umm ya, if I could rename it that would be great

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Under the Current
Where I can, Where I'm cold
Well I'm myself
Well you're just so sick of it
Well can I help it?
It's their time to break it
Whoah Whoah Whoah
I think(time) I think it's time
We really got back to the start
Who tore us apart
My suicide
That coincides their lies
It's breaking me down
pulling me down to the ground
I've gotta fight before I die

CHORUS~ Oh, Well,
You never even tried
to recognize my guilt
I really thought you could've been
Not for me...yeah

With my lips I kissed you
I took away his breath too
With every star that fills that sky
You glow brighter and brighter everyday
Now down I go~

CHORUS

With one little glance I'll die
I remember when we used to stare into eachothers eyes
If I look away, well surely, I should die

CHORUS

Oh, Well,
you never even tried
Are you really sure you're over me now? Can this really be the end?

CHORUS

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Rakka(Fallen)
Wings stretch wide,
ready to fly,
Just one touch can say so much
The feathers shiver
Lips quiver

Day she finds a dot connected
Stumbling, Ignorant Bliss
She's Unaware how fake it is
She sells her soul for just one kiss

CHORUS~ I repent(I have sinned)
Someday she knows(she's fallen)
And only I can save her
Oh how could I have been so sold
Oh, so easily?

Day she finds all sweet nothings
It's true she's easy
Has she ever said no?
You can't love a mind you've never known
But her fingers are outstreched and fixed,
on meeting something that doesnt exist

CHORUS

His fingers open
Drop Drop Like porcelain she drops
and the peices glitter on the floor down in that dirty salty ocean

CHORUS

Wings are charred
her heart is barred(locked)
and the key distorted with pain
burning bones
Ignorance
broken hopes
Ignorance
She Falls

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I love Rakka! It sounds like it would be an incredible song. I'm definitely getting an Evanescence vibe from it, like it would match perfectly with their style of music. I was going to try and pick a favorite line but I can't! I like all of it, as a whole. Beautiful!

thank you, thank you! My friend and I are making music for one song that I wrote, I havent posted it yet, but I will probably soon!

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Oh! nice lyrics!
Good job!

I'm definitely interested to hear it! I'll keep an eye out for it.

posting more soon! i was sad because i didnt have my computer for a while, but now! im back to wreak havoc on evboard!!! MWUAH HA!!!

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Eyes Open(Evergreen)

Your words sound like pictures in my mind(scream so clear)
And I hear those breathing colours(whisper to me, whispering)

Oh So Blind
Like screens before your eyes
I bury, I bury the doubt
But you're coming back, and pulling it straight out
Screaming to the deaf just doesnt work
I bury, I bury

I'm sure a rose is better than an evergreen
but who is there for you the seasons in between?

Oh So Blind
Like screens before your eyes
I bury, I bury the doubt
But you're coming back and pulling it straight out
Is her hand a better fit than mine?
I bury, I bury

Oh how the darkness shrouds the light(so easily?)
I see
from you, I've learned that he was there all along(from bitter soil a blossom blooms)
I hold sheer bliss, and together, we'll be evergreen

Oh So Blind
Do I have to stare to make you see?
I'm in love with you, I hope you won't mind
EYES OPEN

I bury, I bury
down deep
But please, oh, don't forget me
You'll remember all those memories we never shared
And find another evergreen

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Here is the one me and my friend are writing music for, it sounds pretty good so far. It's really slow and soothing, hence a lullaby. We're doing it with piano and at the beginning it sounds sorta like rain. We're also going to put some bass in there later on. If we ever get around to finishing it, I'll post a link.

Cityscape Lullaby

It's like the complete, sluggish stillness after the storm
No calm(nothing)
Just everything, I wonder how I even stand it
The hourglass I'm clutching to
Pray that it would stop(at the perfect second)
Complete ennui that's pinned me down
like a tiny doll
A hole that's holding me together
Only cuz it's searing to burst through

A culture revolution
Like vines that burn
Stretching across the collapsing city
A ripping sound, that pricks your ears
and sometimes I know
that you exist
Hey, are you there?
I love you still.
You'd think I'd feel betrayed, and maybe I do
But babe, my feelings never swayed

I can read you like a book
Written in a language I don't speak
You're a messy little blemish
On my already horrid face
So I'll just hide you away
And at night, everythings the same

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