I like this one aswell, but the middle verse about the trilogy doesnt make much sense reading it.. my favourite is:

So stop holding on,
Let go of the pain which binds you
to your solitary life at home.
Or lose yourself in sorrow and
depression and lose your life
to the pain in your empty heart.

This flows really well, I like it

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Thanks, um, The part about the trilogy is based on something a friend said to me a couple of days ago. Basically, he beleives in people (not as weird as it seems) He said that humans have two types of emotions, the first being the basic emotions such as happy, sad, anger, etc...which all animals have too, but the second type of emotion is the three core emotions: love, hate, and belief, the core emotions can pretty much overide other emothions. but animals don't have the core emotions (which is why he beleives in people) he also said that they can happen in any combination of two, love and hate, which is quite confusing. Hate and Beleif, which is what causes things like terrorism. and finally, Love and Beleif, which is almost impossible to come across because of how corrupt the planet has become, it's also the thing he's been searching for and hasn't yet found.

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Okay ya, I get it alot better now. I think that's a really cool theory, I've often thought alot about that aswell, but not really in such a formulated way. I meant more in the way the verse was constructed tho, it seems a tad jumpy. I can't really explain it.

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Oh right, jumpy, it's supposed to be like that because of how I imagined it.

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alrighty, well, since I can't exactly see(or hear) your thoughts, I'll just take your word for it!

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Yeah, I really enjoyed "It makes us". I like that it's deep and thought provoking, yet it has a very ethereal feel to it. It's truly beautiful.

I also really liked "Your little game" - I agree with AdamantEsuna - I totally imagined it as a slow and emotional song. It's touching and has an empowering feel to it, particularly the end.

Very nice job! I like 'em!

thanks, I'm going to post another song later today or tomorrow.

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This is my life! And there is nothing you can do about it!
To think that life is enough, is to be killed by your own existence.

This one is experimental, me just thinking random things and typing them.

Like a bird in the sky,
I wish to effortlessly glide
though your mind into your eyes.
I'll wander through mazes upon mazes,
To seek the soul buried deep inside
my soul, but I thought I'd find it in you.

[Chorus]
Because ducks can swim and birds can fly,
and people can walk and apes can climb
and everything seems like it's supposed to seem so simple.
It's supposed to be simple

So I'll walk through a million open doors,
just to get to the other side of
this barrier which stands between us.
Because I can always see you,
and when I see you I need you,
I always need you.

[chorus]

I bleed when you're gone.
and I lose my mind when you're here.
But it scares me to tell you the truth,
every thought fills my mind with fear.

[Chorus]

I'm sorry,
But I'm leaving,
with the thunder,
and lightning.
Just a day,
it might kill me,
But I'll try,
to survive.

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Oh wow! I absolutely love this one, it's really beautiful
I almost cried reading it aha, it is very emotional and it just grabs my attention. Keep up the good work, you get better each time!

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thanks, I wasn't quite sure what kind of reaction I'd get, so a good reaction is pretty nice. I've finished writing 'simple' now so you can see the whole song.

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This is my life! And there is nothing you can do about it!
To think that life is enough, is to be killed by your own existence.