My Song - Winter Will Come - EvBoard

silent-heaven · 11-14-2007, 04:13 AM

Hey, im a singer songwriter from England, this is one of my favourite songs I have written called "Winter Will Come". Its all about life going on even though we all go through hell sometimes. (E.g. Winter will come, no matter what happens). Any Feedback would be appreciated =)

I can’t stand here watching you cry
Tears of lithium fall from my eyes
When cold steel memories haunt your mind
Darling, the sun sets on our lives

When you hurt inside
When you want to cry
When you feel you could die
Know I’m dying too

[Chorus:]
Can you live alone?
I am crawling through ashes
Do not drown in your tears
The winter will come

If I bleed I will stain the snow
The crimson pain will melt away
Angels fall and die in the cold
A rose in the snow means life goes on

When you hurt inside
When you want to cry
When you feel you could die
Know I’m dying too

[Chorus:]

Do not be afraid
We’ve been alive all along

[Chorus:]

© Glenn Burdett 2007

lacrimi_congerii · 11-14-2007, 07:52 PM

A rose in the snow means life goes on

Amazing line. I applaud.

silent-heaven · 11-15-2007, 06:44 AM

Thanx a lot, appreciate it! =)

x-celina · 11-15-2007, 02:34 PM

wow! That's awesome!!

I wish I could be that talented:P hehe... it would be even better if i heard the melody, but..:P

silent-heaven · 11-16-2007, 04:16 AM

Thankyou very much!! I might see if i can record it and put it on here but i not v good at the technical side of things hehe =)

rosan · 11-23-2007, 02:45 PM

hey I like your song very much..I wanna see more. And yes I'd like to listen it too...

BTW I loved the line about the rose, it means a lot and it's so think-Provoking IMO..Good job!

.-rosan

11-14-2007, 04:13 AM	#1 (permalink)
silent-heaven n00blet Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 5 Points: 1,052.62 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,052.62 Donate	My Song - Winter Will Come Hey, im a singer songwriter from England, this is one of my favourite songs I have written called "Winter Will Come". Its all about life going on even though we all go through hell sometimes. (E.g. Winter will come, no matter what happens). Any Feedback would be appreciated =) I can’t stand here watching you cry Tears of lithium fall from my eyes When cold steel memories haunt your mind Darling, the sun sets on our lives When you hurt inside When you want to cry When you feel you could die Know I’m dying too [Chorus:] Can you live alone? I am crawling through ashes Do not drown in your tears The winter will come If I bleed I will stain the snow The crimson pain will melt away Angels fall and die in the cold A rose in the snow means life goes on When you hurt inside When you want to cry When you feel you could die Know I’m dying too [Chorus:] Do not be afraid We’ve been alive all along [Chorus:] © Glenn Burdett 2007 Last edited by silent-heaven : 11-16-2007 at 09:10 AM.

11-23-2007, 02:45 PM	#6 (permalink)
rosan Proudly Bodoquian Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: In Bodoquia, where everything is possible!! XD Age: 24 Posts: 151 Points: 4,222.98 Bank: 17,344.94 Total Points: 21,567.92 Donate	hey I like your song very much..I wanna see more. And yes I'd like to listen it too... BTW I loved the line about the rose, it means a lot and it's so think-Provoking IMO..Good job! .-rosan __________________ 'my drops of ink' (poetry thread)(abandoned for a long time) Wanna see amazing poetry? click here! WR Bodoquia's kingdom

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11-14-2007, 07:52 PM	#2 (permalink)
lacrimi_congerii n00blet Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 17 Points: 3,479.62 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 3,479.62 Donate	A rose in the snow means life goes on Amazing line. I applaud.

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silent-heaven n00blet Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 5 Points: 1,052.62 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,052.62 Donate	Thanx a lot, appreciate it! =)

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x-celina Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Norway Posts: 26 Points: 5,038.48 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,038.48 Donate	wow! That's awesome!! I wish I could be that talented:P hehe... it would be even better if i heard the melody, but..:P

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silent-heaven n00blet Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 5 Points: 1,052.62 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,052.62 Donate	Thankyou very much!! I might see if i can record it and put it on here but i not v good at the technical side of things hehe =)

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