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Raskull · 06-21-2005, 11:14 PM

Please Give Some Feedback.

Forsaken Child
Father your child has torn me in two
He fed me poisin
And stole my presence

But for moments I'm at peace
For seconds came my sweet release
Will I ever wake to the realization
Of my distruction

I've always hurt somehow
So then I hurt someone
Black curses and smokey beatings
Will I wake to crimson echos

Father your child has torn me in two
He fed me poisin
And stole my presence

Father I'm now a forsaken child
I can feel the lonely night sky
As I watch her begin to cry
I fear I've already forseken another

Raskull · 07-05-2005, 12:49 PM

Im beginning to lose my will to write

but I wrote this. It's not great but meh... least it's something

The Floor
I've fallen down apon the floor
My bloody tears seep down into the black carpet
Regrets and sorrows entwined into the walls

I lay here on the floor
Everyone too worried in their own cries
To notice they're walking over me

My hatred for them becomes a deep
Dangerous hate for myself
I'm hurting me but really
I wish it was them

So I'm lying on the floor
Everyone's screaming for me to pick them up
How can I when I'm lower than them?

I'm lying on the floor
Burnt, cut and bruised
I'm dying on the floor
Too late to say sorry

**Oceantron** · 07-05-2005, 01:01 PM

Raskull, why are u losing your will to write? that would be a shame because I love your work hun. "The Floor" conveys a lot of pain and the amazing imagery is the reason for it i believe. As for "Forsaken Child" - i love the language you used in this piece. Please don't stop writing Raskull

<3 <3

Raskull · 07-05-2005, 03:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Oceanic

Raskull, why are u losing your will to write? that would be a shame because I love your work hun. "The Floor" conveys a lot of pain and the amazing imagery is the reason for it i believe. As for "Forsaken Child" - i love the language you used in this piece. Please don't stop writing Raskull

<3 <3

I dunno. Just stressed out even though it's summer. I was whining about some of that last night. I have more things to post but they're on my comp upstairs and it's broken. There's plenty of things to write about and plenty of ideas in my head but there's a large lack of motovation. I love getting my thoughts and feelings out but if try to show it there's more reason not to write. Thanks a whole lot though. Your post made me smile and I needed that.

**Oceantron** · 07-05-2005, 04:10 PM

no problem Raskull. hey, if u ever just need to talk or anything im me. aim: oceansoul2005 and msn: darkprincess009. i know there are a lot of things that can get one down, but most of the time writing helps because then things don't have to stay bottled up. <3

Raskull · 07-07-2005, 07:35 PM

Actually (for those of you who saw the turtle) I do have something good.

Rain
The sky cries hard tonight
Her sorrowful tears hide my own

How I long to stay beside her
And listen to her mournful song
Her beauty and strength still shining
Through her abuse and hurt

Sing me a song Goddes of rain
Only your tears can comfort my pain
I am empty and aching
Sweet sobs wash my sins away

Maybe it is I who should ask
Why do you cry
Do even you moonless sky
Do you wish I would die?

Sing me a song Goddes of rain
Only your tears can comfort my pain
Wash away my newly shed blood
Kiss me goodnight and I bid you goodbye

Ack. Tornado warning. Ah. got to go leave me some feedback

Raskull · 07-08-2005, 05:16 AM

This one has no title. Mainly cuz the ink just dried (I just wrote it) maybe you guys can help me think of a title.

The lake of beauty below the glowing light
I stand warm and strong as I bask in the glow
I slip off of a touch of beauty
Hold it high in admiration

Every thing I touch rots and decays
Death dips on my scared and dirty face
The clouds of my doubt and failure
Come and destroy my future hope

When can I escape my mind?
Where can I run from my bloody scum cage?
Why must I live inside of me?
What day will I see my happy ending?

I write these worthless words
In a safe place, I lie
Behind a wooden door with a broken lock
Torn and wrecked the room where I hide

The places here with memories all but gone
The corners where my fear has leaked
The floor where I have dyed from weakness
This is my home, this is my hell

Raskull · 07-10-2005, 08:31 PM

Sup? Ok. Never mind. For the bored and/or interested here is my weepy, sloppy, and sometimes just plain fucked up fanfiction. Sorry sexy peeps only got Buffy. So far.

Freakin R&R and I love you

Enjoyfulness

[EDITATION OF THE POST THAT I HAVE MADE, BITCH] As a result of my sudden, unexplained spazzyness I have made a siggy! W00t!!!

My sig is a good way to waste 2 hours and own a colorful sig

. Ack. *Loves her sig*... *but hates the bassist who's trying to replace her* You fucking bastard.

Raskull · 07-12-2005, 03:26 AM

Love lies
Love, love, love
Everyone wants love
Everyone always writes about love
Say it's magic it's love.

Little boy toy with his eyes all a glow
He thinks he knows
He believes what he's been told

Little girl doll with poems in her hand
She's been told and shown a new thing
She has wanted it since she was tought of fairy tales

They don't know they're living on a lie
Once they've served their meaning they're thrown away
Break their guliable hearts and leave them empty
Lovers meet tragic endings when no one cares

Little boy with his eyes dim
He knows now
He turns himself off so he won't believe anything

Little girl with a suicide note
She's been told and shown life
She's wanted forever but now she sees
Love is just a meaningless word.

Raskull · 07-17-2005, 03:30 AM

Inspired by my current life and nothing more.

Away
It's so late and I've been alone too long
Thoughts and questions are all but lost
Why's everyone want to live
If when you're alive all you want to do is die

Am I unworthy to wear thy holy cross
To take the strength of weak metal
And call it my hope and future

I've got so many things inside
Demons and secrets and wants and greeds
But I cannot say why
I can't say what's driving away my soul

I want to run away
I want to be someone, anyone else
You will never see me again when I am free
But it's not like you ever could

Wish I could say goodbye and wake up
Wish I could be away...

06-21-2005, 11:14 PM	#41 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 17 Posts: 470 Points: 2,270.23 Bank: 3,576.94 Total Points: 5,847.17 Donate	Please Give Some Feedback. Forsaken Child Father your child has torn me in two He fed me poisin And stole my presence But for moments I'm at peace For seconds came my sweet release Will I ever wake to the realization Of my distruction I've always hurt somehow So then I hurt someone Black curses and smokey beatings Will I wake to crimson echos Father your child has torn me in two He fed me poisin And stole my presence Father I'm now a forsaken child I can feel the lonely night sky As I watch her begin to cry I fear I've already forseken another __________________ Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read. Breathe for me.

07-05-2005, 12:49 PM	#42 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 17 Posts: 470 Points: 2,270.23 Bank: 3,576.94 Total Points: 5,847.17 Donate	Im beginning to lose my will to write but I wrote this. It's not great but meh... least it's something The Floor I've fallen down apon the floor My bloody tears seep down into the black carpet Regrets and sorrows entwined into the walls I lay here on the floor Everyone too worried in their own cries To notice they're walking over me My hatred for them becomes a deep Dangerous hate for myself I'm hurting me but really I wish it was them So I'm lying on the floor Everyone's screaming for me to pick them up How can I when I'm lower than them? I'm lying on the floor Burnt, cut and bruised I'm dying on the floor Too late to say sorry __________________ Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read. Breathe for me.

07-07-2005, 07:35 PM	#46 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 17 Posts: 470 Points: 2,270.23 Bank: 3,576.94 Total Points: 5,847.17 Donate	Actually (for those of you who saw the turtle) I do have something good. Rain The sky cries hard tonight Her sorrowful tears hide my own How I long to stay beside her And listen to her mournful song Her beauty and strength still shining Through her abuse and hurt Sing me a song Goddes of rain Only your tears can comfort my pain I am empty and aching Sweet sobs wash my sins away Maybe it is I who should ask Why do you cry Do even you moonless sky Do you wish I would die? Sing me a song Goddes of rain Only your tears can comfort my pain Wash away my newly shed blood Kiss me goodnight and I bid you goodbye Ack. Tornado warning. Ah. got to go leave me some feedback __________________ Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read. Breathe for me. Last edited by Raskull : 07-07-2005 at 08:48 PM.

07-08-2005, 05:16 AM	#47 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 17 Posts: 470 Points: 2,270.23 Bank: 3,576.94 Total Points: 5,847.17 Donate	This one has no title. Mainly cuz the ink just dried (I just wrote it) maybe you guys can help me think of a title. The lake of beauty below the glowing light I stand warm and strong as I bask in the glow I slip off of a touch of beauty Hold it high in admiration Every thing I touch rots and decays Death dips on my scared and dirty face The clouds of my doubt and failure Come and destroy my future hope When can I escape my mind? Where can I run from my bloody scum cage? Why must I live inside of me? What day will I see my happy ending? I write these worthless words In a safe place, I lie Behind a wooden door with a broken lock Torn and wrecked the room where I hide The places here with memories all but gone The corners where my fear has leaked The floor where I have dyed from weakness This is my home, this is my hell __________________ Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read. Breathe for me.

07-10-2005, 08:31 PM	#48 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 17 Posts: 470 Points: 2,270.23 Bank: 3,576.94 Total Points: 5,847.17 Donate	Sup? Ok. Never mind. For the bored and/or interested here is my weepy, sloppy, and sometimes just plain fucked up fanfiction. Sorry sexy peeps only got Buffy. So far. Freakin R&R and I love you Enjoyfulness [EDITATION OF THE POST THAT I HAVE MADE, BITCH] As a result of my sudden, unexplained spazzyness I have made a siggy! W00t!!! My sig is a good way to waste 2 hours and own a colorful sig . Ack. Loves her sig... but hates the bassist who's trying to replace her You fucking bastard. __________________ Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read. Breathe for me. Last edited by Raskull : 07-11-2005 at 02:18 AM.

07-05-2005, 01:01 PM	#43 (permalink)
Oceantron Apocalypse Please Join Date: Jul 2003 Age: 22 Posts: 2,308 Points: 17,078.88 Bank: 259,992.66 Total Points: 277,071.54 Donate	Raskull, why are u losing your will to write? that would be a shame because I love your work hun. "The Floor" conveys a lot of pain and the amazing imagery is the reason for it i believe. As for "Forsaken Child" - i love the language you used in this piece. Please don't stop writing Raskull <3 <3

07-05-2005, 04:10 PM	#45 (permalink)
Oceantron Apocalypse Please Join Date: Jul 2003 Age: 22 Posts: 2,308 Points: 17,078.88 Bank: 259,992.66 Total Points: 277,071.54 Donate	no problem Raskull. hey, if u ever just need to talk or anything im me. aim: oceansoul2005 and msn: darkprincess009. i know there are a lot of things that can get one down, but most of the time writing helps because then things don't have to stay bottled up. <3

07-12-2005, 03:26 AM	#49 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 17 Posts: 470 Points: 2,270.23 Bank: 3,576.94 Total Points: 5,847.17 Donate	Love lies Love, love, love Everyone wants love Everyone always writes about love Say it's magic it's love. Little boy toy with his eyes all a glow He thinks he knows He believes what he's been told Little girl doll with poems in her hand She's been told and shown a new thing She has wanted it since she was tought of fairy tales They don't know they're living on a lie Once they've served their meaning they're thrown away Break their guliable hearts and leave them empty Lovers meet tragic endings when no one cares Little boy with his eyes dim He knows now He turns himself off so he won't believe anything Little girl with a suicide note She's been told and shown life She's wanted forever but now she sees Love is just a meaningless word. __________________ Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read. Breathe for me.

07-17-2005, 03:30 AM	#50 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 17 Posts: 470 Points: 2,270.23 Bank: 3,576.94 Total Points: 5,847.17 Donate	Inspired by my current life and nothing more. Away It's so late and I've been alone too long Thoughts and questions are all but lost Why's everyone want to live If when you're alive all you want to do is die Am I unworthy to wear thy holy cross To take the strength of weak metal And call it my hope and future I've got so many things inside Demons and secrets and wants and greeds But I cannot say why I can't say what's driving away my soul I want to run away I want to be someone, anyone else You will never see me again when I am free But it's not like you ever could Wish I could say goodbye and wake up Wish I could be away... __________________ Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read. Breathe for me.

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