So far I have poems and songs
This is the first I posted and the other poem is in another post below.
You can listen to the songs on YouTube, the links are below.



Here are my YouTube videos. Just Evanescence songs I decided to sing. Hope you like them!

Goodnight:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3sxyDC9be9o


Like You:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ugapEX1dYXE


Even in Death:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GacmrOgy5P4

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Fatality Voice

A cold wind is getting near
but I have nothing to lose
though my heart just fears
not to talk again to you.

I'm weak and shattered
and my mind is full of clouds
not white, but darkened
by a voice that is not loud.

"Come", it always whispers
and I just can't resist
it offers me a new world
where pain no longer exists.

I wish I could get out of this
but the feeling is too strong
I'm about to surrender
and my last breath hold.

"Forget", it says to me
and kisses me on the lips
I can feel it, so real
I don't even feel my feet.

I'm crossing to her world
and she takes me by the hand
as my memory erases the pain
and leaves everything behind.

"Come", I now whisper
"join me here in this world
and you'll see all your wounds
will be forever gone".

"Forget", you hear me say
and now it's just your choice
to let me take you by the hand
and follow this fatality voice.

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i like this ..... go on

- Ahmad
LovE FoR AlL

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I really, really like that. The only thing I could say, is add some more detail to it... make it more vivid. It's got somewhat of a story behind it which is great.

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Thanx a lot for you ideas

Here's my next one:

Betrayed

I'm about to drown in my tears
I've never felt so alone
It feels like I can't breathe
ever since you were gone.

We were meant to be together
my heart was only yours
now my days seem so blurry
without your gentle touch.

How could you do this to me?
You promised you'd never leave
and here I am wounded
because you disappeared.

It's so cold and quiet now
only silence surrounds me
I'm fragile and senseless
I'm so tired and restless.

I thought I'd have you forever
but life has betrayed my heart
you were taken from my arms
and you will never come back.

I'm jealous, I'm scared
'cause you went with her
she seems to have won
your love and your hate.

I surrender, I just give up
and I hope she treats you well
after all, we all someday
will end giving up to her.

I love that. It reminds me of Everybody's Fool so much. Awesome <3

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Thanx a lot! I shall keep posting more...