shhhh one of my famous writing secrets is... i bite my tounge while writing. actualy i just figured that out. weird eh?

Forgotten
I walk slow and silent
Head hung low
I’m free from their eyes
I’m free from their eyes
I see I’m alive
My name is lost in a whisper

I wander far in and out
Here and there
Beg to be seen or heard
They can’t see it’s just not fair

I sit in the shadows
And shout and weep
Why don’t they see?
Into the ground, my tears seep
And disappear

I run as fast as I can
Screaming my name
I am real I am here
But I know no one came

I stand in front of anyone
Look them in the eyes
But they go on with their fun
And act like they can’t hear my cries

I walk slow and silent
Head hung low
I’m free from their eyes
I’m free from their eyes
I can’t see I’m alive
My name is lost in a whisper
In a whisper I’m left alone

I can walk now
And not have to hear their harsh words
They just don’t talk to me
I’m just a long lost memory
Forgotten and forbidden

Are you okay?
Sure I am
When no one knows I exist
Sin is my only friend now

I strike sudden and violent
She’s on the ground
At last I’ve been found
She stairs up at me untill she closes her eyes
I write my name in her blood incase she dies
Together they come she’s not alive
Together they whisper my name
And clean the blood
In a whisper my name is lost
I walk slow and silent
Head hung low
I’m free from their eyes
I’m free from their eyes
I’m not alive
My name is lost in a whisper
In a whisper I’m left alone

She saw me
I found myself
My visibility died
And turn to smoke again
I whisper my name and I am lost

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One day I'll be able to kiss her in public without wondering what the cost is.
Breathe for me.

Great work Raskull

My favorite part.

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April 24th 2007...

i agree codger...that part rocked...very haunting piece.

I don't think word "nice" or "beautiful" really fits here... Yap LOL. I liked those Really great I love Slipknot and you wrote so close to their style LOL Yeah, the name of thread is really original!

Hey, I mean that I loved that, but would you call any Slipknot's song beautiful or nice? They're freaky and that's what i like in it The same with your lyrics

yeah i knew what you ment. im glad you like my stuff also i checked out your drawings and i was like "woah!" their really good. (but i really liked the funny cartoon ones)

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One day I'll be able to kiss her in public without wondering what the cost is.
Breathe for me.

Well, thank you for checking up my art LOL
C ya with new stuff

omgomgomgomfg!!!!!!!! i have 4 green dots!!!! yay! i love all you repy people rep for everyone! lol okay no... um well i wroted this thingy and i think it kinda sux so i'm posting it here feedback please

Fantasy
Blood is peace
Blood is silence
Blood is screams
Blood is hate

It was cold it was wrong
And I loved it
It was ignorant it was a lie
And I believed it
I breathed it I lived it

I have woken now
No, no I want to sleep
I need to dream
I’ve woken to the loneliness
Where can you run to?
What fantasy could you ruin death in?
Nowhere is your eternal home

Love is just a dream I cannot live
Cross burning through my skin
Branded into my memory
You will never be forgotten

Don’t fear the reaper
There were times you could welcome this demon
Scream all you want no one could ever here me
Torture isn’t half as fun when you’re alone
Still and silent you sleep eternally
Still I need so much more

I have woken up
No I want to sleep
I need to dream
I’ve woken to the loneliness
Where can I run to?
What fantasy could I ruin death in?
Nowhere is my eternal home

It was cold it was wrong
And I loved it
It was ignorant it was a lie
And I believed it
I breathed it I lived it

What have you done?
It was only for fun
It was something I shouldn’t have done

I can’t hide in insanity
I’m lost and gone
I’m awake now
Only for more pain

Blood is hate
Blood is screams
Blood is silence
Blood is an obsession
Blood is an escape

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One day I'll be able to kiss her in public without wondering what the cost is.
Breathe for me.

very deep piece...i like the way it ends with its beginning...

Just a few short things (I like Meaningless)
PLEASE COMMENT or if you'd like you may critise

Laugh Easy
I see you
And so much more
Than your twisted smile

I've heard rumors and lies
Horrors and hells
Love and losses
And the childish gossip

People call you a whore
People call you a proud ragdoll
And say I'm a fool to be seen with you

Why is it dear
That you can laugh so easy?


Glass
Why do you not care to understand me?
But then why should I expect you to
When you don't understand yourself

You faithfully fallow and worship
The people you feel above you
Gladly being their doormat to happieness

Yet you grin while standing
On the broken glass hearts
Of those who have fallen

Why do you not understand me?
But then why should I expect you to
When I don't understand myself


Meaningless
Writing down some unheard words
I'm starting to lose intrest
Losing motavation
The words never come out right

No one cares about what I think
Or what I've seen
No one cares about me
So I've come to believe

But still I've not lost my will to lie
For later my words will become a lie
They have already began to lie
To the mind of their reader

Already this poem has lost it's meaning
Inside my heart
My mind wanders off
Only to return to where it began


HATE ME, LOVE ME
Have you forgotten
All the things I've done to you
Torturing you and making you scream
Evil smirks and cold anger

Mostly you just enjoyed my company
Even now you still cannot HATE ME

Little did I know what was happening
Over all the mockery and repugnant attacks
Virgin and timid feelings were becoming known
Emerging enough they can no longer be ignored

My old life has died
Eased by the fact that you LOVE ME

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One day I'll be able to kiss her in public without wondering what the cost is.
Breathe for me.