I can't decide what they should be called, but I originally made them as lyrics for songs, I just don't have musical part and all that. Tell me what you think! Anything to point out that's just bad? In fact... Rip 'em apart!

Searching:
You left me. You left, and never returned. I waited, I cried, and I screamed for you.
They told me I could see you. But you weren’t there.

I search for you! You seem so distant...
I can feel you, haunting me! My time so near it’s end!
Without you, I feel like I die everyday!
I’m lost, and there’s too much pain, again, and again.

You left me. You left, and I never returned. I hated, I died, and I grieved for you.

I can no longer hear your voice. I can’t feel you,
(In my heart, in my mind. Your memory fading away.)

I search for you! You seem so distant...
I can feel you, haunting me! My time so near it’s end!
Without you, I feel like I die everyday!
I’m lost, and there’s too much pain. Will it end?

I’m separated from myself
To see my crimson hope,
My arms, bearing the scars of my love for you,
Fading away.

I search for you! You seem so distant...
I can feel you, haunting me! My time so near it’s end!

I’m lost without you!
I’ve resigned, my life withdrawn!

As death finally lays it’s hand on my heart,
I feel lost…
But through the light I’ve gone.

(Oooooook... I made a quick change to Searching to make it sound less Evanescence-y. Better? Worse?)

Enough:
I’ve had enough!

There’s no more time!

You’re so caught up in your own misery to realize I’m even there.

Can’t you stop ailing yourself long enough to look up and care?

I’m leaving you behind!
I can’t live this life
Supporting you
Through yourself
Lift your head and prepare

Or you’ll be sorry

I won’t be there

To pick you up

When you’ve fallen too far again

I’m leaving you behind!
I can’t live this life
Supporting you
Through yourself
Lift your head and prepare

To wake up from this sleep
Of pain and misery
And find me
Gone away

I’m leaving you behind!
I can’t live this life
Supporting you
Through yourself
Lift your head and prepare

For life

I like the second one the best.

The first one seemed like it had some Evanescence lyrics in it. I would suggest changing that, sorry.

Other than that keep up the good work!

<3 Michelle

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Yeah, the weird thing is, I wrote that song when the only Ev songs I had heard were Haunted and My Immortal. There are similarities there and I'm trying to think up ways to get rid of that, but nothing has come to mind. Still thinkin' though...