fair enough, personal things can be hard to talk about.

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This is my life! And there is nothing you can do about it!
To think that life is enough, is to be killed by your own existence.

Bells Minas La Sinka

aha, don't ask me what it means, it's not actually in another language or anything, it's actually an anagram of parts of my name. I guess it could mean commitment or love without the downers(jealousy, cheating, fall-outs, ect)

Chorus-
Chime Chime
Bells Minas La Sinka
That's all I wanted
Bells Minas La Sinka
We're stuck now, we're haunted

Look out the window
And all you'll see is more buildings
Try to fill up the silence
And it just gets more hollow
Fix a broken heart
And you're the leftover pieces
Fill a room with people
You're forever alone(or And you'll still be alone, whichever sounds better)

-Chorus-

Jesus Christ has saved my life
Blessed me with his blood and his strife
When even his angels are falling, falling
Just don't slip when you're crawling, crawling
Don't rub out the carpet with your bloody knees
Don't wear out your tongue with your blasphomy pleas

-Chorus-(optional)

Diamonds and white satin
Is that all promise of your fabrications?
All of my little alterations
Are the whole picture
No ounce of me you cannot injure
And you'll just fuck it all up
But I'll smile for the camera anyway
And soon they'll all shut up

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INSANITY IS THE FIRST SIGN OF INSANITY!!!

This reminds me a bit of one of my friends, he's always trying to help people and make people feel better, but in the end he gets blamed if something goes wrong, so he just tries to look happy around people but he's never as happy as he seems to be.

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This is my life! And there is nothing you can do about it!
To think that life is enough, is to be killed by your own existence.

Wow, I guess your friend and I are pretty similar then... heh heh, I was a little pissed off writing this song..

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INSANITY IS THE FIRST SIGN OF INSANITY!!!

possibly, he gets pissed off whenever it's "his fault" despite the fact that he was only trying to help...althouth he never actually tries to help himself or beleive in himself, and if he doesn't beleive in himself then I wonder how he can manage to do well in making other people beleive in themselves.

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This is my life! And there is nothing you can do about it!
To think that life is enough, is to be killed by your own existence.

I like this song! I like how you used the anagram thing. It's interesting and unique. I also got the same feeling of trying make people happy, and the feeling of putting on a show that, inevitably, is self-defeating.

For that stanza with the alternate ending - I think that "And you'll still be alone" sounds better and makes more sense there. I can hear this as a heavy, angry song - One I'd wanna jam out to in the car after a bad day.

Good job!

I agree with that, having "and you'll still be alone" flows better, and it's a good preparation before holding the note for as long as possible.

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This is my life! And there is nothing you can do about it!
To think that life is enough, is to be killed by your own existence.

Thanks guys, that's what I thought(about that line) I think I'll change it to that. As always, your input is great will post more soon!

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Kitty

Leaves love he's caught outside my door
They're torn and bloody
That's for sure

Please let me dive
Drown in your self-pity
Pools of eyes

There is no peace in my surrenders
There are no wrong paths
Mines simply darker
And you're sure it's time,
it's time to go
Pleasure
I'll pleasure in my charade
A cracked little doll in a Fools Day Parade

I went out a while
I bought a little bell
I chained it to his neck
Five months gone of myself

I'm crawling out of my skin
Sinking teeth digging in
Am I simply your whore?
Or am I something much more?

I can't feel
So sorry for myself
Now that you're gone
When I know I'm all wrong

Am I simply your whore?
Or am I something much more?

Kitty Kitty Kitty Kitty....
(don't leave me, leave me, leave me...)

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This is very unusual, is it actually about a cat or is the cat a metaphor for something else. It's quite hard to understand the song because it has so many little metaphors and lines which, unless you know a bit of background, are quite hard to make sense of. But other than that, it's a very good and interesting song

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This is my life! And there is nothing you can do about it!
To think that life is enough, is to be killed by your own existence.