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Old 11-18-2004, 04:40 AM   #11 (permalink)
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good piece...the imagery is very powerful.
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Old 11-18-2004, 11:36 AM   #12 (permalink)
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i dunno where this one came from. worked on it some. seems ok.

Never Home Again
As I sit and think again
They all leave me again

I see them smile
I see them happy
And I hate them in my misery

Hiding behind my eyes
Burning hate and never ending lies
Knife over me
Knife in my hand
I can’t scream or cry
Only to be blown away with the sand
As I kiss your cold lips I freeze
I die into you

Never be home again

I keep crying my blood
And write our life
I keep crying my pain
And losing my life

I bow down to you, my hated one
I’ll keep you safe from the sun
Command me, hate me, rape me
I am you slave, master

Hiding behind my eyes
Where the cold fear and pain lies
Knife over me
Knife in my hand
I can’t scream or cry
Only to be blown away with the sand
As I kiss your cold lips I freeze
I die into you (I am yours)

Never be home again
Never coming home again

You treat me like nothing
I hate the ways I feel
‘Cause I still feel like nothing
you’re my blessing
you are a curse to life

all I want is you
I’m so lost without you
I want you to lie to me
Please tell me you love me

I’m falling
Please wake me, save me
I beg you for mercy

I look up to you
Worship you, fallow you
My sinful love
I love you, serve you
And you strike me down
Lay me in the ground

Hiding behind my eyes
Maddening sorrow, and insane love lies
Knife within me
Knife in my hand
I can’t scream or cry
Only to be blown away with the sand
As I kiss your cold lips I freeze
I die into you

Never be home again
Never coming home again
Never to live in your hell again

You’ll never see me again
I’ve finally realized you are a sin
I see now, I’m sick
Sick of how you mistreat me

Confused and dazed
What has happened?
I’ll never run back to you
Because I hate you and every thing you do
Never home again

I’m falling to pieces again
I am a dark angel without her wings
Without you again
I sleep without you to wake me again

Never close my eyes
So I can see your lies
I can see you

Finally I feel free and grand
Only to be blown away with the sand
As I kiss your cold lips I freeze
I die into you

Never be home again
Never coming home again
Never to live in your hell again
Never to wonderland
Never running to you again
Never to live in your wonderland again
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Old 11-18-2004, 11:40 AM   #13 (permalink)
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I have said it once, but I will say it again.. I LOVE YOUR SONGS

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Hiding behind my eyes
Burning hate and never ending lies
Knife over me
Knife in my hand
I can’t scream or cry
Only to be blown away with the sand
As I kiss you cold lips I freeze
I die into you
My favorite part.. your lyrics are very dark.. well done .. please keep writing.
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Old 11-18-2004, 03:08 PM   #14 (permalink)
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This pain and hate will never die
So hate me as I cry
I love these lines, and I love all of Blood and Never Home Again. Please keep them coming!
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Old 11-19-2004, 02:36 AM   #15 (permalink)
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never home again blew me away...you are a brilliant writer.
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Old 11-19-2004, 06:35 PM   #16 (permalink)
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aw you guys are too cool i think i should try to update more often. you guys make me feel smart
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Old 11-21-2004, 12:02 PM   #17 (permalink)
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here's another short old one. decided to fix it up some and give it to hungry fans. hopefully i'll have a newer and better one for you guys soon but you'll just have to chew on this one for now


hell to save
May you scream
Let them take you
May they break you
Meet the demon inside

Odd yet you fit it now
Just like me
Soulless, quiet, dead

Echoed scream
Blood red carpet
Soft is silence
Lay you to sleep
May you never dream of waking
I go in hell to save you

Diluted minds
Diluting youth
Scream for me
I won’t listen
Did you ever hear me out?

I see the pain inside
Behind your blinding lie
Block me out
Keep me away
I’ll still get to you

Echoed screams
Blood red carpets
Soft is silence
Lay to sleep
Never dream of waking
I stay in hell to save you

Don’t act so innocent
I know what you’ve done
You killed me just for fun
And never let me rest in peace

I screamed and begged and cried
You just laughed
Echoed scream
Blood red carpet
Soft is silence
Lay me sleep
Never dream of waking
I stay hell to save you
It’s what friends do
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Old 11-21-2004, 12:12 PM   #18 (permalink)
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*chews* This is amazing, a very good read. Please post more!
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Old 11-25-2004, 09:44 PM   #19 (permalink)
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well i was meaning to make you guys wait longer but hell im bored! so here's my new song

Reflections
You stare into the mirror

Hated, angry, alone
You see my dark twisted soul
You were happy but even that I stole
You stare into my evil eyes
Caring, kind, but they’re all lies

I feel your pain
Oh it tastes so good
To see another go insane

Hello to me
Welcome to everything you hate
Leaving everything you ever wanted to be
Breaking all the things you hope to create
I enter you
I eat your soul
I am you

Your torn and tattered reflections
Hold on to the shattered peaces tight
Don’t let me take life without a fight
Ruthlessly I drag you away from the light

Ms. Ruler, Ms. Queen
You have power make me stop
What’s wrong?
Did our leader become weak?

You stare endless into the mirror
Begging, crawling, burning
If you can break away
My curse will only come nearer
If you can fake a smile

Say hello to me
Welcome to everything you hate
Leaving everything you ever wanted to be
Breaking all the things you hope to create
I enter you
I eat your soul
I am you

Mocking you
I’m only glass, make me stop
So hit me, make me drop
I tear away your glory
Your dreams, your hopes
Oh I love it when you cry

Ms. Leader, Ms. Preacher
This world is yours for the taking
You can’t pretend anymore
They see now, your faking

You have power (make me stop)
I’ve pulled you from
Soon, you can’t turn back
Make me stop

You run (this should be fun)
Stop to pick up the peaces of your reflections
Death has you in cold hands


Hello to me
Welcome to everything you hate
Leaving everything you ever wanted to be
Breaking all the things you hope to create
I enter you
I eat your soul
I am you
I am your soul

You stare into the mirror
Hated, angry, alone
my dark twisted soul
we were happy but even that I stole
You stare into my evil eyes
All me, my dear we are lies

I enter you
I eat your soul
I am you
I am your soul
I am your reflections

HAPPY TURKEY DAY!!!!!
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well i figure i should make my own little thread to put my shit in. so anyways i know i already posted this one but not in this thread

Blood (named now)
Am I really to blame for all this blood spill?
Are you so ready to get me away from home?
Can you believe that I am here still?
You think every thing is okay when I’m alone

Smell my fear now
Kill me now
Do you still think I care about how I’m treated?

I just can’t make myself care about you
I just can’t help but hate this life

I cut deeper in my skin
I scratch harder to kill things within
And smear my blood on your face
And laugh at the taste

Can you here them?
Deeper, deeper, more, more
I can’t breath I can’t die
Pick it up again
What can I do?
Die, die, die
Am I no use to you?

Am I really to blame for all this blood spill?
Are you so ready to get me away from home?
Can you believe that I am here still?
You think every thing is okay when I’m alone

Deeper, deeper, more, more
Pick it up again
Die, die, die

I cut deeper in my skin
I scratch harder to kill things within
And smear my blood on your face
And laugh at the taste

You could never see the pain
You could never hear me scream
You could feel me go insane
How ordinary can I seem?

Do you see this?
Can you hear me?
Do you feel this?

Tearing at my skin
Releasing blood and sin

deeper in my skin
harder to kill things within
smear my blood on your face
And laugh at the taste

Deeper, harder, die, die. die, DIE, DIE
Again, slower, more, blood, more
blood, blood, blood, bleed, more, blood


and here's another one i wrote in math class (it's kinda crappy but oh well)


Watch Me
Oh my sweet pain
I’ve gone sweetly insane

And I am happy now
I’m going to break down now
I no longer feel like me
I am stupid
I’m not free
I am useless

Cut me
Watch me bleed

I’m ready for something
I’m really worth nothing
And I know you love to watch me

Watch me bleed!

Nothing’s real
Everything’s so untrue
We can never heal
This knife is for you

I’m ready
I’m ready for something
It really means nothing
I’m dieing!
I’m suffocating
I’m drowning
Oh I’m bleeding
I know you love to watch me

Now watch me bleed

Be helpless
Be just like me
This is my world

Welcome to hell

I can not breathe
This I still can’t believe
You’re watching me
And you’re happy

Fading, my world is fading
But I leave behind my horror

So I’m ready
I’m ready for your world
I’m ready for hell
I’m so ready

Watch me bleed
Hear me scream
Sweet pain
Nothing’s real
Sweetly insane
Never heal
Fading
dieing
Cut me
Watch me bleed
Now watch me bleed
WATCH ME!
WATCH ME BLEED!
BLEED!
Nothing’s real


*will post more later (but won't be updated often)



Very nice poetry.... very deep. Post More
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