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blood&chocolate · 11-02-2007, 12:47 PM

i wrote this poem and i was just wondering what you guys thought.

Pain

Pain isn’t falling over and cutting yourself
Pain isn’t being dumped by your boyfriend
Pain isn’t crying because you couldn’t get that pair of shoes you really like
Pain isn’t a headache

Pain is waking up in the morning knowing everyone is going to laugh at you
Pain is knowing that no one wants to be your friend
Pain is knowing that you will get badmouthed at least ten times in a day
Pain is knowing that someone will make you bleed because of their words
Pain is knowing that you feel trapped inside yourself because of that one person
Pain is knowing that you will cry your eyes out everyday
Pain is feeling that you cannot escape
Pain is not kwoing why

Sweet Tigger · 11-02-2007, 10:12 PM

Wow, this is very real, and very deep, and emotional.
I think, that someone feeling like this, really has to take a step back, and take a long look at them selfs, and really know, that they are worth it!!
EVERYONE is special!! People call someone down, because they are feeling down about them selfs. A person that is hurting, they feel the need to try to make someone else feel the way they do.
I think your work is great, because its pure honesty, and so many feel like this, it has happened to most of us at one point in our lives. I think if Amy were to see this, she would really agree with it!

SnowLake · 11-03-2007, 04:34 AM

Amy would be proud

gothic_romance · 11-04-2007, 07:56 AM

Omg, wow, that was amazing..Realy deep..Beautiful...

11-02-2007, 12:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
blood&chocolate n00blet Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: London, UK Age: 14 Posts: 16 Points: 5,438.42 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,438.42 Donate	Pain i wrote this poem and i was just wondering what you guys thought. Pain Pain isn’t falling over and cutting yourself Pain isn’t being dumped by your boyfriend Pain isn’t crying because you couldn’t get that pair of shoes you really like Pain isn’t a headache Pain is waking up in the morning knowing everyone is going to laugh at you Pain is knowing that no one wants to be your friend Pain is knowing that you will get badmouthed at least ten times in a day Pain is knowing that someone will make you bleed because of their words Pain is knowing that you feel trapped inside yourself because of that one person Pain is knowing that you will cry your eyes out everyday Pain is feeling that you cannot escape Pain is not kwoing why Last edited by blood&chocolate : 11-03-2007 at 05:37 AM.

11-02-2007, 10:12 PM	#2 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Pure Hearted Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 2,772 Points: 5,387.08 Bank: 136,428.87 Total Points: 141,815.95 Donate $PIE. \m/ Heh, you're awesome. :D - CrownlessAgain$	Wow, this is very real, and very deep, and emotional. I think, that someone feeling like this, really has to take a step back, and take a long look at them selfs, and really know, that they are worth it!! EVERYONE is special!! People call someone down, because they are feeling down about them selfs. A person that is hurting, they feel the need to try to make someone else feel the way they do. I think your work is great, because its pure honesty, and so many feel like this, it has happened to most of us at one point in our lives. I think if Amy were to see this, she would really agree with it! __________________ Last edited by Trina Segelbaum : 11-03-2007 at 09:57 AM.

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gothic_romance Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Slovenia Posts: 38 Points: 6,321.47 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 6,321.47 Donate	Omg, wow, that was amazing..Realy deep..Beautiful... __________________ Evanescence. Burning candles are dying silently... <3

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