Aww..no problem! You are more than welcome! It's a great feeling to be understood..I know.

ok i'm gonna try sumthing different...i'm gonna try 2 write a song that i havent even started or n e thing, i'm just gonna type a bunch of random words that come in my head cuz i'm bored lol.

just a shadow on the wall.
just a footprint on the ground.
just a single little raindrop
falling through the sky.
i am a unique object.
there is nothing else identical
to the individual that i am.
and yet, i can easily be lost
among all the other beings in this world.
but somehow, you see me.
though i may be surrounded by brighter flowers,
i'm not invisible among the thorns.
why should i be significant to you?
why should my existence have any importance?
how can one like you stumble across the same path
that i myself walk day after day?
is it coincidence? no, this unimaginable joy
can be no accident.
yes, i am happy that you found me
and picked me from all the rest.
i just can't help but question why.
and you give the answer i was hoping for:
"because i love you."

ok it sucks but i'm bored and felt like typing lol

it's good raindrop...i really liked the way it began and then saying you are a unique object...and then the middle part kinda reminded me of missing a bit with the words significant and imporant...the opposite obviously in missing tho...and the ending is nice...

No..it doesn't suck..you must have confidence!! That is something I have learned over the years.

thanx sweetwater! i've been hearing alot of people say you're an amazing writer...i'm gonna go check out yer stuff now

k i've posted this song before, but i'd like to post it again because i really like it!

MY INSANITY

you don't know how i feel.
whether or not you ever will,
only time will reveal.
but you go around,
saying that i'm crazy.
well, you can thank yourself for that,
because you are the reason for my insanity.

chorus
you claim i dont see what's real,
but you believe your own lies.
pretending to be oblivious
to the truth before your eyes.
you say you hate the way it is,
but it won't change unless you do.
i for one am sick of the constant struggle
that i have loving you.

you blame everybody else
when the fault belongs to you.
can easily point out the imperfections
in everything that i do.
but when it comes to you,
you can never admit that you made a mistake.
but it's time that this battle ends.
it's become far more than i can take.

chorus

you have given me this madness.
you have given me this sadness.
and you have put this emptiness in me.
yes, you are the reason for my insanity.

thanks vanilladreams! ok, i will try to have confidence and not get down on myself. God bless

Raindrop..I really liked this! The first verse was my favorite..I think it's the strongest verse and makes the loudest impact.

Dear raindrops, i really like all of your poetry. especially in your untitled poem, it reminded me of the Left Behind series. i can't find anything wrong or needs improving in yours songs and poems. excellent work, and i hope to see more of it

thank u morgan lefay! i think i'll be posting more soon..hopefully inspiration will strike at any moment.