My Immortal - Vocal Bass Part?? - EvBoard

Cyle · 09-03-2006, 02:38 AM

Sometime around May I want to sing a cover for "My Immortal" at this concert thing that my school does every year, but I want to split it into two parts: a female part (that would be the original song) and a male part (a seperate bass part). I would sing the bass. Anyway, I came up with a quick bass part and added it to the ORIGINAL "My Immortal" and now I need some of you to tell me what you think of it. =/ And if you don't like it, tell me.

Here It Is!

Haha, if you do like it, on the other hand, I'll have to find someone nearby who can sing somewhat similarly to Amy. =P Thanks =)!

Envyway · 09-03-2006, 10:17 AM

I think it sounds really good! i was expecting it sound weird but it didnt. i think you got a bit weak towards the end though. oly one thing though, i cannot stand that version of my immortal :P

GOOD JOB DUDE>

Adrey · 09-03-2006, 12:06 PM

oh wow! that was really good! You know what? Now I feel like composing a four part SATB a cappella verrsion of the song... wish me luck!

Darko · 09-03-2006, 12:35 PM

I really like it! It sounded a little busy with the "I would give the very breath from my chest..." part. Maybe to an audience that didn't know the song... they wouldn't notice it - I was probably focusing on the lyrics too much.

It kinda gave the song a new meaning... like the person on the otherside felt exactly the same way. I cried a little.

giourkokolimeni · 09-03-2006, 12:42 PM

WOW!!!

I loved it!!!I've heard it about 9 times and I think it's great!I almost cried the first time I heard it.Really...!

GREAT JOB!!!

~Elina

**Nyx** · 09-03-2006, 12:51 PM

Ooh, I liked it a lot. Except I'm going to agree with Darko, that part in the beginning feels a bit busy/crowded.

Otherwise, besides giving the song even more emotional strength, the two vocal parts also go well together, they sound pleasing to the ear. Well, at least they sound pleasing to my ears, hehe. I enjoyed it a lot. Good luck with finding the right girl to perform this with.

Cyle · 09-03-2006, 02:03 PM

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Good luck with finding the right girl to perform this with.

Haha, yeah. That's going to be so difficult. I have a couple girls in mind, though.

Thanks you guys! I think I'll work on it a bit more, find someone who can play the piano well (maybe try to mix and combine this piano version with the newer versions), and talk to the choir directors about performing it. Wish me luck, lol.

Darko · 09-03-2006, 02:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Cyle

Haha, yeah. That's going to be so difficult. I have a couple girls in mind, though.

Thanks you guys! I think I'll work on it a bit more, find someone who can play the piano well (maybe try to mix and combine this piano version with the newer versions), and talk to the choir directors about performing it. Wish me luck, lol.

Good luck Cyle! I'm sure you don't need it.

When you perform this there will not be a dry eye in the HOUSE.

09-03-2006, 02:38 AM	#1 (permalink)
Cyle Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Sacramento, CA, USA Age: 19 Posts: 48 Points: 0.00 Bank: 189.50 Total Points: 189.50 Donate	My Immortal - Vocal Bass Part?? Sometime around May I want to sing a cover for "My Immortal" at this concert thing that my school does every year, but I want to split it into two parts: a female part (that would be the original song) and a male part (a seperate bass part). I would sing the bass. Anyway, I came up with a quick bass part and added it to the ORIGINAL "My Immortal" and now I need some of you to tell me what you think of it. =/ And if you don't like it, tell me. Here It Is! Haha, if you do like it, on the other hand, I'll have to find someone nearby who can sing somewhat similarly to Amy. =P Thanks =)! __________________ Oh, Cyle.

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Darko Poetry Queen Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: England Age: 18 Posts: 1,124 Points: 8,234.83 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 8,234.83 Donate	I really like it! It sounded a little busy with the "I would give the very breath from my chest..." part. Maybe to an audience that didn't know the song... they wouldn't notice it - I was probably focusing on the lyrics too much. It kinda gave the song a new meaning... like the person on the otherside felt exactly the same way. I cried a little. __________________ .stretch it like it's a birth squeeze.

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giourkokolimeni Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: ~In my dreams~ Posts: 93 Points: 1,099.02 Bank: 0.06 Total Points: 1,099.08 Donate	WOW!!! I loved it!!!I've heard it about 9 times and I think it's great!I almost cried the first time I heard it.Really...! GREAT JOB!!! ~Elina __________________ The Evanescence Greek Fan Club

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Nyx Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Uhm... can't remember. Too much rum. Age: 18 Posts: 804 Points: 3.99 Bank: 129,964.22 Total Points: 129,968.21 Donate $\m/ - Fanat1c$	Ooh, I liked it a lot. Except I'm going to agree with Darko, that part in the beginning feels a bit busy/crowded. Otherwise, besides giving the song even more emotional strength, the two vocal parts also go well together, they sound pleasing to the ear. Well, at least they sound pleasing to my ears, hehe. I enjoyed it a lot. Good luck with finding the right girl to perform this with. __________________ I have a reputation beyond repute. Shizzle.

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Envyway Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: United Kingdom Age: 20 Posts: 74 Points: 78.32 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 78.32 Donate	I think it sounds really good! i was expecting it sound weird but it didnt. i think you got a bit weak towards the end though. oly one thing though, i cannot stand that version of my immortal :P GOOD JOB DUDE>

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Adrey n00blet Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Tucson, AZ Posts: 20 Points: 291.79 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 291.79 Donate	oh wow! that was really good! You know what? Now I feel like composing a four part SATB a cappella verrsion of the song... wish me luck!

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