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OctoberWhispers · 08-09-2006, 01:30 PM

Um..i think my thread was deleted...or something..

Heres some stuff that I recorded a little over a year ago

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=555584&t=9440

(My AcidPlanet Username is AngelofNightmres if for some reason the link wont work...I wrote the lyrics to tainted..and I think you'll recognize the other

And I'm the vocalist in a band now..called Detour and I havent started singing yet but we do have some instrumental stuff on our myspace page which is here.

www.myspace.com/detourkicks

add if you like...vocals should be added as soon as i get a speaker

Envyway · 08-09-2006, 02:18 PM

I really anjoyed your version of Imaginary. The piano is beautiful and your vocals you should give yourself more credit for then you have, they were great and you stayed on form all the way through, however you went a bit wobbly on the Swallowed up in the sound of screaming part...

However i really did enjoy it, well done

Thatisdumb · 08-09-2006, 06:38 PM

Your voice isn't bad at all!! I think it's nice!

And I mean this in a good way; a few classical voice lessons would really make a huge difference! Just to help get more power on the higher notes, get rid of the SLIGHT naisal sound and to help phrase things.

And is that you on the piano?? AMAZING!!!

OctoberWhispers · 08-10-2006, 05:55 PM

actually a friend is playing piano. im actually going to do an acapella recording of a song soon just to update..the quality won't be as good as those are...thanks for the comments keep them comming

(i need as much tips as i can get)

Eares · 08-12-2006, 12:20 AM

Very, very good job.

Most girls who say they can sing end up being pretty bad, but you pull it off nicely.

Ellen · 08-26-2006, 02:00 PM

I think your voice is very pretty. =) I think I am going to record Imaginary (Origin Version) once I get a mic and recording program.

morganna · 08-26-2006, 02:29 PM

Your voice has so much potential. I personally think you began a little weak and unsure, but as you got into the song, you improved dramatically. You genuinley have a good voice, the sort that could arouse tears in someone when singing the right song i think. I agree with ThatisDumb, a few classical lessons may give you a booster, because you have all the potential, but you definitley seem a little uncertain on higher notes. I've listened to a few evanescence covers, and to be brutally honest most destroy them, but you've really done this song justice. Work a little on those unsure parts and you'll be even better than you are now!

08-09-2006, 01:30 PM	#1 (permalink)
OctoberWhispers Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Charlotte, NC Posts: 125 Points: 7,967.85 Bank: 217.35 Total Points: 8,185.20 Donate	OctoberWhispers Stuff [Feedback Please] Um..i think my thread was deleted...or something.. Heres some stuff that I recorded a little over a year ago http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=555584&t=9440 (My AcidPlanet Username is AngelofNightmres if for some reason the link wont work...I wrote the lyrics to tainted..and I think you'll recognize the other And I'm the vocalist in a band now..called Detour and I havent started singing yet but we do have some instrumental stuff on our myspace page which is here. www.myspace.com/detourkicks add if you like...vocals should be added as soon as i get a speaker __________________ Just didn't Drink Enough to say you Love me... ~Emily Anne~

08-09-2006, 06:38 PM	#3 (permalink)
Thatisdumb Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Reddin' Age: 21 Posts: 269 Points: 997.10 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 997.10 Donate	Your voice isn't bad at all!! I think it's nice! And I mean this in a good way; a few classical voice lessons would really make a huge difference! Just to help get more power on the higher notes, get rid of the SLIGHT naisal sound and to help phrase things. And is that you on the piano?? AMAZING!!! __________________ www.myspace.com/emmahuntermusic ^listen to me sing http://www.evboard.com/showthread.php?t=28966 ^then make fun of me on my thread I like cake.

08-10-2006, 05:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
OctoberWhispers Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Charlotte, NC Posts: 125 Points: 7,967.85 Bank: 217.35 Total Points: 8,185.20 Donate	actually a friend is playing piano. im actually going to do an acapella recording of a song soon just to update..the quality won't be as good as those are...thanks for the comments keep them comming (i need as much tips as i can get) __________________ Just didn't Drink Enough to say you Love me... ~Emily Anne~

08-26-2006, 02:00 PM	#6 (permalink)
Ellen Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: At the computer =) Age: 16 Posts: 372 Points: 223.60 Bank: 2,103.84 Total Points: 2,327.44 Donate	I think your voice is very pretty. =) I think I am going to record Imaginary (Origin Version) once I get a mic and recording program. __________________ "You are who you are and there's no one like you. To try to be someone else is just a lie." -Amy Lee

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08-09-2006, 02:18 PM	#2 (permalink)
Envyway Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: United Kingdom Age: 20 Posts: 74 Points: 78.32 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 78.32 Donate	I really anjoyed your version of Imaginary. The piano is beautiful and your vocals you should give yourself more credit for then you have, they were great and you stayed on form all the way through, however you went a bit wobbly on the Swallowed up in the sound of screaming part... However i really did enjoy it, well done

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Eares n00blet Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: California Age: 18 Posts: 11 Points: 156.66 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 156.66 Donate	Very, very good job. Most girls who say they can sing end up being pretty bad, but you pull it off nicely.

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morganna Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Bridgend, South Wales, U.K Age: 19 Posts: 87 Points: 1,384.79 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 1,384.79 Donate	Your voice has so much potential. I personally think you began a little weak and unsure, but as you got into the song, you improved dramatically. You genuinley have a good voice, the sort that could arouse tears in someone when singing the right song i think. I agree with ThatisDumb, a few classical lessons may give you a booster, because you have all the potential, but you definitley seem a little uncertain on higher notes. I've listened to a few evanescence covers, and to be brutally honest most destroy them, but you've really done this song justice. Work a little on those unsure parts and you'll be even better than you are now!

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