every year,
its always,
always the same,
feeling so damn bad,
feeling so dead,
letting all this
so called love
fly over my head,
lying in a gutter
wishing i was dead,
living a life of lie,
suffering this hate,
look at these lines,
would these come from
a person who knows love?
no one care,
who would,
care for someone whose dying
in the rain,
dying on valentines day!

written on and about valentines day

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oops sorry, 4 really? oopsy sorry about that

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can you forgive me,
for what i've done?
you havent screwed up,
i'm so sorry,
i couldn't keep your promise
but you're gonna do better
without me,
you deserve much better,
you shouldnt disagree
you know its true
i'm sorry if i hurt you
i dont want you to be hurt
anymore,
theres no other way,
theres nothing else to do,
you can see how deep it cuts,
you can see how much it hurts,
dont look for me,
i'll be fine,
i wont hurt you anymore,
you'll be happier.

a really sad and personal thing i wrote

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I agree. you should talk to a mod to see if they can combine your threads. that way EVERYONE can see all of your stuff in one place instead of having to hunt for it.

my old stuffs pants but heres my newest thing


heres my new thing, its got 2 parts:

part 1:

I'm a screw up,
I'm a failure,
i'm a damn mess,
don't look at me,
I'm the problem,
I'm whats hurting you,
can you let me go?
can you let me dissapear?
I wish i could turn
back the clock,
stop me from hurting you,
do your best,
forget me,
can you live happily?
dont look for me,
dont try and find me,
can you forgive me,
for breaking your promise?
can you forgive me
for what i've done?
for what i'll do?


Part 2:

why?
why is there something wrong
with everyone i care for,
is it my fault?
why do my freinds
have to hurt?
why does it have to be broken?
why do i do this?
why do i hurt them?
why do i stay,
when it hurts them more,
i shouldn't be here,
i cant hurt them,
i cant make them cry,
i cant make them bleed,
when it really should be me,
i should be the one who bleeds,
i should be the one who's dying,
please forgive me when i die,
for all i made you cry.

well there it is its still quite personal though

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Hm, well, no offense, but the format seems wrong when you write your poetry.

its because i've been writing for a while in a certain style and on another note:

your a liar,
your a liar,
your a liar,
your empty,
your blind,
you cant see
what you've done to me,
you betrayed me,
you lied,
a part of me died,
you didn't care,
theres something wrong,
i cant beat this
sickness,
its eating away at me,
i wish i could just fly free,
holes inside me,
red scares burning outside me,
i cant fight it,
i cant beat it,
thanks to you,
you liar,
you bastard,
you uncaring prick!

my new thing

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heres my newest thing:

(quiet)

i'm beating this,
i'm pulling through,
i'm not gonna lose this

Chorus (now entire song is screamed)
I'M HAPPY NOW
YOU AIN'T EVER
GONNA TAKE THIS
FROM ME!

I'M BREAKING
THE RULES,
I'M BEATING YOU BACK,

Chorus

I HOPE YOU KOW,
I AINT EVER GONNA
LET YOU GO!

Chorus

YOU HURT ME,
YOU SAID I'D
AMOUNT TO NOTHING!
LOOK AT ME

Chorus

I WANT MY
RET-RIB-UTION!
KI'M GONNA GIVE
YOU,
WHAT YOU GAVE ME!

Chorus

MAKE YOU CRY!!!!*5

i'm happy!

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