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**Oceantron** · 07-17-2005, 03:55 PM

hey Raskull. while reading Away I felt like i can relate to it, especially when you said

Quote:

Why's everyone want to live
If when you're alive all you want to do is die

. i also read Love Lies and that one really blew me away. it's great to read something with a new spin on it. great work Raskull <3

**Oceantron** · 07-19-2005, 08:08 PM

that was definitely the angriest piece that I have seen so far, but I must say that i think that we all need to let out the feelings that we keep bottled up. u had some really great visuals in this one and i'll go ahead and thank you for sharing. this is what it's about- being truthful and writing for your own sake rather than pleasing others. rawk on Raskull! <3

Raskull · 07-19-2005, 08:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Oceanic

that was definitely the angriest piece that I have seen so far, but I must say that i think that we all need to let out the feelings that we keep bottled up. u had some really great visuals in this one and i'll go ahead and thank you for sharing. this is what it's about- being truthful and writing for your own sake rather than pleasing others. rawk on Raskull! <3

Thank you so very much for commenting yet again.

yeah I felt a bit better after I wrote that... I love writing. Tis my favorite hobby. Trust me though you rawk way more than me.

Thanks again!

Raskull · 07-23-2005, 05:24 AM

I've been up for 3 days straight... I'm fuckin tired so sorry if this one sucks. Oh yeah I'm posting it cuz I'm gonna be gone and away from internet for a few days.

Running
When will I stop running
I've been running and hiding away for so long
But always I return
To be welcomed home with a whip on my back

I'm choking down below in my saftey
I cannot see for I've sufficated
My mind bleeds as my lungs burn
My eyes dry while my heart cries

I am running away from this hated place
Stowed inside the shattared light
Every friendly face I see says I'm void of hardship
Nodding my agreance even though I scream no

Im empty and dry
Death has left me to be torn even more
Tomorrow I will leave to new grounds of pain
I hope that I will be lost along the way

Raskull · 08-01-2005, 01:39 AM

Inspired by many people... mostly a "friend" of mine. Cheers, it could be about you.

Attention Whore
Oh my, oh my, dear, dear
I happily mock you're pathetic sharade
Your crimson tears drip from your arms and down the walls
You are still tough and hide in the open

Oh babe, you sexy tease
Dance, take pride in their lust and be broken
Smile inside, none can see
Except that is, me

Morbid and self-less
Insane, wild, anti-socitey, different, mature
Shameful insomnanic depressed and ignored
You Whore your way into memory

Twice, twice to be killed
Third time you knock me down
I'm a whore? I'm deprived of adult wisdom?
I see why you avoid the mirror

You are nothing, nothing, nothing
You try to illude everyone into pity and wanting
You Attention Whore

Live it up
You're about to die

Raskull · 08-06-2005, 11:55 PM

Ungreatful
No I'm not like you
I won't turn my back on you again
I lay wide awake as the dawn breaks
Knowing you don't deserve me

You live so hard for the moment
You fight so long for the heart break
Another time to cut and scream for pity
No I don't have sympathy for you

You've hurt me so much
And though I say I don't care
I'm not okay and I shouldn't be here

Are you truly ungreatful
For my blood I've sacraficed
All that wasted time and life
So you could exile me again

Pray that one day you can look down
And see me burning
I know you won't look back

Pray you have the sence to thank me
No you won't look back

Raskull · 08-16-2005, 11:24 AM

Written for a very cold friend of mine. Alot of my writings lately have some referance to her. Meh, enjoy!

If This is What You Want
There was a time I'd give anything to meet your eyes
Now I can't look up
The constant glare will capture me
And freeze my soul.

Betrayed, raped, and used you sat alone in the dark
I held out my hand and pulled you up
Soon as my back is turned you knock me down
If this is what you want...

Once there was a beautiful blonde with a mischievous grin
She bathed in the blood of those she capitvated
Her hair dyed crimson and her mind about gone
Cigar burns, broken ribs and bloody nuckles

If this is what you want it's yours
If this is what you want I'm here
If this is what you want...

Chased me away to my happy place
Where I pretend you're dead and I'm alone
With you atop me, hands around my throat
Yes I could push you off but I won't.

Saw you crying telling me sorry
Promising me you'd never hurt me
But I hear you whisper "liar".

Tie me up and spit on me
Call me everything, anything to break my will
I've lost my will and life long ago
If this is what you want...

Goodnight sweet friend
You've killed me again
Goodnight my dear
You'll never be here.

Aodhamair · 08-16-2005, 11:57 AM

Your writing is most definately heart felt and full of emotion!

I can relate to running, and my favourite lines are

Quote:

When will I stop running
I've been running and hiding away for so long
But always I return
To be welcomed home with a whip on my back

'always i return to be welcomed home with a whip on my back'.....so true, and very beautiful!

Raskull · 08-19-2005, 10:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aodhamair

Your writing is most definately heart felt and full of emotion!

I can relate to running, and my favourite lines are

'always i return to be welcomed home with a whip on my back'.....so true, and very beautiful!

Thanks Aodhamair! I've notice you put up a new poem and I'll read it and comment sometime today. lol

Nothing To Learn
Im not your little girl any more Daddy
Love has pass away when I gained self knowledge
Knowing if I shared any with you would be the end
So I kept it inside waiting for you to find

Like mother like daughter
Well I killed you Mommy
When I have fallen and learned

I am not his school girl
He was not the taker at first but now he's here
Stolen everything left and wasted time
I've known that ignorance is young

Society has outcast me
And I think I don't care
But it has made what was never there
Dissappear

I'm not a little girl any more
And can't play dead
I'll crucify myself before you see
Till you see what is past the fire and in the flames

I am someone I've never wanted to be
Never wanted you to see
And I wish you'd leave my home
Then I can face the life that haunts me

Scratchy · 08-19-2005, 07:39 PM

I really like your stuff, Raskull and, as Aodhamair has mentioned, it's indeed full of emotions, gueess that's why it's so cool!

07-23-2005, 05:24 AM	#54 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 18 Posts: 485 Points: 3,324.98 Bank: 8,356.43 Total Points: 11,681.41 Donate	I've been up for 3 days straight... I'm fuckin tired so sorry if this one sucks. Oh yeah I'm posting it cuz I'm gonna be gone and away from internet for a few days. Running When will I stop running I've been running and hiding away for so long But always I return To be welcomed home with a whip on my back I'm choking down below in my saftey I cannot see for I've sufficated My mind bleeds as my lungs burn My eyes dry while my heart cries I am running away from this hated place Stowed inside the shattared light Every friendly face I see says I'm void of hardship Nodding my agreance even though I scream no Im empty and dry Death has left me to be torn even more Tomorrow I will leave to new grounds of pain I hope that I will be lost along the way __________________ Fuck you and your rules. Smile for me.

08-01-2005, 01:39 AM	#55 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 18 Posts: 485 Points: 3,324.98 Bank: 8,356.43 Total Points: 11,681.41 Donate	Inspired by many people... mostly a "friend" of mine. Cheers, it could be about you. Attention Whore Oh my, oh my, dear, dear I happily mock you're pathetic sharade Your crimson tears drip from your arms and down the walls You are still tough and hide in the open Oh babe, you sexy tease Dance, take pride in their lust and be broken Smile inside, none can see Except that is, me Morbid and self-less Insane, wild, anti-socitey, different, mature Shameful insomnanic depressed and ignored You Whore your way into memory Twice, twice to be killed Third time you knock me down I'm a whore? I'm deprived of adult wisdom? I see why you avoid the mirror You are nothing, nothing, nothing You try to illude everyone into pity and wanting You Attention Whore Live it up You're about to die __________________ Fuck you and your rules. Smile for me.

08-06-2005, 11:55 PM	#56 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 18 Posts: 485 Points: 3,324.98 Bank: 8,356.43 Total Points: 11,681.41 Donate	Ungreatful No I'm not like you I won't turn my back on you again I lay wide awake as the dawn breaks Knowing you don't deserve me You live so hard for the moment You fight so long for the heart break Another time to cut and scream for pity No I don't have sympathy for you You've hurt me so much And though I say I don't care I'm not okay and I shouldn't be here Are you truly ungreatful For my blood I've sacraficed All that wasted time and life So you could exile me again Pray that one day you can look down And see me burning I know you won't look back Pray you have the sence to thank me No you won't look back __________________ Fuck you and your rules. Smile for me.

08-16-2005, 11:24 AM	#57 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 18 Posts: 485 Points: 3,324.98 Bank: 8,356.43 Total Points: 11,681.41 Donate	Written for a very cold friend of mine. Alot of my writings lately have some referance to her. Meh, enjoy! If This is What You Want There was a time I'd give anything to meet your eyes Now I can't look up The constant glare will capture me And freeze my soul. Betrayed, raped, and used you sat alone in the dark I held out my hand and pulled you up Soon as my back is turned you knock me down If this is what you want... Once there was a beautiful blonde with a mischievous grin She bathed in the blood of those she capitvated Her hair dyed crimson and her mind about gone Cigar burns, broken ribs and bloody nuckles If this is what you want it's yours If this is what you want I'm here If this is what you want... Chased me away to my happy place Where I pretend you're dead and I'm alone With you atop me, hands around my throat Yes I could push you off but I won't. Saw you crying telling me sorry Promising me you'd never hurt me But I hear you whisper "liar". Tie me up and spit on me Call me everything, anything to break my will I've lost my will and life long ago If this is what you want... Goodnight sweet friend You've killed me again Goodnight my dear You'll never be here. __________________ Fuck you and your rules. Smile for me.

08-19-2005, 07:39 PM	#60 (permalink)
Scratchy Empty Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Saint-Petersburg, Russia Posts: 4,300 Points: 7,609.57 Bank: 94,966,853.27 Total Points: 94,974,462.84 Donate	I really like your stuff, Raskull and, as Aodhamair has mentioned, it's indeed full of emotions, gueess that's why it's so cool! __________________ .

07-19-2005, 08:08 PM	#52 (permalink)
Oceantron Apocalypse Please Join Date: Jul 2003 Age: 22 Posts: 2,308 Points: 1,078.88 Bank: 259,992.66 Total Points: 261,071.54 Donate	that was definitely the angriest piece that I have seen so far, but I must say that i think that we all need to let out the feelings that we keep bottled up. u had some really great visuals in this one and i'll go ahead and thank you for sharing. this is what it's about- being truthful and writing for your own sake rather than pleasing others. rawk on Raskull! <3

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