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Im_Broken · 09-07-2005, 09:13 PM

I really liked that last one. Great job with that.

wistful · 09-08-2005, 09:56 AM

thank you so much! (:

wistful · 01-15-2006, 02:48 PM

Love's view

Find another place
Another calm snap
Where you can be yourself and I can watch you
Because that's all I want to do
Catch you in your sleep
And stare at your lips while I dream of being there
Slowly touch your hair
And see that sweet smile upon your face
Fall asleep with me
I'm forever going to be
Right where you left me
Staring at your dream

Im_Broken · 01-16-2006, 11:45 AM

That sounds really nice. Good job with it.

wistful · 01-16-2006, 01:53 PM

thank you very much (:

Im_Broken · 01-16-2006, 08:04 PM

No problem. Hope to see more soon.

wistful · 06-18-2006, 05:03 PM

Raise your hand

Fight for a true freedom
A way to change the laws
Can't you see it's unreal
Your living for them
Paying them to keep you chained

Raise your hand
Try to understand
Shout out loud
They can't shut you out
If you try
You will soon just be
A true man
A man they can not keep

A revolution first must be in your mind
A different way to live
A way that's yours to keep
Find a way, fight a war
Be proud of being free

Have a thousand years
Have a thousand more
If you think it's fair
You've never fought a war
There are two extremes
And there's not a good one

(If you thought peace was easy
Think again, you might be surprised
War is the easy way out
A way that leaves no return)

Istimiel · 06-18-2006, 10:30 PM

I really like reading your poems! I can't wait to read more

09-07-2005, 09:13 PM	#11 (permalink)
Im_Broken Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 1,397 Points: 470.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 470.00 Donate	I really liked that last one. Great job with that. __________________ -Rach- ((Check out my stuff)) when it starts to rain break out the slip and slide

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Im_Broken Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 1,397 Points: 470.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 470.00 Donate	That sounds really nice. Good job with it. __________________ -Rach- ((Check out my stuff)) when it starts to rain break out the slip and slide

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Im_Broken Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 1,397 Points: 470.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 470.00 Donate	No problem. Hope to see more soon. __________________ -Rach- ((Check out my stuff)) when it starts to rain break out the slip and slide

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Istimiel Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In fantasy land where I could sing for Nightwish Age: 24 Posts: 152 Points: 272.35 Bank: 1,260.06 Total Points: 1,532.41 Donate	I really like reading your poems! I can't wait to read more __________________ deviantART being strange is normal MySpace I'm a melancholy closet clown with a shoe fetish

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09-08-2005, 09:56 AM	#12 (permalink)
wistful n00blet Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Portugal Age: 21 Posts: 13 Points: 1,368.17 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,368.17 Donate	thank you so much! (:

01-15-2006, 02:48 PM	#13 (permalink)
wistful n00blet Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Portugal Age: 21 Posts: 13 Points: 1,368.17 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,368.17 Donate	Love's view Find another place Another calm snap Where you can be yourself and I can watch you Because that's all I want to do Catch you in your sleep And stare at your lips while I dream of being there Slowly touch your hair And see that sweet smile upon your face Fall asleep with me I'm forever going to be Right where you left me Staring at your dream

01-16-2006, 01:53 PM	#15 (permalink)
wistful n00blet Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Portugal Age: 21 Posts: 13 Points: 1,368.17 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,368.17 Donate	thank you very much (:

06-18-2006, 05:03 PM	#17 (permalink)
wistful n00blet Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Portugal Age: 21 Posts: 13 Points: 1,368.17 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,368.17 Donate	Raise your hand Fight for a true freedom A way to change the laws Can't you see it's unreal Your living for them Paying them to keep you chained Raise your hand Try to understand Shout out loud They can't shut you out If you try You will soon just be A true man A man they can not keep A revolution first must be in your mind A different way to live A way that's yours to keep Find a way, fight a war Be proud of being free Have a thousand years Have a thousand more If you think it's fair You've never fought a war There are two extremes And there's not a good one (If you thought peace was easy Think again, you might be surprised War is the easy way out A way that leaves no return)

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