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Raskull · 08-10-2008, 11:45 PM

Thank you much Tigger and River.

Yeah, I don't care who you are, an addiction will eat you up and spit you out.

Not poetry, just words.

Stranger

Har,
I don't believe him
He wants to swim
But my hopes are dim.
Har,
I watch with weary eyes
Seeing sick lies
Trying to flame guys
Want to burn disguise.
Fuck Har,
The lure is in flight
As we wait for night
Be ready for the bite.

P.S. Dont trust Har with a blade or knife.

Raskull · 09-09-2008, 07:52 PM

I am the sigh
Brought by the blade

My tool is steady
Random and disorderd
My focus is steady
Into deserving skin

I am the quiver
Forged from the flame

My life is eternal
Untimed and timeless
My draw is eternal
Into forgotten flesh

I am the start,
The escape
The destruction
And The End.

~river~ · 09-09-2008, 11:27 PM

firstly it is good to see you back around again

secondly the beast is amazing. the images and in general just the writing.
favourite part is

Quote:

I am the start,
The escape
The destruction
And The End.

it is impressive

Raskull · 09-09-2008, 11:42 PM

Thank you so much as always.

Ive been trying to hang around. Good luck with the topic in the writer's group.

Sweet Tigger · 09-10-2008, 01:11 AM

Your words never seem to amaze me...they are phenominal!
I love how everything falls together, and its so deep, and
very meaningful!
I would love to read more, I actually read alot of your stuff, even
when I'm offline! <33

Raskull · 09-15-2008, 09:41 PM

Thank you so much. o.O why would you read my stuff offline? lol I actually had an offer from a tiny publisher but I didn't take it very seriously...

Teather me off
Offshore, off mind
Head spinning
Mind tripping
Soul falling
Heart freezing
You tied me bare
To drown.

Sweet Tigger · 09-17-2008, 11:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Raskull

Thank you so much. o.O why would you read my stuff offline? lol I actually had an offer from a tiny publisher but I didn't take it very seriously...

Teather me off
Offshore, off mind
Head spinning
Mind tripping
Soul falling
Heart freezing
You tied me bare
To drown.

This is really deep, and reading these words,
reminds me of something that I once have seen.
Sensational work, with such strong, powerful words!
I love your stuff so much! <33

I was saying off line, when I'm just lurking around the baord! lol

Raskull · 11-03-2008, 01:08 PM

Thanks Tigger. I was really meaning to reply days ago... and I haven't been on. Sorry bout that Tig

From the kennel
To the pen
I'm away from that place
But it's memories I can't replace

Now it's a binding thought
Thoughts for things long gone
I will never forget
My dear, I'll never forgive

So long these scars burn
I wake in dead of night
Drenched in dreams of fight
For the silence I urn

I won't rest anymore
Untill your cold corpse
Is laid to rest
And with you a frozen war

Six feet under
Dirt, worms and maggots
The only way
To shut you up.

08-10-2008, 11:45 PM	#181 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 18 Posts: 485 Points: 3,324.98 Bank: 8,356.43 Total Points: 11,681.41 Donate	Thank you much Tigger and River. Yeah, I don't care who you are, an addiction will eat you up and spit you out. Not poetry, just words. Stranger Har, I don't believe him He wants to swim But my hopes are dim. Har, I watch with weary eyes Seeing sick lies Trying to flame guys Want to burn disguise. Fuck Har, The lure is in flight As we wait for night Be ready for the bite. P.S. Dont trust Har with a blade or knife. __________________ Fuck you and your rules. Smile for me.

09-09-2008, 07:52 PM	#182 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 18 Posts: 485 Points: 3,324.98 Bank: 8,356.43 Total Points: 11,681.41 Donate	The Beast I am the sigh Brought by the blade My tool is steady Random and disorderd My focus is steady Into deserving skin I am the quiver Forged from the flame My life is eternal Untimed and timeless My draw is eternal Into forgotten flesh I am the start, The escape The destruction And The End. __________________ Fuck you and your rules. Smile for me.

09-09-2008, 11:42 PM	#184 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 18 Posts: 485 Points: 3,324.98 Bank: 8,356.43 Total Points: 11,681.41 Donate	Thank you so much as always. Ive been trying to hang around. Good luck with the topic in the writer's group. __________________ Fuck you and your rules. Smile for me.

09-10-2008, 01:11 AM	#185 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Nothing Brings Me Down Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 2,844 Points: 7,374.48 Bank: 180,015.00 Total Points: 187,389.47 Donate $PIE. \m/ Heh, you're awesome. :D - CrownlessAgain$	Your words never seem to amaze me...they are phenominal! I love how everything falls together, and its so deep, and very meaningful! I would love to read more, I actually read alot of your stuff, even when I'm offline! <33 __________________ Always Live Life To The Fullest, And Never Take Anything For Granted!

09-15-2008, 09:41 PM	#186 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 18 Posts: 485 Points: 3,324.98 Bank: 8,356.43 Total Points: 11,681.41 Donate	Thank you so much. o.O why would you read my stuff offline? lol I actually had an offer from a tiny publisher but I didn't take it very seriously... Teather me off Offshore, off mind Head spinning Mind tripping Soul falling Heart freezing You tied me bare To drown. __________________ Fuck you and your rules. Smile for me.

11-03-2008, 01:08 PM	#188 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 18 Posts: 485 Points: 3,324.98 Bank: 8,356.43 Total Points: 11,681.41 Donate	Thanks Tigger. I was really meaning to reply days ago... and I haven't been on. Sorry bout that Tig From the kennel To the pen I'm away from that place But it's memories I can't replace Now it's a binding thought Thoughts for things long gone I will never forget My dear, I'll never forgive So long these scars burn I wake in dead of night Drenched in dreams of fight For the silence I urn I won't rest anymore Untill your cold corpse Is laid to rest And with you a frozen war Six feet under Dirt, worms and maggots The only way To shut you up. __________________ Fuck you and your rules. Smile for me.

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