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Shade · 01-13-2006, 11:55 PM

So...........I know i've promised to post stuff.but i'm dealing with stuff at school and home.
I am working on a speech in english....its on child abuse.
ANYBODY HAVE ANY SUGGESTIONS>???
i need all the help i can get.
my school ban this website so i can only go on once in a blue moon but i'll be on later this week so if anyone has any help for me PLEASE REPLY!!!
BUT I SWEAR ON MY LIFE i will post some stuff by febuary at the end......
anyway g2g
~shade~

Leanne · 01-14-2006, 06:23 AM

Hey, well what is it exactly on? Information about child abuse, stopping child abuse? Maybe you could check out some websites for some fact and things, try EndChildAbuse or This. Search in google, I'm sure you'll find somethiing useful. Good luck!

brokendoll · 01-14-2006, 01:22 PM

that poem about child abuse it makes me cry inside. ( im not able to cry now cuz im in the middle of a class ¬¬ ) but its like our buddy says, it happens

and the other its soo cool too.. you have a really good imagination, when i just wonder where do u take all this inspirations.. just keep on doing. you are really good at it.
keep posting.
cya around
xoxo

Shade · 01-15-2006, 09:26 PM

lots of stuff is going on which i cant say right now incase its traced by "somebody". I will post it in my LJ.
thanx for the links an compliments.
i have on poem i have been working on for like 6 months.
Her tear drops falling,
her silent voice
her spirits calling,
an unmade choice.

A broken Smile
upon her face,
her saddened eye's
stuck in that place.

Unheard cries,
whispered voices.
Decieving lies
enigmatic choices.

Sweet music,
inside her head
calms her spirit,
and she looks ahead.

Away from where she knows,
she knows she doesn't belong.

Broken dreams,

you see its STILL not done.
i also wrote this poem for my friend Dora aka Ali.

I really dont know where to start
because i have so much to say.
but yes i'll say my part,
so you can know the truth.

I guess you may not know,
who you remind me of so much
it really shows,
i hope you know.

you are everything and more
any friend could ask for
your one of a kind,
and really hard to find.(its true)

i dont know anyone as sweet as you,
or who is as talented .
but what i do know,
is that i cherish your friendship dearly.

i'll remember you forever,
for ever, ever, and ever.
like you said,
you'll be 50 and still remember me,
but i'll remember you to the very day i'm dead.

If you look in the garden
carved on a rock,
are three little words
forget-me-not.
so if there's one thing i dread
its losing you.

Ali,
you can count on me forever,
and when you need a hand
i'll be glad to lend one,
i can understand.

You are my,
Most favorite internet freind,
and i hope i'm right that i'm positive
your l♥ving friendship will never end.(?????)

At the beginning of this poem,
i said you remind me of someone.
and Ali, yes to me,
you remind my of our dear Amy Lee.

Your a loving person,
and one day i know
you'll find peace and harmony where your heart lies.
i just hope you'll be happy.

Ali you are a speacial person
you are unique,
and i know everyone who's gets to know you,
will l♥ve you just like me.

You helped me at the worst of times,
and was there when i needed a hand
you know its getting harder to think of ryhmes
but i think you'll understand.(:P)

Ali i wrote this poem just for you,
but now it has to end
i wish i could write for you forever.
but ..............
i do have one more thing to say,
thank-you.♥

thats all i can post for now!

~shade~

brokendoll · 01-16-2006, 11:46 AM

i loved broken dreams...
i can write some stuff but im not good with rimes. i gotta work on them.
i passing through families problems, maybe ill have so many inspirations these days, and i will post them on my place > our deep purple sky, share your thoughts <
cya around.
Roxy, xoxo.

Leanne · 01-16-2006, 12:04 PM

Hey, all I can say is wow! Amazing!

SoundOfSilence · 01-16-2006, 12:20 PM

very, very good poems, shade

i love the first one about childs abuse. you put a lot of feelings in it (in the others as well but the first one is just my fav). you've got great potential, please write more

<3

Shade · 01-18-2006, 08:02 PM

thanx everyone!!!
I love writing. one night i just picked up a pen and every thing just poured out of me.
I think i'll write a poem on rain I LOVE rain.
~shade~

Shade · 01-19-2006, 11:02 PM

Her tear drops falling,
her silent voice
her spirits calling,
an unmade choice.

A broken Smile
upon her face,
her saddened eye's
stuck in that place.

Unheard cries,
whispered voices.
Decieving lies
enigmatic choices.

Sweet music,
inside her head
calms her spirit,
and she looks ahead.

Away from where she knows,
she knows she doesn't belong.

Broken dreams,
shattered in her head.
A million pieces
begin to spred.

Throughout her life,
she see's her goal
to escape her horror,
and have control.

Her torturing abuse
must stop here,
or it will be to late
and she'll disappear.

I'm almost done it!!

01-13-2006, 11:55 PM	#11 (permalink)
Shade Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Narnia Age: 16 Posts: 42 Points: 22.45 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 22.45 Donate	help on a speech? So...........I know i've promised to post stuff.but i'm dealing with stuff at school and home. I am working on a speech in english....its on child abuse. ANYBODY HAVE ANY SUGGESTIONS>??? i need all the help i can get. my school ban this website so i can only go on once in a blue moon but i'll be on later this week so if anyone has any help for me PLEASE REPLY!!! BUT I SWEAR ON MY LIFE i will post some stuff by febuary at the end...... anyway g2g ~shade~

01-14-2006, 06:23 AM	#12 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 5,573.96 Bank: 160,236.86 Total Points: 165,810.82 Donate	Hey, well what is it exactly on? Information about child abuse, stopping child abuse? Maybe you could check out some websites for some fact and things, try EndChildAbuse or This. Search in google, I'm sure you'll find somethiing useful. Good luck! __________________

01-14-2006, 01:22 PM	#13 (permalink)
brokendoll Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: in a purple sky Posts: 256 Points: 453.87 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 453.87 Donate	lol \0// that poem about child abuse it makes me cry inside. ( im not able to cry now cuz im in the middle of a class ¬¬ ) but its like our buddy says, it happens and the other its soo cool too.. you have a really good imagination, when i just wonder where do u take all this inspirations.. just keep on doing. you are really good at it. keep posting. cya around xoxo

01-16-2006, 11:46 AM	#15 (permalink)
brokendoll Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: in a purple sky Posts: 256 Points: 453.87 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 453.87 Donate	i loved broken dreams... i can write some stuff but im not good with rimes. i gotta work on them. i passing through families problems, maybe ill have so many inspirations these days, and i will post them on my place > our deep purple sky, share your thoughts < cya around. Roxy, xoxo. __________________ "I lay dying everytime you call my name crying for help" Gabriella Lima Ev rulezRoxy Rox \m/

01-16-2006, 12:04 PM	#16 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 5,573.96 Bank: 160,236.86 Total Points: 165,810.82 Donate	Hey, all I can say is wow! Amazing! __________________

01-15-2006, 09:26 PM	#14 (permalink)
Shade Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Narnia Age: 16 Posts: 42 Points: 22.45 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 22.45 Donate	lots of stuff is going on which i cant say right now incase its traced by "somebody". I will post it in my LJ. thanx for the links an compliments. i have on poem i have been working on for like 6 months. Her tear drops falling, her silent voice her spirits calling, an unmade choice. A broken Smile upon her face, her saddened eye's stuck in that place. Unheard cries, whispered voices. Decieving lies enigmatic choices. Sweet music, inside her head calms her spirit, and she looks ahead. Away from where she knows, she knows she doesn't belong. Broken dreams, you see its STILL not done. i also wrote this poem for my friend Dora aka Ali. I really dont know where to start because i have so much to say. but yes i'll say my part, so you can know the truth. I guess you may not know, who you remind me of so much it really shows, i hope you know. you are everything and more any friend could ask for your one of a kind, and really hard to find.(its true) i dont know anyone as sweet as you, or who is as talented . but what i do know, is that i cherish your friendship dearly. i'll remember you forever, for ever, ever, and ever. like you said, you'll be 50 and still remember me, but i'll remember you to the very day i'm dead. If you look in the garden carved on a rock, are three little words forget-me-not. so if there's one thing i dread its losing you. Ali, you can count on me forever, and when you need a hand i'll be glad to lend one, i can understand. You are my, Most favorite internet freind, and i hope i'm right that i'm positive your l♥ving friendship will never end.(?????) At the beginning of this poem, i said you remind me of someone. and Ali, yes to me, you remind my of our dear Amy Lee. Your a loving person, and one day i know you'll find peace and harmony where your heart lies. i just hope you'll be happy. Ali you are a speacial person you are unique, and i know everyone who's gets to know you, will l♥ve you just like me. You helped me at the worst of times, and was there when i needed a hand you know its getting harder to think of ryhmes but i think you'll understand.(:P) Ali i wrote this poem just for you, but now it has to end i wish i could write for you forever. but .............. i do have one more thing to say, thank-you.♥ thats all i can post for now! ~shade~

01-16-2006, 12:20 PM	#17 (permalink)
SoundOfSilence Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Berlin, Germany Age: 17 Posts: 522 Points: 329.33 Bank: 0.42 Total Points: 329.75 Donate	very, very good poems, shade i love the first one about childs abuse. you put a lot of feelings in it (in the others as well but the first one is just my fav). you've got great potential, please write more <3 __________________ Alessandro Del Piero is teh best guy ever.

01-18-2006, 08:02 PM	#18 (permalink)
Shade Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Narnia Age: 16 Posts: 42 Points: 22.45 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 22.45 Donate	thanx thanx everyone!!! I love writing. one night i just picked up a pen and every thing just poured out of me. I think i'll write a poem on rain I LOVE rain. ~shade~

01-19-2006, 11:02 PM	#19 (permalink)
Shade Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Narnia Age: 16 Posts: 42 Points: 22.45 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 22.45 Donate	its almost done Her tear drops falling, her silent voice her spirits calling, an unmade choice. A broken Smile upon her face, her saddened eye's stuck in that place. Unheard cries, whispered voices. Decieving lies enigmatic choices. Sweet music, inside her head calms her spirit, and she looks ahead. Away from where she knows, she knows she doesn't belong. Broken dreams, shattered in her head. A million pieces begin to spred. Throughout her life, she see's her goal to escape her horror, and have control. Her torturing abuse must stop here, or it will be to late and she'll disappear. I'm almost done it!!

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