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01-02-2005, 06:43 AM
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My songs and poetry Post #1 |
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n00blet
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Malaysia
Age: 22
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My songs and poetry
UNTITLED
What has happened to the world Everyone's crying out in terror Global Warming getting worse Now we all have to face the horror Why can't we take care of the enviroment? Why must we all have war and fight? Tsunamis happening, Earthquakes coming All the victims are so innocent What have we done to our cheerful world? What can we do to stop this horror? All the people, dying slowly Iraq has suffered from war. We can still rescue this enviroment We still can pray for peacefulness Ozone layer's getting thinner If we don't stop it We'll have no future What has happened to the world? Everyone's crying in terror Global warming's getting worse Now we all have to face the horror Trees being cut Air is polluted What we all have to do is TRY AND STOP IT Prevent this world from dyin' Mother Nature's cryin' So save the enviroment and we Can all be happy Just to warn y'all...scientists found out that one day a mega-tsunami is gonna hit america's costal line..the waves will be as high as 1 km and reaches thousands of kilometres away..I hope that won't really happen...*prays* |
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01-02-2005, 07:31 AM
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Lady Codger
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: England
Age: 23
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I like the relation to recent and consistant problems in this. Your opinion is portrayed rather well, and strongly.
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It's overall quite good, Keep writing. |
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01-02-2005, 11:15 PM
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My songs and poetry Post #4 |
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good poem punked out diva...i also liked the way you looked at current and past (but they are not really past tense if you know what i mean), issues, and totally agree with your stance...
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