|01-10-2008, 06:44 PM||My poems Post #1|
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I thought I'd share some of my poems here since I like to share my writing and this seems to be the place. XP Anyway, I wrote this poem back when I had severe daddy issues, it was kind of my way to escape. (I use poetry to let out bottled up feelings and stuff) I hope you like it.
I know we've both changed through the years
But now I don't get a listening ear
You've changed so much from when I was little and you loved me then
At once I thought I knew you
But now I think I see right through you
I don't sem to be much to you now
Do you love me? I can't tell how
I'm so incompetent to you
Is our family bond through?
You once loved me and claimed me daughter
But now I can't muster much to call you father
To you I'm a moron nothing but trouble
I'm beginning to wonder if I have grounds for rebuttle
I always seem to be in your way
Every day with you is a rainy day
You're never there or by my side
You're not the same father I used to abide
Do you know you're the seed of my depression?
This dark sad opression
Daddy dearest I hope you see
How you've changed and what you've done to your family and me
You do anything to avoid us
Then you pretend to love us and toy with us
So once again daddy dearest the man I once held nearest
I hope you've seen how you changed
And everything... You've done to me..
|01-20-2008, 02:15 PM||My poems Post #2|
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I think that is awesome.
I feel exactly the same to my father, and I can totally understand you! I write poems, too to express my feelings, but my poems doesn't sound as good as mine =)
|07-28-2008, 09:36 AM||My poems Post #3|
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I made a thread just like this in the past, but that was a long time ago and I put up what, one or two poems? Well, this one will have more of my works (I haven't really written a poem in forever so this will be my old works) than the last time.
Well, if I remember correctly, this one was a project in English class (she didn't even read it. She read everyone elses'..) last year:
They had nothing left to look behind
This couple walked with hope in mind
They lost their lives but kept their love
Together they walked under the sky above
They had to leave that faithful day
And find a new life while walking the highway
They didn't know their fate, they didn't care
As they walked through the frigid winter air
The maid she wept at the loss of home
The home she had was a tranquil dome
The fire killed all that was left in life
But the woman walked with feelings of strife
Her husband he walked her hand in his
They had each other which gave them bliss
As the snow fell and the air chilled their bones
They loathed the peole that still had homes
Envy burned their souls like fire
Their situation was very dire
If they didn't change their ways
Death and doom would darken their days
Like a storm came a car from out afar
It sent them shivers that set their souls ajar
The car came and then balked
The man in the driver's seat sulked
"Need a lift?", asked the man in dismay
As the snow thundered down and began to lay
The man and woman entered the car
As the smell of smoke drifted from afar
The man drove off at a high speed
The ice on the road, the man didn't heed
The car swerved with incredible speed
The couple screamed as they clung to the seat
The driver's evil laughter seemed to increase the heat
Then with a deafening crack the car
Flew up and took a new track
The couple dove out as the car was on fire
The supernova burned as the couple perspired
They saw there was more to life than home
They walked the road and together they roamed
Noone knows the fate of the couple
Some say they froze, but others rebuttle
Whatever the fate, the two learned that day
That hope and love keep danger at bay
I do know though that the couple walked
The ice clung from them, but they never stopped
There was nothing now and they couldn't be topped
They trudged on and down the road
As they heard the wreck behind being towed
Now as the wicked man was slain
The couple trudged their future quite plain
They didn't have a place to go
The couple was found buried in snow
They walked from tree to tree
But now the couple was finally, truely, free.
I gave the teacher an incomplete version, of course. XD Well, one more for today, this one was inspired by the sheer stupidity I see all over nowadays. It just seems to spread, doesn't it? :
What's so special about me?
People don't give the time of day to me
What's so special about anybody?
The world is a big place
But differentiating we seem to misplace
The world's turning into a disaster
And we're degenerating faster and faster
People all want to be like on MTV
People don't even have their own identity
People are either emo or gangster
Every student now has to be an immature prankster
Anyone with their own style or way
Are shoved around and pushed away
The world is going down quite fast
Reasonable people should enjoy it while it lasts
Variety among people is rare to none
There's usually only one person, just one
Who has dignity or love or their own way
Most people see celebrities and obey
The useful people feel like wasted space
Whenever the true useless people push them out of place
Acts of stupidity rule the day
Who has any IQ points anymore anyway?
Since when is it cool to be stupid?
Other people now make me feel inhuman
There's no place for me in today's society
People now see me and dismiss me
So now I sit and write today
Hoping and praying for a better day
I know this is impossible now
Because a good world ended a long time ago
Now as I drown into myself alone
I cry for the good world that was once home
Now fitting in is how everyone's bossed
As I dwell and cry upon a variety....
...Oh so lost...
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