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Old 11-06-2007, 10:43 AM   My song - Darkness Post #1 (permalink)
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My song - Darkness

Ok, I decided to share one of my 100 songs with you. Tell me what you think

I don't know how it happened
I'm just sick of waiting for better times
When I look in the mirror, I see your face
Noone hear me crying
Inside of me

Receiving suffering sorrow
Never wanted it to be so bad
I scream and noone can hear me.
Crying, bleeding but noone cares
Loosing my mind of being here

Breaking the mirror, seeing you
Your eyes are burned inside of me
All I wanna do is to hide in the darkness
And wait for the death of my suffer.
Sacrifice will never end...


Nothing special.
Thanks for reading.

xxx

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Old 11-07-2007, 11:31 PM   My song - Darkness Post #2 (permalink)
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Breaking the mirror, seeing you
Your eyes are burned inside of me
All I wanna do is to hide in the darkness
And wait for the death of my suffer.
Sacrifice will never end...


xxx
Those words remember me one thing: 'Mercy I want, Not sacrifice'. All we need is Love.
The question is: where to find it?
You only need to see the sky... and If you find what I mean... you will be one of the happiest persons in the Universe.
By the way, very nice poem.
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