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Codger · 09-30-2004, 05:34 PM

I messed with my dragon and got this:

Codger · 10-01-2004, 11:22 AM

Made this at school today:

isibisi · 10-01-2004, 12:27 PM

hey, they are pretty cool

...i want time to do those things at school

Apryl · 10-01-2004, 12:47 PM

I love the angel one...that's awesome <3

Codger · 10-01-2004, 12:53 PM

Thnak you people, I appreciate the feedback

Codger · 10-02-2004, 06:57 AM

I am ok, I just find it hard to write happy pieces, with so much shit going on in the world, no inspiration 4 happyness

Anyway..... new poem

Nymphetamine Girl

I look through the curtain and see you stood there
My Dahlia, my muse, but also my hater

I have loved you ever since I first saw you
You looked through me as if I was invisible

I notice you with that man… my rival for your heart
I love you….. He had to go

You mourn his passing day by day
It is strange that your true lover caused you so much pain

I stalk you down the cold street
You don’t even realize my undying love for you

I soon realize that you do not love me
I soon find a new love…. An old rusty knife

So remember my Nymphetamine girl, you held my heart close
You did not notice my absence, from your elegant world

Codger · 10-03-2004, 01:16 PM

The Girl

She walks alone on the dark earth
The cuts on her arm, the symbols of sorrow

She looks in the mirror and asks herself: Why am I here?
“ All I seem to be is a punch bag of society.”

She wanders the streets, abused and hated
By the narrow minded scum of Earth.

I see her, I do not feel repulsion, but love
Our souls lock together in a lingering embrace

I look at your face and see immense grace
My angelic soul mate, trapped under a sheet of sorrow

I try and lift the barrier…..
My lips lock with yours, the key and the lock intertwine

Codger · 10-27-2004, 06:00 PM

New crap drawings lol. (They doodles btw)

Codger · 11-09-2004, 06:18 PM

Newish Poem, not very good, but what the hell

Draining

I sit in my desolate hiding place
For it is the world I dare not face

You, You were the one who brought my pain
All for your selfish gain

From my soul you drain the light
You turn my dream filled sky into eternal night

I run to you, am I doomed to love the one that hates?
Your repulsion has made me want to knock on Heaven’s gates

You burn, you strangle…… YOU SUFFER

As I turn towards you once again in shame
I realize that it should be you I blame

My anger sores high, your love is lie
My only wish if for you to die

You drained from me my soul, my happiness, I did not drain you…..

It Was The Crimson Blade
That made my pain fade

Lunar Sky · 11-09-2004, 08:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Codger

Newish Poem, not very good, but what the hell

Draining

I sit in my desolate hiding place
For it is the world I dare not face

You, You were the one who brought my pain
All for your selfish gain

From my soul you drain the light
You turn my dream filled sky into eternal night

I run to you, am I doomed to love the one that hates?
Your repulsion has made me want to knock on Heaven’s gates

You burn, you strangle…… YOU SUFFER

As I turn towards you once again in shame
I realize that it should be you I blame

My anger sores high, your love is lie
My only wish if for you to die

You drained from me my soul, my happiness, I did not drain you…..

It Was The Crimson Blade
That made my pain fade

I think you're being too modest when you say it's not very good. I personally think it rocks, and I loved how you rhymed. Great job!

10-01-2004, 12:27 PM	#33 (permalink)
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10-02-2004, 06:57 AM	#36 (permalink)
Codger Post Monkey Join Date: May 2004 Location: England Age: 20 Posts: 2,289 Points: 2,276.54 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 2,276.55 Donate	I am ok, I just find it hard to write happy pieces, with so much shit going on in the world, no inspiration 4 happyness Anyway..... new poem Nymphetamine Girl I look through the curtain and see you stood there My Dahlia, my muse, but also my hater I have loved you ever since I first saw you You looked through me as if I was invisible I notice you with that man… my rival for your heart I love you….. He had to go You mourn his passing day by day It is strange that your true lover caused you so much pain I stalk you down the cold street You don’t even realize my undying love for you I soon realize that you do not love me I soon find a new love…. An old rusty knife So remember my Nymphetamine girl, you held my heart close You did not notice my absence, from your elegant world __________________ . Myspace April 24th 2007...

10-03-2004, 01:16 PM	#37 (permalink)
Codger Post Monkey Join Date: May 2004 Location: England Age: 20 Posts: 2,289 Points: 2,276.54 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 2,276.55 Donate	The Girl She walks alone on the dark earth The cuts on her arm, the symbols of sorrow She looks in the mirror and asks herself: Why am I here? “ All I seem to be is a punch bag of society.” She wanders the streets, abused and hated By the narrow minded scum of Earth. I see her, I do not feel repulsion, but love Our souls lock together in a lingering embrace I look at your face and see immense grace My angelic soul mate, trapped under a sheet of sorrow I try and lift the barrier….. My lips lock with yours, the key and the lock intertwine __________________ . Myspace April 24th 2007...

10-27-2004, 06:00 PM	#38 (permalink)
Codger Post Monkey Join Date: May 2004 Location: England Age: 20 Posts: 2,289 Points: 2,276.54 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 2,276.55 Donate	New crap drawings lol. (They doodles btw) __________________ . Myspace April 24th 2007... Last edited by Diamon : 11-02-2005 at 10:20 AM.

11-09-2004, 06:18 PM	#39 (permalink)
Codger Post Monkey Join Date: May 2004 Location: England Age: 20 Posts: 2,289 Points: 2,276.54 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 2,276.55 Donate	Newish Poem, not very good, but what the hell Draining I sit in my desolate hiding place For it is the world I dare not face You, You were the one who brought my pain All for your selfish gain From my soul you drain the light You turn my dream filled sky into eternal night I run to you, am I doomed to love the one that hates? Your repulsion has made me want to knock on Heaven’s gates You burn, you strangle…… YOU SUFFER As I turn towards you once again in shame I realize that it should be you I blame My anger sores high, your love is lie My only wish if for you to die You drained from me my soul, my happiness, I did not drain you….. It Was The Crimson Blade That made my pain fade __________________ . Myspace April 24th 2007...

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