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11-06-2007, 10:43 AM
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My song - Darkness
Ok, I decided to share one of my 100 songs with you. Tell me what you think
 I don't know how it happened I'm just sick of waiting for better times When I look in the mirror, I see your face Noone hear me crying Inside of me Receiving suffering sorrow Never wanted it to be so bad I scream and noone can hear me. Crying, bleeding but noone cares Loosing my mind of being here Breaking the mirror, seeing you Your eyes are burned inside of me All I wanna do is to hide in the darkness And wait for the death of my suffer. Sacrifice will never end... Nothing special. Thanks for reading. xxx Last edited by gothic_romance : 11-06-2007 at 10:48 AM |
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11-07-2007, 11:31 PM
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The question is: where to find it? You only need to see the sky... and If you find what I mean... you will be one of the happiest persons in the Universe. By the way, very nice poem. |
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