My song - Darkness - EvBoard

gothic_romance · 11-06-2007, 09:43 AM

Ok, I decided to share one of my 100 songs with you. Tell me what you think

I don't know how it happened
I'm just sick of waiting for better times
When I look in the mirror, I see your face
Noone hear me crying
Inside of me

Receiving suffering sorrow
Never wanted it to be so bad
I scream and noone can hear me.
Crying, bleeding but noone cares
Loosing my mind of being here

Breaking the mirror, seeing you
Your eyes are burned inside of me
All I wanna do is to hide in the darkness
And wait for the death of my suffer.
Sacrifice will never end...

Nothing special.
Thanks for reading.

xxx

Apholos · 11-07-2007, 10:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gothic_romance

Breaking the mirror, seeing you
Your eyes are burned inside of me
All I wanna do is to hide in the darkness
And wait for the death of my suffer.
Sacrifice will never end...

xxx

Those words remember me one thing: 'Mercy I want, Not sacrifice'. All we need is Love.
The question is: where to find it?
You only need to see the sky... and If you find what I mean... you will be one of the happiest persons in the Universe.
By the way, very nice poem.

gothic_romance · 11-08-2007, 06:45 AM

Thank you. =)

11-06-2007, 09:43 AM	#1 (permalink)
gothic_romance Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Slovenia Posts: 38 Points: 6,321.47 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 6,321.47 Donate	My song - Darkness Ok, I decided to share one of my 100 songs with you. Tell me what you think I don't know how it happened I'm just sick of waiting for better times When I look in the mirror, I see your face Noone hear me crying Inside of me Receiving suffering sorrow Never wanted it to be so bad I scream and noone can hear me. Crying, bleeding but noone cares Loosing my mind of being here Breaking the mirror, seeing you Your eyes are burned inside of me All I wanna do is to hide in the darkness And wait for the death of my suffer. Sacrifice will never end... Nothing special. Thanks for reading. xxx __________________ Evanescence. Burning candles are dying silently... <3 Last edited by gothic_romance : 11-06-2007 at 09:48 AM.

11-08-2007, 06:45 AM	#3 (permalink)
gothic_romance Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Slovenia Posts: 38 Points: 6,321.47 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 6,321.47 Donate	Thank you. =) __________________ Evanescence. Burning candles are dying silently... <3

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