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Old 06-02-2008, 09:16 AM   #41 (permalink)
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Helllooo!

Sorry, haven't been around for a while. Lot's of stuff goin' on!

I like the last song you posted. It has a lot of energy and emotion. It reminds me of someone who feels lost without another, maybe the one person who truly saw him, like it means nothing to exist without the them. It also gives me the impression that the person feels lonely, wanting desperately for someone to see and know him. Overall it was very interesting and well written.

Nice job.
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Old 06-03-2008, 03:12 PM   #42 (permalink)
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Sorry I havent posted lately.. didnt even realize you had new songs!

I really like Questions, and I could see it as a thrasher..

Definately an awesome song, I'm guessing about getting out of a relationship you know is useless and unhealthy?

Deranged Pschopath is really deep and cool too.. and the way I could hear it would be something like evs even in death or some mellow version of a radiohead song. This song feels somehow futuristic to me, it makes me think of a cold distant(or not-so-distant) future where people only pay attention to thier technology and dont have to think, instead of interacting with this protagonist who strives to be heard and loved. Very nice, all around, and as usual, the structure is great
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Thanks for your input. um, deranged psychopath is actually about my life...a bit. My family being addicted to the TV, and my ex-girlfriend dumping me after a 3 week relationship last year...Both of which make me feel a bit abandoned and ignored. so it's really about the saddness associated with being ignored due to other peoples shallowness.
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Old 06-03-2008, 07:19 PM   #44 (permalink)
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3 weeks? how cold... i feel for you buddy!
anyways.. ya basically what I thought, but I still think of robots, wtf!? I dunno, I'm just strange.
Post more songs soon!
I need good stuff to read!
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yeah, will post something soon, I've got some ideas in my mind but they need a bit of refining...and words, they definatly need words.

and I'm thinking of doing something with language, maybe using old english or something, and an unusual structure to match it.
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