I would check out the Advice for Fellow Singers thread in the Completely Off-Topic forum; there's LOADS of good advice in there.

You're off to a good start. Every singer needs to aspire to be better than she is now; work at it, and you'll get better and better before you know it. :)
thanks bunches! I saw you posted in the "Advice for Fellow Singers" thread and wanted to know what you think. I'll re-record tomorrow following the adivce you gave me.*waves* *can't wait until she can have a siggy*

So I really want to hear some of your songs...but it keeps saying it can't find the URL. I both clicked on the links and copied and pasted them into my browser...I don't know if it's my comp that's the problem, of the website itself, but I just thought I'd let you know...

So I really want to hear some of your songs...but it keeps saying it can't find the URL. I both clicked on the links and copied and pasted them into my browser...I don't know if it's my comp that's the problem, of the website itself, but I just thought I'd let you know...
NEW SONGS OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hello guy!
Congratulations for your nice work!

hello guy!
Congratulations for your nice work!

hey thanks..but I'm kind of a girl ;)

can anyone convert .aup into .mp3? :confused:

totally random poetry:


Blame it on your momma
Blame it on bad karma
I don’t need your drama
I have better things to do with my time

Frequent lairs
Retail buyers
All lost in their desires
And the youth wants to be like that
So let them be

On the outside I’m crying
On the inside I’m dying
To everyone I’m lying
Fake a smile
Look your best
Come on girl this is your test
Don’t make a fool outa me.


Take back your ring
(I don’t need it)
I don’t need shiny things
(To make me happy)
That doesn’t prove what your love will bring

I see it in your eyes
A fear you can’t deny
It makes you want to die
No one loves you more than I do

Come with me
Take my hand
Can you see what I see?
I’ll be your only friend

What the fuck is your problem?
How can I help you?
No ma’am I don’t know them.

new song mmk?

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Critiquing as requested :)

Don't try to reach for the notes, stretch out your neck/tilt your head up, or think that you're going catastrophically high. All of the above will make you go flat and/or choke up. Support yourself by pulling your diaphragm (i.e. stomach muscles) in as you go higher. Stand on two feet, don't sit. (And seriously? Think down. Like you're sitting on the pitch, not reaching for it) Support = more strength, less flat notes, and more accuracy.



Good advice there, Katya, you remind me of my old singing teacher. She used to blame my imagination and started yelling at me that high notes don't exist and I looked at her blankly...

Hmm...What could I add to what Katya said?...you need to work on support and breathing...imagine a circle type shape in you throat if you can. Now imagine an air tube runs through this circle. You don't want the tube to expand as you increase the air flow. Use your lower stomach muscles to push the air through that small tube and remember your posture, keep your chin down and keep your ribcage high, this way your upper voice will be so much more focused and you'll sound so much better than you do already ;)

The potential is obviously there, and the confidence, all you need is more technique which only comes with practice.

Keep it coming, Courtney, you rock!:D

Good advice there, Katya, you remind me of my old singing teacher. She used to blame my imagination and started yelling at me that high notes don't exist and I looked at her blankly...

Hmm...What could I add to what Katya said?...you need to work on support and breathing...imagine a circle type shape in you throat if you can. Now imagine an air tube runs through this circle. You don't want the tube to expand as you increase the air flow. Use your lower stomach muscles to push the air through that small tube and remember your posture, keep your chin down and keep your ribcage high, this way your upper voice will be so much more focused and you'll sound so much better than you do already ;)

The potential is obviously there, and the confidence, all you need is more technique which only comes with practice.

Keep it coming, Courtney, you rock!:D

ee! new replys! :D thanks so much for the advice! I'll definitly be trying that thanks! :D