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Old 05-24-2008, 05:44 PM   #51 (permalink)
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looks at Dragoknight...
*maniacle laughter*

HEH HEH... that is all

i would post more songs.... if i could write more! I've been so busy lately... and all the new ones I've tried to make have been kinda crappy... or turn into something other than my vision... the songs kinda write themselves and then get meanings after I'm trying to shy away from my Paramore-ish streak and get back into more artistic stuff. I have a couple of unfinished ones crying out to me from within my notebooks... perhaps I shall finish them... lol, Including Marketable Dreams thats REALLY overdue
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Old 06-25-2008, 09:15 PM   #52 (permalink)
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Your writing is fantastic - very vivid, original, and inspiring. I am already a HUGE fan of your work.

This song belong is my favorite of yours:
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Fallen;
Angel of respite,
Confined to earth with broken wings,
Resigned to life with broken dreams,
You’re all too much like me,

Enticing, thoughtfully,
The murky corners of my mind,
An effort to convince me,
That I will fly again,
When I’ve spent so much time,
Convincing myself,
That I will only fly in death,

(Chorus x2)
Fallen,
A dream of life,
Can I be saved?
Will you save me tonight?
Fallen angel of respite

Fallen,
A dream of life

A pulsing plea to make you see,
This world is not how it should be,
My mind is broken, like your wings,
Tired from trying to fly when,
All that’s left is tattered fragments,
Pieces broken and waiting for someone,
Like you,
To put them back together,
So for a time,
You can fly,
I can live...

But all respites have an end,
And we’ll both fall again,

(Chorus x2)

Fallen,
A dream of life.



This is a slow, rockish song. Kinda liike...Broken by Seether and Amy. Except maybe a little more calmish. The spoken structure of the lyrics is similar to Solitude by Ev.

This idea has been rolling around in my head for a couple days, so i just whipped it up haha. I am not sure about the chorus though.
I can quite literally hear the song and the beat in my head instantly, sung by Amy. You have a gift for writing, that much is certain. Please, please post more. You are a very talented writer X3
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Old 06-28-2008, 02:36 AM   #53 (permalink)
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Yay! Thank you so much! I've been dying to write recently but I'm having some writer's block and it's driving me crazy!! Hopefully I'll be back with some new writing soon!!

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Well, here's a new song! I was having an all-out crying fit when I wrote it...so...it's kinda dramatic. Haha.


I’m nauseas,
Because I’m so afraid,
That our love is dying, slowly,
And these tears are invisible to you,

You grasp my hand and whisper
You love me,
Looking deep inside my soul,
And my heart throbs, unconvinced
Did you feel my spirit reach out to you?
I smiled for you, to hold back my tears,
Why do I feel like I’m falling away,
Why do I feel like you don’t even notice?

(Chorus)
Tear after shameless tear,
Wipe the doubt away,
Cleansing, purging pain
Wash clean the path
To a better tomorrow
That leaves me unburned,
Leaves me loved

I always thought we’d be in love forever,
And it sickens me,
To think our dreams have lied,
Have I changed so much?
Have we changed so much?
I take a breath,
So deeply that I want to scream
My god, what’s wrong with me?
Why do I hurt so much?

(Chorus)
Tear after shameless tear,
Wipe the doubt away,
Cleansing, purging pain
Wash clean the path
To a better tomorrow
That leaves me unburned,
Leaves me loved

Losing ground for hours now,
Lying in bed, trying hard
To let the last tears dry,
But you’re not beside me,
To reassure me,
Because you just don’t notice,
These tears are invisible to you,
But I trust our dreams will carry us,
We’ll be in love forever,
Just promise,
That you’ll dry my tears someday…
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wow:3 this new song is very beautiful and heartfelt, i love the lines:
"And my heart throbs, unconvinced
Did you feel my spirit reach out to you?
I smiled for you, to hold back my tears"

I know that feeling, like you're desperately reaching out for something, and it feels like you're being ripped apart, but the person you reach for doesn't even seem to notice or care, and there's nothing you can do.

Keep up the great work! I'm glad to be back at evboard to read your stuff!
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first song in a long time, and it's a very deep song, well done. I can't decide which bit was my favourite.
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We Have Hope

I wrote this with the organization "To Write Love On Her Arms" in mind. It is something that has really moved me and inspired me.





Pain is all around,
The room fills with us,
The hopeless, the lost, the broken
The ones who fell,
And hit hard enough to ask for help,
I see your broken faces,
Calling out for love,
Searching the crowd for hope,
I want to reach your soul,
I want to show you hope,

Because tomorrow will be hard,
And the weeks to come,
Might break your spirit down,
But remember, we have hope
When nothing seems to see us through,
We have hope

Another day of aching,
And control is wearing thin,
I wish that I could promise,
That tomorrow you will win,
The truth is,
This road is long and trying,
Some days will test your will,
But I can be your strength,
I’ll tell you it’s ok to hurt today,
And our tears will get you through

Because tomorrow will be hard,
And the weeks to come,
Might break your spirit down,
But remember, we have hope
When nothing seems to see us through,
We have hope

Search yourself for hope,
In the form of strength or love or joy,
That tomorrow might shine through,
You are stronger than you know,
And more found than you are lost,
You can rise from the ashes,
And know yourself again
Asking for help
Is a virtue that is born of weakness,
And delivered of strength,
You have strength,

Because tomorrow will be hard,
And the weeks to come,
Might break your spirit down,
But remember, we have hope
When nothing seems to see us through,
We have hope
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Sweetest Confession

This one's pretty straight-forward.

Your sweet voice travels in the dark,
Drowning out distractions
To pierce me softly in the heart,
“I love you, Ali”
A messenger of sincerity,
A peaceful smile sings my love for you
Oh, I know,
I know that in this life
This feeling is the sweetest confession,
True selflessness unveiled to me,
Learning to love you was the ultimate lesson
All taciturn and thought stricken,
I see how loving you has made me wise,
Yet has taken me back to a child-like innocence
A carefree self-knowledge behind my eyes,
I give myself to you,
Heart, soul, and body,
For you never fail my confidence in you,
Your expectant touch only reaffirms my trust,
Oh, I know,
That in this life,
This feeling is the sweetest confession.
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Search yourself for hope,
In the form of strength or love or joy,
That tomorrow might shine through,
You are stronger than you know,
And more found than you are lost,
You can rise from the ashes,
And know yourself again
Asking for help
Is a virtue that is born of weakness,
And delivered of strength,
You have strength,
Just WOW......
I love this part.
Its so possitive, and its like if you look deep inside
your self, you can find all that hope, strength, and all
you need.
Finding your self, and knowing who you really are is what matters.
You are a sensationall writer, and I honor, cherish, every word is
just what I have learned a long time ago, and I can relate to this
section so very well, this is exactly how I feel.
I love the way you get right into it, and describe with such detail, and its like you can get a feel for every single word!
Never stop writting, I Love your work, and you should be Very proud of it!
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Thank you Sweet Tigger! Your comments always make me feel better! That song is one that means a lot to me...and was meant to be inspirational and helpful to those in need. I want the world to hear it someday :P Thanks again for your comment <3
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