Shivercide:

I'm really glad that you liked the sonnet. I haven't written one since college, and I wasn't ever very good at confining myself to a pre-set structure. The Lady of the Isle however........

It just seemed to flow through me quite easily. Thanks for reading it.

myimmortalenemy:

Welcome back! I'm glad that you weren't scared off by my sudden change of topic. It's been a very long while since I could write about love, and I'm trying to make a book filled with pleasant things while the feelings are still so fresh and vivid. I'm glad that you liked the sonnet also. And I'm glad that you still read my work.

-----------------------------------------------

Ok, so here's another. Maybe it will be the last for awhile; maybe not. I suppose these things come and go, so forgive me if I hope that I maintain these excellent thoughts for as long as possible.

A Bhantiarna:

In the calmness of the night, I still see you;
Clearly, like an ember shining brightly.

Strangely, there’s no fear for me to subdue;
Influence, to me that seems unseemly.

Because the way that I feel, is unique;
Never have I felt this way before.
Never have I felt so blissfully weak,
And never have I ever dreamed of more.

Because the way you resonate, is so,
Unmistakably charming…

I can’t describe,
How great it is, to be with you.

And when I trace your form with my,
Unworthy hands,
You seem to make me feel,
Like so much more than a man…

Because,
Every time, I close my eyes,
I see your face.

And I am swept beneath…

The rug of all that’s better;
Forgetting the deceit.

The double faces and the lies…

Only bliss remains…

In the endless ocean,
Of your seductive hazel eyes.

__________________

You have a talent for writing.

myimmortalenemy & Jennifer

Thanks for both of your comments. I'm glad that my current feelings of love have been enjoyable for you to read. I'm enjoying it quite a bit myself.

I should have something new up later on today, or tommorow.

Until then, thanks again, and take care...

__________________

-Song

Hold On:

Hold on...
Just a little bit longer.
Just a little while longer.
Then longer.

Then more...

Things in here are beginning to crumble,
Matter is losing its consistency.

I’m in here, alone and terrified,
Wondering what will become of me.

The clouds in here are beginning to rumble.
The ground opens up, and down I tumble.

And I am swallowed by my own,
Relentless need, to hold on to,
Something to hold on to...

Something to hold on to...

Hold on,
Just a little bit longer.
Just a little while longer.
No longer.

In just a moment,
This moment shall pass.
This pain cannot last.
This, will pass.

Things all around me, remind me of my suffering,
There’s nothing around me, and still I’m suffering!

I’ll take this torment, and I will suffocate it.

I will take this torment,
And,
I will,
. . .

Suffocate.

Striving to hold on,
To escape this place I find myself restrained within.

Striving to move on,
To escape this time; this place; before it ends with me inside.

__________________

I really like this piece, there's a subtlety to it but it's beautiful none-the-less. It flows wonderfully also.

this is my fav part

Great work

__________________

~EDITED POST AND UPDATED POEM 5-11~
Thanks you guys, I'm glad that you liked it. That was an older one that I had just finished editing after a long time collecting dust. I wanted to see how it went.

Here's something that I finished earlier. It seems that I'm not quite done with writing about love yet...

Interesting...

Tell me what you think.

----------------------------------------------------

Caltuinn Anór:

Translucent and decadent,
Particles of shimmering;
Luminescent light,
Do seep...

Through shuttered, curtained windows;
The bowels of my mind at ease.

As I awaken with the day,
To give unto thee,
Thy way.

***

Whichever way that is my love.

For only in your smile,
Have I learned to smile for myself.

I treasure you more than life;
Hold you dear in my heart.
I envisioned you in my mind;
Knew that I'd meet you in time...

And time is on my side for once.
Still, I'd wait for you forever.

If you'd ardently become mine;
Find trust in me completely;
Then yours as well, I would be.
The night would end,
And day would breathe.

Because night you see, is finite,
Though often it is filled with dreams.
Stationary, and abstract;
A thousand disjointed images speak.

But none like you, my lovely one,
It seems, there is no choice:
You reassembled my broken heart,
With your elegant, resonating voice.

And your voice, so like an angels,
Accentuates your mind.

I am yours;
Will you be mine?

Because, I will always hold you dear.

I will recollect your features,
And lay aside my fear.

If in the future,
I must reminisce...

I'll remember you...

Your kiss...

***

Don't ever kiss me goodbye my dear;
Goodbyes are entirely overrated.

But,
If some day, we must part...

There is one thing you should know:

I shall not regret, a single day...

That...

I gave unto thee,
Thy way.

----------------------------------------------------
OK - One More


Tranquility:

My heart hurts again,
And I can’t find the words to say.

I can’t help it,
I’ve been stranded...

I’ve never had, anyone to talk with;
I’ve had some one to talk to...

But they’ve never said, anything to me.

I can’t control this.
I can’t contain this restless feeling.

I’m so scared of you;
I can see right through you…

And you see me, through all the shit,
That covers every microscopic speck,
Of my existence...

I offer no resistance...

And why should I?

***

It’s so weird to feel this way;
Seeing things this way.

I feel so empty inside.
I can’t seem to find myself...

No matter how hard,
I try.

I don’t remember,
Ever having felt like this.
Except when I’m alone like this:
Lost in my mind.

Why am I so frightened of you?
Why am I so weak when I’m near you?

Why should I, have to fear you?

***

I can’t seem to find,
My tranquility in this place.

I can’t seem to lose myself.
Because I always seem, to leave a trace.

__________________