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Old 08-27-2006, 07:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Recuerdos

Aun recuerdo la primera vez que me besaste
La suave caricia de tus labios rozando los mios
Esa sensacion de calor inigualable a cualquier otro placer
y tu cuerpo sobre mi pecho, era todo lo que necesitaba.

Tambien recuerdo lo especial que me hacias sentir
Formando uno con el universo...
Extraño la silueta de tu rostro, la figura de tu cara y el vibrar de tu voz.
Aun despues de todo este tiempo me haces falta
Y me parece increible confesar
Que eres todo lo que deseo, a quien pertenezco...
Como podria olvidarte? ,
Si cuando miro en el espejo eres todo lo que veo,
Sigues formando parte de mi
Cada dia, cada instante
Te amo, quiero estar contigo y podria gritarlo! ! !
Como expresarlo? ? ?
De que forma lo sabrias? ? ?
Aun me amas? ? ? , Aun me necesitas? ? ?
Tu actitud aclara las dudas en mis pensamientos
He llegado al borde, sabiendo que este sentimiento,
Permanecera en mi por siempre,
Sin darte cuenta de ello, lo guardo en silencio
Y esa llave la mantengo en mi mano, con la unica esperanza
De que algun dia, la tomemos juntos
Y tenga la dicha de mostrarte
lo mucho que Te Amo
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Old 09-02-2006, 05:49 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Me re encanto!!! En particular, me gusto el uso de la palabra "inigualable." Muy lindo poema. He tenido miedo poner mis poems en castellano aca, pero ahora veo que hay otra gente que lo esta haciendo, ja.

Me gusto mucho, bien trabajo!
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Old 09-03-2006, 06:21 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I'm not sure if you can understand me or not, but I'm not sure how to respond back in Spanish properly, so hopefully you do. I really love this part:

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Extraño la silueta de tu rostro, la figura de tu cara y el vibrar de tu voz.
Aun despues de todo este tiempo me haces falta
Y me parece increible confesar
Que eres todo lo que deseo, a quien pertenezco...
You should try and get the english translation so everyone else can read it.
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Old 09-03-2006, 06:28 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Muy buen poema, creo que si tu posteaste en Español y no te han dicho nada, posteare lo mio.

Very Good Poem I really Like it
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