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My poems
I thought I'd share some of my poems here since I like to share my writing and this seems to be the place. XP Anyway, I wrote this poem back when I had severe daddy issues, it was kind of my way to escape. (I use poetry to let out bottled up feelings and stuff) I hope you like it.
I know we've both changed through the years But now I don't get a listening ear You've changed so much from when I was little and you loved me then At once I thought I knew you But now I think I see right through you I don't sem to be much to you now Do you love me? I can't tell how I'm so incompetent to you Is our family bond through? You once loved me and claimed me daughter But now I can't muster much to call you father To you I'm a moron nothing but trouble I'm beginning to wonder if I have grounds for rebuttle I always seem to be in your way Every day with you is a rainy day You're never there or by my side You're not the same father I used to abide Do you know you're the seed of my depression? This dark sad opression Daddy dearest I hope you see How you've changed and what you've done to your family and me You do anything to avoid us Then you pretend to love us and toy with us So once again daddy dearest the man I once held nearest I hope you've seen how you changed And everything... You've done to me.. ~Daddy Dearest~ |
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My poems Post #2 |
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n00blet
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Austria
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I think that is awesome.
I feel exactly the same to my father, and I can totally understand you! I write poems, too to express my feelings, but my poems doesn't sound as good as mine =) |
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My poems Post #3 |
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My poems.
I made a thread just like this in the past, but that was a long time ago and I put up what, one or two poems? Well, this one will have more of my works (I haven't really written a poem in forever so this will be my old works) than the last time.
Well, if I remember correctly, this one was a project in English class (she didn't even read it. She read everyone elses'..) last year: They had nothing left to look behind This couple walked with hope in mind They lost their lives but kept their love Together they walked under the sky above They had to leave that faithful day And find a new life while walking the highway They didn't know their fate, they didn't care As they walked through the frigid winter air The maid she wept at the loss of home The home she had was a tranquil dome The fire killed all that was left in life But the woman walked with feelings of strife Her husband he walked her hand in his They had each other which gave them bliss As the snow fell and the air chilled their bones They loathed the peole that still had homes Envy burned their souls like fire Their situation was very dire If they didn't change their ways Death and doom would darken their days Like a storm came a car from out afar It sent them shivers that set their souls ajar The car came and then balked The man in the driver's seat sulked "Need a lift?", asked the man in dismay As the snow thundered down and began to lay The man and woman entered the car As the smell of smoke drifted from afar The man drove off at a high speed The ice on the road, the man didn't heed The car swerved with incredible speed The couple screamed as they clung to the seat The driver's evil laughter seemed to increase the heat Then with a deafening crack the car Flew up and took a new track The couple dove out as the car was on fire The supernova burned as the couple perspired They saw there was more to life than home They walked the road and together they roamed Noone knows the fate of the couple Some say they froze, but others rebuttle Whatever the fate, the two learned that day That hope and love keep danger at bay I do know though that the couple walked The ice clung from them, but they never stopped There was nothing now and they couldn't be topped They trudged on and down the road As they heard the wreck behind being towed Now as the wicked man was slain The couple trudged their future quite plain They didn't have a place to go The couple was found buried in snow They walked from tree to tree But now the couple was finally, truely, free. I gave the teacher an incomplete version, of course. XD Well, one more for today, this one was inspired by the sheer stupidity I see all over nowadays. It just seems to spread, doesn't it? : What's so special about me? People don't give the time of day to me What's so special about anybody? The world is a big place But differentiating we seem to misplace The world's turning into a disaster And we're degenerating faster and faster People all want to be like on MTV People don't even have their own identity People are either emo or gangster Every student now has to be an immature prankster Anyone with their own style or way Are shoved around and pushed away The world is going down quite fast Reasonable people should enjoy it while it lasts Variety among people is rare to none There's usually only one person, just one Who has dignity or love or their own way Most people see celebrities and obey The useful people feel like wasted space Whenever the true useless people push them out of place Acts of stupidity rule the day Who has any IQ points anymore anyway? Since when is it cool to be stupid? Other people now make me feel inhuman There's no place for me in today's society People now see me and dismiss me So now I sit and write today Hoping and praying for a better day I know this is impossible now Because a good world ended a long time ago Now as I drown into myself alone I cry for the good world that was once home Now fitting in is how everyone's bossed As I dwell and cry upon a variety.... ...Oh so lost... |
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