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Old 01-10-2008, 06:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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My poems

I thought I'd share some of my poems here since I like to share my writing and this seems to be the place. XP Anyway, I wrote this poem back when I had severe daddy issues, it was kind of my way to escape. (I use poetry to let out bottled up feelings and stuff) I hope you like it.



I know we've both changed through the years
But now I don't get a listening ear
You've changed so much from when I was little and you loved me then
At once I thought I knew you
But now I think I see right through you
I don't sem to be much to you now
Do you love me? I can't tell how
I'm so incompetent to you
Is our family bond through?
You once loved me and claimed me daughter
But now I can't muster much to call you father
To you I'm a moron nothing but trouble
I'm beginning to wonder if I have grounds for rebuttle
I always seem to be in your way
Every day with you is a rainy day
You're never there or by my side
You're not the same father I used to abide
Do you know you're the seed of my depression?
This dark sad opression
Daddy dearest I hope you see
How you've changed and what you've done to your family and me
You do anything to avoid us
Then you pretend to love us and toy with us
So once again daddy dearest the man I once held nearest
I hope you've seen how you changed
And everything... You've done to me..

~Daddy Dearest~
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Old 01-20-2008, 02:15 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I think that is awesome.
I feel exactly the same to my father, and I can totally understand you! I write poems, too to express my feelings, but my poems doesn't sound as good as mine =)
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