New here, A song by me.. - EvBoard

Pixelized · 03-10-2006, 04:48 AM

New here, my name's Daniel and im A big big fan of Evanescence. Came by and saw there's a 'yours' forum, so wanted to post up something :]
Don't know if it's called a song or a Poem, but i don't really care :}

{[Don't Let GO]}

I won't forget the Dream I had,
Won't ignore it, AS it was said
I Have tried, Still do..
Used to
Agnoy, Sadness, uoh..

[Chorus]
So hard, So full
You said i was SO smart, But was only A Foul,,
Will keep trying, I won't give in
But god, I can't stop bleeding.. {from inside}, Let gooo
Leeet, gooo...

She's given up, said she'd not Surrender
Then He stopped by and DID {leave} her Alone
She felt abandoned, Felt Fallen
Though I wanted, Could NOT come...

The fear will kill me,
A rest will stop me
and still
I'm TRYING
TO hang on, by myself
TO hang in All alone,
Desperate for help, Desperate for touch,
As Beuty like this just SCREAMS for much..

[Chorus-X2]

Dont let go...
Dont be gone...
Dont give in..
But rise up..

Comments plz :}

Im_Broken · 03-10-2006, 06:25 PM

First off, welcome to the board.

I really liked your song. This was my favorite part::

The fear will kill me,
A rest will stop me

Great job with the song. I hope you post more soon, I would love to read some more.

Pixelized · 03-11-2006, 11:00 AM

thanks

i really appreciate ur post, and tnx again;]

i'm glad to see that i'm now able to post, though cuz i couldnt before, and this thread was sent like 2 days ago:]

hope to post some more stuff soon..

Im_Broken · 03-11-2006, 11:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pixelized

thanks

i really appreciate ur post, and tnx again;]

i'm glad to see that i'm now able to post, though cuz i couldnt before, and this thread was sent like 2 days ago:]

hope to post some more stuff soon..

No problem. Yeah, it takes awhile to post when your new. Anyways, I can't wait for more of your stuff.

03-10-2006, 04:48 AM	#1 (permalink)
Pixelized n00blet Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 7 Points: 107.70 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 107.70 Donate	New here, A song by me.. New here, my name's Daniel and im A big big fan of Evanescence. Came by and saw there's a 'yours' forum, so wanted to post up something :] Don't know if it's called a song or a Poem, but i don't really care :} {[Don't Let GO]} I won't forget the Dream I had, Won't ignore it, AS it was said I Have tried, Still do.. Used to Agnoy, Sadness, uoh.. [Chorus] So hard, So full You said i was SO smart, But was only A Foul,, Will keep trying, I won't give in But god, I can't stop bleeding.. {from inside}, Let gooo Leeet, gooo... She's given up, said she'd not Surrender Then He stopped by and DID {leave} her Alone She felt abandoned, Felt Fallen Though I wanted, Could NOT come... The fear will kill me, A rest will stop me and still I'm TRYING TO hang on, by myself TO hang in All alone, Desperate for help, Desperate for touch, As Beuty like this just SCREAMS for much.. [Chorus-X2] Dont let go... Dont be gone... Dont give in.. But rise up.. Comments plz :}

03-10-2006, 06:25 PM	#2 (permalink)
Im_Broken Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 1,397 Points: 470.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 470.00 Donate	First off, welcome to the board. I really liked your song. This was my favorite part:: The fear will kill me, A rest will stop me Great job with the song. I hope you post more soon, I would love to read some more. __________________ -Rach- ((Check out my stuff)) when it starts to rain break out the slip and slide

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03-11-2006, 11:00 AM	#3 (permalink)
Pixelized n00blet Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 7 Points: 107.70 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 107.70 Donate	thanks i really appreciate ur post, and tnx again;] i'm glad to see that i'm now able to post, though cuz i couldnt before, and this thread was sent like 2 days ago:] hope to post some more stuff soon..

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