well i figure i should make my own little thread to put my shit in. so anyways i know i already posted this one but not in this thread

Blood (named now)
Am I really to blame for all this blood spill?
Are you so ready to get me away from home?
Can you believe that I am here still?
You think every thing is okay when I’m alone

Smell my fear now
Kill me now
Do you still think I care about how I’m treated?

I just can’t make myself care about you
I just can’t help but hate this life

I cut deeper in my skin
I scratch harder to kill things within
And smear my blood on your face
And laugh at the taste

Can you here them?
Deeper, deeper, more, more
I can’t breath I can’t die
Pick it up again
What can I do?
Die, die, die
Am I no use to you?

Am I really to blame for all this blood spill?
Are you so ready to get me away from home?
Can you believe that I am here still?
You think every thing is okay when I’m alone

Deeper, deeper, more, more
Pick it up again
Die, die, die

I cut deeper in my skin
I scratch harder to kill things within
And smear my blood on your face
And laugh at the taste

You could never see the pain
You could never hear me scream
You could feel me go insane
How ordinary can I seem?

Do you see this?
Can you hear me?
Do you feel this?

Tearing at my skin
Releasing blood and sin

deeper in my skin
harder to kill things within
smear my blood on your face
And laugh at the taste

Deeper, harder, die, die. die, DIE, DIE
Again, slower, more, blood, more
blood, blood, blood, bleed, more, blood

***9/7 Hey you can read this old stuff if you want but please don't leave without reading my latest stuff! The more I read my old stuff the less I like it. Even though I got more attention for it. Cleaned out some more today. Sorry, got rid of some stuff a few of you liked ***

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Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read.
Breathe for me.

i like the title of your thread. litter box. it made me laugh

as for the songs, i like the first one better. i could definitely see it as a korn or slipknot song. good job! (i like writing stuff in math class too)

guess what! you can read even more of my shitty poetry-type-things!
yippie for you (i guess)


No Mercy
No one is safe
No mercy
Those who hide I will find
Those who run I will catch
And those who fight will fall

How can you expect me to just sit and take everything?
Wait and beg for death
Wait till I hate my own breath
No mercy will come

I will end it
I will end everything
Nothing is safe from my hate

This time god will be too late
To save anyone around me
No one can stop me

This pain and hate will never die
So hate me as I cry
Life in my hand
I Will take it
Spare me no mercy

No love
No warmth
No mercy for anyone
Nothing but hate

Wait and beg for death
Wait till you all hate my breath
No mercy will come
Not for anyone

I will hold you all down
Beg me for mercy
As you scream, kick, and drown

This pain and hate will never die
So hate me as I cry
Life in my hand
I Will take it
Spare me no mercy

Don’t spare me
You all know I’m unworthy
Such hate and pain from hell
Still I hold you down
As you scream, kick, and drown
Still no mercy

No one is safe
Not from my hate
No mercy for anyone
No mercy for us

I’m not safe from myself
From me, I’m never free
No mercy for me

what ya think? need some work? (did i even spell mercy right?)

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Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read.
Breathe for me.

I love your lyrics, remind me so much of Slipknot. They are dark and interesting, i would love it if a band like Slipknot recored them.

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April 24th 2007...

thanks Codger! if a band like Slipknot recored them i'd be... freaked out/pissed/happy

oh and forgiveme i could of sworn i replyed to your post. sry bout that. yeah i thought it fit well cuz most of this stuff is crap and my cat's named Raskull. lol

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Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read.
Breathe for me.

I really like them! I love how they are lengthy, gives us more to read Keep writing!

well that's cuz i keep adding because im never sure if i've said what i truly wanted to. sorry the new one's a little short tho

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Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read.
Breathe for me.

hey, keep writing ok...don't give up please...we care what happens to you ok, so don't go knocking yourself off just yet pls...btw, i this line is amazing: `can anyone not wake me i'm dyeing'. although it's seemingly simple, in the sense that it's conversation like, but it's not...it comes across as the way a polite request would come, but when you think about what is being said you realise the depth of what that person is asking, and the sorrow hits you like a tonne of bricks...it's like you'd rather be asleep, among the unconscious, than be alert and living because living = dyeing...great stuff.

woah you really hit the mark on that one. thanks alot i don't think i'll give up yet cuz i have fans

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Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read.
Breathe for me.

here's one of my older ones. it's short and's a little confusing but you might like it


(untitled)
I sit down on my bed
And wipe the blood from my head
I close my eyes
And try to ignore the demons cries

Let my body die
I know it’s a lie
Run a hand through my blood soaked hair
Cut my fingers on glass (not like you care)

Banging on my door
Look down at it all
I’m so sick of fighting
But I hate hiding

A touch on my scars
Lets the pain through the bars
I get up high
Let go of the ground and sigh
Suddenly I can’t breath
Did I deceive me?

My neck screaming in pain
God, am I insane?
And as I try to sleep
I try not to weep
And there just is no more

im tired and i have to do homework! see ya later

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Life is a plotless book full of sourceless pain, few adventures, and little romance that no one wants to read.
Breathe for me.