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sweetwater · 01-03-2005, 08:53 PM

thanks for the compliment raindrop about my writing...big fan of `my insanity' btw.

raindrop829 · 01-05-2005, 02:14 AM

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thanks for the compliment raindrop about my writing...big fan of `my insanity' btw.

no problem sweetwater...i'm glad you like my insanity that's one of my favorites too. God bless

VanillaDreams · 01-05-2005, 12:51 PM

I checked your thread hoping for something new..I hope you don't have writers block!

raindrop829 · 01-05-2005, 01:43 PM

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Originally Posted by VanillaDreams

I checked your thread hoping for something new..I hope you don't have writers block!

lol i wouldn't say writer's block...i have just learned when i write a bunch of things at once, they end up sounding the same as the last thing i wrote. so i try to put a bit of spacing in between writings so there's variation in what the songs are about. but thanks for checking out my thread. God bless

VanillaDreams · 01-05-2005, 03:14 PM

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Originally Posted by raindrop829

lol i wouldn't say writer's block...i have just learned when i write a bunch of things at once, they end up sounding the same as the last thing i wrote. so i try to put a bit of spacing in between writings so there's variation in what the songs are about. but thanks for checking out my thread. God bless

Awww..you're so smart.hehe!!

kiwichick · 01-05-2005, 05:54 PM

I should've came here sooner you are very talented. My favourite would have to be my insanity but they are all really good. I admire you for having such strong faith. Not many people your age would have the courage to show it. that doesnt make much sense but im not feeling very smart today lol. Keep up the good work.

raindrop829 · 01-05-2005, 06:35 PM

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Originally Posted by kiwichick

I should've came here sooner you are very talented. My favourite would have to be my insanity but they are all really good. I admire you for having such strong faith. Not many people your age would have the courage to show it. that doesnt make much sense but im not feeling very smart today lol. Keep up the good work.

thanx kiwichick. sometimes its hard to show what i believe in, but i'm learning that if i truly believe in something, it should make a difference in my actions and people should know what i believe. thanx for your comments, hopefully i'll be posting more soon! GOd bless

raindrop829 · 01-05-2005, 07:47 PM

k i wrote this one awhile ago but i kinda rewrote it today...its just a poem, so here goes...

THE FOREST

as i walk through the forest,
all is quiet except for the chirping of the birds.
perhaps warning of my presence.
i smell the freshness of the pine.
i feel dead leaves being crushed below my feet.
i think of people, and how they say
that they hate to be alone.
how they need someone to share this beauty with.
but for me, it's different.
because you don't always have to see someone
to know that they are there.
His voice, more silent than a whisper,
and yet, it echoes through all the trees.
He says to me,"do you see,
as you hear the birds and smell the pine,
the beauty i have given you?
but i want you to know
that this is but a mere glimpse
of the home i am preparing you
that will last for all eternity."
He tells me these things, and more
as i walk through the forest.

kinda weird, but oh well i like it

thanx you guys for all the comments you've given me, you guys rock! God bless

kiwichick · 01-06-2005, 12:24 AM

I love it! It's so nice and peaceful. Most of the poems I read on here are all sad and depressing. Nice to have some positive stuff

sweetwater · 01-06-2005, 04:57 AM

very serene piece...nice work raindrop.

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kiwichick Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Oamaru Posts: 759 Points: 3,401.59 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 3,401.59 Donate	I should've came here sooner you are very talented. My favourite would have to be my insanity but they are all really good. I admire you for having such strong faith. Not many people your age would have the courage to show it. that doesnt make much sense but im not feeling very smart today lol. Keep up the good work. __________________ ..... www.brokensilencenz.com .....

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kiwichick Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Oamaru Posts: 759 Points: 3,401.59 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 3,401.59 Donate	I love it! It's so nice and peaceful. Most of the poems I read on here are all sad and depressing. Nice to have some positive stuff __________________ ..... www.brokensilencenz.com .....

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01-03-2005, 08:53 PM	#21 (permalink)
sweetwater Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 862 Points: 142.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 142.00 Donate	thanks for the compliment raindrop about my writing...big fan of `my insanity' btw.

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VanillaDreams Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Columbia, MD Age: 25 Posts: 152 Points: 710.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 710.00 Donate	I checked your thread hoping for something new..I hope you don't have writers block!

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raindrop829 Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: On the Boulavard of Broken Dreams Age: 18 Posts: 223 Points: 194.25 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 194.25 Donate	k i wrote this one awhile ago but i kinda rewrote it today...its just a poem, so here goes... THE FOREST as i walk through the forest, all is quiet except for the chirping of the birds. perhaps warning of my presence. i smell the freshness of the pine. i feel dead leaves being crushed below my feet. i think of people, and how they say that they hate to be alone. how they need someone to share this beauty with. but for me, it's different. because you don't always have to see someone to know that they are there. His voice, more silent than a whisper, and yet, it echoes through all the trees. He says to me,"do you see, as you hear the birds and smell the pine, the beauty i have given you? but i want you to know that this is but a mere glimpse of the home i am preparing you that will last for all eternity." He tells me these things, and more as i walk through the forest. kinda weird, but oh well i like it thanx you guys for all the comments you've given me, you guys rock! God bless

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sweetwater Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 862 Points: 142.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 142.00 Donate	very serene piece...nice work raindrop.

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