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Jenny · 08-28-2006, 01:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Tourniqueted

whoa...I love rymes!!!

Reminded me Everybody's fool and Going under at the same time!!!

And... feministic one!

OMG, is it Rioterra's influence?..

no... it's my friend's influence

he treats me in such way =(

And I wrote one more poem today... It's not even a poem, it's a kind of lyrics...

The days are passing
The world is changing
And what about me?
Am I the same?

Oh, so much feelings
Going to nowhere
And the mirror's showing me a stranger
Why can't I remember myself?
What should I do to start living?

Time is passing lazy
And for me it stopped
The noise behind the door...
And silence inside...

Oh, so much feelings
Going to nowhere
And the mirror's showing me a stranger
Why can't I remember myself?
What should I do to start living?

My soul is sleeping tight
Listening to lullaby of life...
Wny cannot I awake?

Oh, so much feelings
Going to nowhere
And the mirror's showing me a stranger
Why can't I remember myself?
What should I do to start living?

Oh, so much feelings
Going to nowhere
And the mirror's showing me a stranger
Why can't I remember myself?
So soon it will be too late to start...

Varro · 08-29-2006, 01:06 AM

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Originally posted by Jenny
My soul is sleeping tight
Listening to lullaby of life...
Wny cannot I awake?

I know this feeling. This lyrics is very near for me...I like it!
*Waiting more poems

Tourniqueted · 08-30-2006, 03:54 PM

An illustation to "Silence of the Ground"

(I suffered a GREAT DEAL with damned downloading!)

Jenny · 09-01-2006, 07:20 AM

Walking in nothing - about that condition when you think: my life wil never be better and you're tired of everything

I am lying on the altar
And going to come into the grave
I know I'll soon be in the heaven far
Though I did suicide myself betrayed

Falling in the dark
Drowning in my dream
Frozen in the ice of my estrangement
Loving the world that will never rise again

Swallowed up in your all - absorbing selfishness
Looking for your hand in the
Chaos in the world around me
I was so tired of
Looking for some light
In darkness of your soul
That i left
All my feelings
Far behind...

Loving you - about loving the worst enemy...

I linger in my dream and step into my core
I don't want to wake up but can't sleep any more
I have to kill my dream to see my hollow room
And world that's full of monsters and of you

Chasing my life and haunting my dreams
I've nearly forgotten the taste of your poison
Please leave me in my refuge and don't come any more
Please don't destroy the world I lived before

I hoped that you forgot me and it was my mistake
And I know that you wanted me to take
And leave me in the world you usually live...

It's name is HELL so I'll NEVER FORGIVE YOU!!!

Now I see what happens here
And you still want to leave me there
And though my path lies in the dark
Don't push me there!

**just an illusion** · 09-19-2006, 08:34 AM

ну, а где что-ниб новое? ))

*мечтает уметь писать стихи*

Jenny · 09-19-2006, 08:38 AM

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Originally Posted by just an illusion

íó, à ãäå ÷òî-íèá íîâîå? ))

*ìå÷òàåò óìåòü ïèñàòü ñòèõè*

Èëëþçèÿ, ñåãîäíÿ æå çàïîùó... ß äóìàëà, ìîè ñòèøêè íèêîìó íàôèã íå íóæíû, âîò è ñèæó áåç äåëà

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Jenny Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 439 Points: 287.17 Bank: 3.04 Total Points: 290.21 Donate	*Walking in nothing* - about that condition when you think: my life wil never be better and you're tired of everything I am lying on the altar And going to come into the grave I know I'll soon be in the heaven far Though I did suicide myself betrayed Falling in the dark Drowning in my dream Frozen in the ice of my estrangement Loving the world that will never rise again Swallowed up in your all - absorbing selfishness Looking for your hand in the Chaos in the world around me I was so tired of Looking for some light In darkness of your soul That i left All my feelings Far behind... *Loving you* - about loving the worst enemy... I linger in my dream and step into my core I don't want to wake up but can't sleep any more I have to kill my dream to see my hollow room And world that's full of monsters and of you Chasing my life and haunting my dreams I've nearly forgotten the taste of your poison Please leave me in my refuge and don't come any more Please don't destroy the world I lived before I hoped that you forgot me and it was my mistake And I know that you wanted me to take And leave me in the world you usually live... It's name is HELL so I'll NEVER FORGIVE YOU!!! Now I see what happens here And you still want to leave me there And though my path lies in the dark Don't push me there!

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