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Raskull · 04-23-2006, 01:01 PM

Tomorrow
I've come so far haven't I?
Walked through flames
I've come through haven't I?

My love I've made it into
My clearing
Clearing out my littered mind
With eyes are wide open

Protector
I'm slipping from your grip

Tomorrow is the day
Last week was
The beginning of the end
And today is a day of thought

I wish I didn't love
Love, you're all I have
But I do need something more

Everyone's leaving without waiting
For my blessings and goodbyes
This small world never felt so hallow

I'm alone inside
Shouting inside
Into the cold sunless air
Only to hear my echos

You know I need to fill the void
The hole I dug
It will be my grave
Maybe I will fill it tomorrow

Tomorrow is the day
We will see what will happen
In what they call tomorrow

Sorry for tomorrow
For the days before that
And for the years before that
Sorry for being born

I GIVE UP

I tried, I did and got far
I hope you were happy while it lasted
Hope I'll love you when I'm gone
Will you love me when I'm gone?

Sickness is in my mind and heart
Something I shall never overcome
Might I die, I'm sorry
But maybe it's better that way

Please, I beg
Please forgive me
It's not my right to control
Not my time to be alright for once

I give up

And wish me good luck
For tomorrow
Whatever it May be

OdeToTheMuse · 04-23-2006, 02:56 PM

They're really movin'... Omg the last one is sooo sad..

but great job!!!

Raskull · 04-24-2006, 07:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by that fan from switzerland...

They're really movin'... Omg the last one is sooo sad..

but great job!!!

Thank you very much! I'd rep you, but it won't let me

how sad.

Just something I feel better expressing in a poem. Very short.

Because of Me
When everyone around you
Aches from inside-out
Day in and day out
You begin to wonder
Could this some how be
Because of me?

Raskull · 04-26-2006, 11:06 PM

We can not live
When there is nothing to live for
This suffering should not go unpunished
Yet I watch as it does

Like a spoiled pack of dogs
Attacking out of greed
But mostly boredum
While those around them starve

What kind of choice is this?
Between the black and red death
Sickness, like wild fire,
Spreads it's own hell

A book open for the public
With pages screaming hoarse in agony
Here people are treated like objects
Justice is dirty revenge

So you tell me
My dearest of friends
...
Is it even worth asking?

Raskull · 05-09-2006, 09:57 PM

Down
Seven down and many to go
Yet six more years remain

My feelings
Are unnatural and abnormal
So I'm wrong in such a mind
If only you knew

Another down
And another less to worry for
Another one put down and out
Six feet under a solid headstone

I'm emptying out my commitments
I'm throwing it all away
As I said I would
Damn all who fail to take heed

Though my heart is sinking
I no longer have the desire to care
Need to have a new identity
I need to be numb

These are dirty slave hands
No matter how hard I wash
The sins and sickness will remain
For other's sake, bring me down

Down part II
Raw and untamed feelings
For the better I acted on
And thus it happend
Like a tragic playwrite

You said you had to go
Turned the corner and went to run
But you didn't have a clue where to go
So your flesh and bone was met with force

I caught you and cradled you in the rain
God cried for us as we kissed

Then my dawn was met with teeth
Of a jagged blade
I sawed myself in two
Should you sew me back together

I laid down and you prayed with me
As we let the angles cry
For all our untold sorrows

~river~ · 05-09-2006, 10:50 PM

holy hell you are talented!!! and descriptive and emotive and moving and just plain brilliant. love to see more.

Raskull · 05-15-2006, 09:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~river~

holy hell you are talented!!! and descriptive and emotive and moving and just plain brilliant. love to see more.

Thank you haha

Down part III
Slowly decaying inside-out
Being pushed from
Pulsing needles
Drowning in a well

A humorless laugh echos
Through my demented mind
Closterphobic insomanic
In here it's too foggy to see

Blinding myself
Suffocation
The cause of eventual death

Senses dull and I'm numb
My dream world
And your reality
Thogether in an unmarked grave

Take my hand
I'll jump with you
Down, down, down
The high point of our lives

No bottem, no salvation
As sweet and slick as
Unentended homicide

Wildangel · 05-15-2006, 10:03 PM

Was gonna rep ya for this last poem, but it won't let me darnit. I like it, very discriptive. You are very talented. Keep it up.

TearsofShadows · 05-16-2006, 08:28 AM

Raskull, i Lurve that last poem!!!

very descriptive, and it flows so well!

Its great!!!!

Keep it up; you gots some talent!

hyatt[x]core · 05-16-2006, 08:32 AM

Aww, I love this line:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Raskull

Take my hand/ I'll jump with you.

That's really cute.

04-23-2006, 01:01 PM	#131 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 18 Posts: 485 Points: 3,324.98 Bank: 8,356.43 Total Points: 11,681.41 Donate	Tomorrow I've come so far haven't I? Walked through flames I've come through haven't I? My love I've made it into My clearing Clearing out my littered mind With eyes are wide open Protector I'm slipping from your grip Tomorrow is the day Last week was The beginning of the end And today is a day of thought I wish I didn't love Love, you're all I have But I do need something more Everyone's leaving without waiting For my blessings and goodbyes This small world never felt so hallow I'm alone inside Shouting inside Into the cold sunless air Only to hear my echos You know I need to fill the void The hole I dug It will be my grave Maybe I will fill it tomorrow Tomorrow is the day We will see what will happen In what they call tomorrow Sorry for tomorrow For the days before that And for the years before that Sorry for being born I GIVE UP I tried, I did and got far I hope you were happy while it lasted Hope I'll love you when I'm gone Will you love me when I'm gone? Sickness is in my mind and heart Something I shall never overcome Might I die, I'm sorry But maybe it's better that way Please, I beg Please forgive me It's not my right to control Not my time to be alright for once I give up And wish me good luck For tomorrow Whatever it May be __________________ Fuck you and your rules. Smile for me.

04-23-2006, 02:56 PM	#132 (permalink)
OdeToTheMuse Senior Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: I am floatin' in serenity... Age: 18 Posts: 713 Points: 123.16 Bank: 1,210.48 Total Points: 1,333.63 Donate	They're really movin'... Omg the last one is sooo sad.. but great job!!! __________________ DeviantArt. FlickR. ArtThread.

04-26-2006, 11:06 PM	#134 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 18 Posts: 485 Points: 3,324.98 Bank: 8,356.43 Total Points: 11,681.41 Donate	We can not live When there is nothing to live for This suffering should not go unpunished Yet I watch as it does Like a spoiled pack of dogs Attacking out of greed But mostly boredum While those around them starve What kind of choice is this? Between the black and red death Sickness, like wild fire, Spreads it's own hell A book open for the public With pages screaming hoarse in agony Here people are treated like objects Justice is dirty revenge So you tell me My dearest of friends ... Is it even worth asking? __________________ Fuck you and your rules. Smile for me.

05-09-2006, 09:57 PM	#135 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 18 Posts: 485 Points: 3,324.98 Bank: 8,356.43 Total Points: 11,681.41 Donate	Down Seven down and many to go Yet six more years remain My feelings Are unnatural and abnormal So I'm wrong in such a mind If only you knew Another down And another less to worry for Another one put down and out Six feet under a solid headstone I'm emptying out my commitments I'm throwing it all away As I said I would Damn all who fail to take heed Though my heart is sinking I no longer have the desire to care Need to have a new identity I need to be numb These are dirty slave hands No matter how hard I wash The sins and sickness will remain For other's sake, bring me down Down part II Raw and untamed feelings For the better I acted on And thus it happend Like a tragic playwrite You said you had to go Turned the corner and went to run But you didn't have a clue where to go So your flesh and bone was met with force I caught you and cradled you in the rain God cried for us as we kissed Then my dawn was met with teeth Of a jagged blade I sawed myself in two Should you sew me back together I laid down and you prayed with me As we let the angles cry For all our untold sorrows __________________ Fuck you and your rules. Smile for me.

05-09-2006, 10:50 PM	#136 (permalink)
~river~ Lips Like Morphine Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 2,015 Points: 874.09 Bank: 209,972.92 Total Points: 210,847.00 Donate	holy hell you are talented!!! and descriptive and emotive and moving and just plain brilliant. love to see more. __________________ Breathe for love tomorrow Cause there's no hope for today Breathe for love tomorrow Cause maybe there's another way Today's the day when the dreaming ends...

05-15-2006, 10:03 PM	#138 (permalink)
Wildangel Moderator Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 2,637 Points: 2,827.74 Bank: 13,966,606.43 Total Points: 13,969,434.17 Donate	Was gonna rep ya for this last poem, but it won't let me darnit. I like it, very discriptive. You are very talented. Keep it up. __________________