Poems by Fer - EvBoard

fernanda_cb · 08-01-2007, 04:56 PM

So, I've decided to show my work...

This is the last poem I wrote, back in 2005. It represented a time of my life, but not literally. I've never had any tendency to suicide cause I fear death so... it's more of a metaphore (sp??).
I hope you like it...

"Suicidal Note"

I got home today
After a stressful day
I don't feel the same as before
And I don't wanna live anymore
I went to my room upstairs
Sat on the floor and just stared
Thoughts of ending my life came to my mind
But before, I've decided to write
To daddy for he will be sad
I ask you, dad, just don't be mad
And to my baby that I won't see grow up
I love you, and you please never give up
I got the knife and held it close to me
Cut my wrists, blood is all I see
The pain is unbearable, I can't take it
So I cut it deeper, I want to end it
The blood is now everywhere
My soul is going somewhere
Somewhere I know I'll be happy
Something I've never been
I'm sorry baby, that I'm leaving you
I'm sorry too, dad, for not trusting you
I needed you mommy, but you never cared
So I'm here now, doing what you never dared
I'm killing myself, haven't you seen?
I'm ending my life at the age of eighteen

I'll post some others later ^^
Tell me what you think, please =]

Apholos · 08-01-2007, 05:09 PM

An interesting poem I' d say.
Going down is quite dangerous: I am talking from my own experience.
Sometimes you don' t find the bottom, and that' s when you die.
Thank goodness, we have a Master... he saved me several times.
Life is like walking a long way: the end is always a blessing if our Master is yours too.
Keep posting!

fernanda_cb · 08-02-2007, 10:18 PM

Thank you =]
I just hope never to feel like this... must be horrible.

Anyways, another one... I wrote it in 2004, just for a poetry challenge, it didn't mean anything to me until last year... Death can be cruel sometimes... =/

"Death"

I just stare
I still can’t believe
You’re gone

You were laying there
Looked like you were just sleeping
Peacefully

My eyes are red
They hurt
I don’t want to cry anymore

Everyone stare at me
They want to console me
But they can’t

The coffin was closed
I said NO, stay
But you were gone

As you were buried
I couldn’t take anymore
I wanted to be with you

Don’t… I…
No… I’m…
I love you baby
I love you
Goodbye

CaroLLeite · 08-02-2007, 10:44 PM

Hey love your poems =] this part is very very sad bud I like it...

Quote:

Originally Posted by fernanda_cb

My eyes are red
They hurt
I don’t want to cry anymore

Very nice, keep posting

fernanda_cb · 08-02-2007, 11:07 PM

Haha

Thanks Carol =D

fernanda_cb · 08-05-2007, 09:32 PM

Here's another one...
I wrote it when I was in seventh grade I think (yeah, a long time ago)... I just translated it to english and changed a few things... It still means a lot to me, even though many years and many friendships passed by...
This poem, however childish it may be, still has it's worth. And I hope some people get the real meaning of it... yes, it has a meaning to me for some friends from here =]

I hope you like it..

"I have friends"

I have friends
That don't even know they're my friends
Don't know what I feel for them
What I would do for them

Do they know that,
If possible,
I would give my life
Just not to see them hurt?

I need friends
That care 'bout me
About what I think
Or what I feel

That can be only
Someone next to me
I have friends
That don't even know they're my friends

Nikky · 08-07-2007, 02:32 PM

You definatly have friends, dear. <3
Loved the poems.

fernanda_cb · 08-07-2007, 03:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dyingsoul

You definatly have friends, dear. <3
Loved the poems.

Aw thanks =P

I think I do indeed... =**

CaroLLeite · 08-07-2007, 04:00 PM

I love it! Keep up the good work

supervixen · 08-10-2007, 01:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dyingsoul

You definatly have friends, dear. <3
Loved the poems.

Damn, she couldn't be more right (:
Feeeer! *o*
*hugs* <33

08-01-2007, 04:56 PM	#1 (permalink)
fernanda_cb Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Curitiba! Age: 21 Posts: 167 Points: 15,541.33 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 15,541.33 Donate	Poems by Fer So, I've decided to show my work... This is the last poem I wrote, back in 2005. It represented a time of my life, but not literally. I've never had any tendency to suicide cause I fear death so... it's more of a metaphore (sp??). I hope you like it... "Suicidal Note" I got home today After a stressful day I don't feel the same as before And I don't wanna live anymore I went to my room upstairs Sat on the floor and just stared Thoughts of ending my life came to my mind But before, I've decided to write To daddy for he will be sad I ask you, dad, just don't be mad And to my baby that I won't see grow up I love you, and you please never give up I got the knife and held it close to me Cut my wrists, blood is all I see The pain is unbearable, I can't take it So I cut it deeper, I want to end it The blood is now everywhere My soul is going somewhere Somewhere I know I'll be happy Something I've never been I'm sorry baby, that I'm leaving you I'm sorry too, dad, for not trusting you I needed you mommy, but you never cared So I'm here now, doing what you never dared I'm killing myself, haven't you seen? I'm ending my life at the age of eighteen I'll post some others later ^^ Tell me what you think, please =] __________________ Remember that all alone is where I belong

08-02-2007, 10:18 PM	#3 (permalink)
fernanda_cb Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Curitiba! Age: 21 Posts: 167 Points: 15,541.33 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 15,541.33 Donate	Thank you =] I just hope never to feel like this... must be horrible. Anyways, another one... I wrote it in 2004, just for a poetry challenge, it didn't mean anything to me until last year... Death can be cruel sometimes... =/ "Death" I just stare I still can’t believe You’re gone You were laying there Looked like you were just sleeping Peacefully My eyes are red They hurt I don’t want to cry anymore Everyone stare at me They want to console me But they can’t The coffin was closed I said NO, stay But you were gone As you were buried I couldn’t take anymore I wanted to be with you Don’t… I… No… I’m… I love you baby I love you Goodbye __________________ Remember that all alone is where I belong

08-02-2007, 11:07 PM	#5 (permalink)
fernanda_cb Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Curitiba! Age: 21 Posts: 167 Points: 15,541.33 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 15,541.33 Donate	Haha Thanks Carol =D __________________ Remember that all alone is where I belong

08-05-2007, 09:32 PM	#6 (permalink)
fernanda_cb Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Curitiba! Age: 21 Posts: 167 Points: 15,541.33 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 15,541.33 Donate	Here's another one... I wrote it when I was in seventh grade I think (yeah, a long time ago)... I just translated it to english and changed a few things... It still means a lot to me, even though many years and many friendships passed by... This poem, however childish it may be, still has it's worth. And I hope some people get the real meaning of it... yes, it has a meaning to me for some friends from here =] I hope you like it.. "I have friends" I have friends That don't even know they're my friends Don't know what I feel for them What I would do for them Do they know that, If possible, I would give my life Just not to see them hurt? I need friends That care 'bout me About what I think Or what I feel That can be only Someone next to me I have friends That don't even know they're my friends __________________ Remember that all alone is where I belong

08-07-2007, 02:32 PM	#7 (permalink)
Nikky dyingsoul (?) Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Curitiba (PR), Brazil Age: 18 Posts: 3,149 Points: 1,269.88 Bank: 7,197.91 Total Points: 8,467.79 Donate $'cause you're not underage anymore \o - supervixen$	You definatly have friends, dear. <3 Loved the poems. __________________ Soul Embraced BR

08-01-2007, 05:09 PM	#2 (permalink)
Apholos Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Buenos Aires Argentina Age: 33 Posts: 46 Points: 11,605.01 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 11,605.01 Donate	An interesting poem I' d say. Going down is quite dangerous: I am talking from my own experience. Sometimes you don' t find the bottom, and that' s when you die. Thank goodness, we have a Master... he saved me several times. Life is like walking a long way: the end is always a blessing if our Master is yours too. Keep posting!

08-07-2007, 04:00 PM	#9 (permalink)
CaroLLeite Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Hell. Age: 23 Posts: 850 Points: 8,373.89 Bank: 6,256.02 Total Points: 14,629.90 Donate	I love it! Keep up the good work __________________ Life is a joke

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