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Istimiel · 08-18-2006, 02:30 AM

Hey, I love that "Anywhere" picture you did! Looks awesome

~river~ · 09-03-2006, 07:53 PM

ok i was suppossed to be working on an assignment actually 2 but i needed a break so i was playing around with a photoshop/paint program that i don't fully understand. all that is beside the point

but here we go, i know there is very little difference between the two except size and i know i havent done that much to the photo but i have to say i am happy with them.

i am really happy with this one...

FelicityS · 09-03-2006, 11:38 PM

Her eyes look awesome!

P.s ive been trying to wirte about a merry go round for yonks! good work

~river~ · 09-03-2006, 11:47 PM

well i beat you to it. let me know if you do get a poem done on a merry-go-round. i shall like to read it.
thanks for the comment i have to admit i love the eyes.

Istimiel · 09-04-2006, 02:33 AM

for a program you don't really know how to use, you used it well

I love the pic you used

~river~ · 09-04-2006, 03:31 AM

and another one...
i had to do this twice as my computer played up
so here we go

and thanks itsimiel for again your kind words. i have to admit i am lucky to have you check what i am doing.
thanks again

~river~ · 09-05-2006, 06:16 AM

another one i am trying to learn to use my photo editing thing
so here goes.
tyra banks. ladies and gentlemen.

FelicityS · 09-05-2006, 08:22 PM

I love the solitude one, you're really good at working with colours! I haven't figured half that stuff out yet! <3

I will let you know when i write it (if i write it) for sure!

~river~ · 09-08-2006, 01:32 AM

well my creative/ writting block that i have complained off has kind of lifted so that was able to write this one

crystal tears

Can you fault me
Crystal tears
Can you blame me
Crystal fears

Falling softly
Captured light
Summer storm
No will to fight

Shadowed mask
Bejewelled face
Left to dangle
Indefinite space

Can you fault me
Crystal tears
Can you blame
Crystal fears

Precious I am fragile
Hidden beauty in my shame
The crystal tears
Of captured light
Bejewel a shadowed mask

Crystal tears my crystal fears
Splinter in an anguished cry
Again I call for
Advocacy

FelicityS · 09-08-2006, 02:01 AM

Cool! i love it! i love how It's like a song, very lyrical. I love how in ways you repeat the imagery the whole way through but by changing words slightly each stanza is still new. Its kinda angry yet hopeless.

I must have Super germs.... hehe!

08-18-2006, 02:30 AM	#41 (permalink)
Istimiel Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In fantasy land where I could sing for Nightwish Age: 24 Posts: 152 Points: 272.35 Bank: 1,260.06 Total Points: 1,532.41 Donate	Hey, I love that "Anywhere" picture you did! Looks awesome __________________ deviantART being strange is normal MySpace I'm a melancholy closet clown with a shoe fetish

09-03-2006, 07:53 PM	#42 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,832 Points: 157.70 Bank: 138,455.72 Total Points: 138,613.42 Donate	ok i was suppossed to be working on an assignment actually 2 but i needed a break so i was playing around with a photoshop/paint program that i don't fully understand. all that is beside the point but here we go, i know there is very little difference between the two except size and i know i havent done that much to the photo but i have to say i am happy with them. i am really happy with this one... __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

09-03-2006, 11:38 PM	#43 (permalink)
FelicityS Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,403 Points: 700.64 Bank: 41.06 Total Points: 741.70 Donate	Her eyes look awesome! P.s ive been trying to wirte about a merry go round for yonks! good work __________________ My Space My Stuff

09-03-2006, 11:47 PM	#44 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,832 Points: 157.70 Bank: 138,455.72 Total Points: 138,613.42 Donate	well i beat you to it. let me know if you do get a poem done on a merry-go-round. i shall like to read it. thanks for the comment i have to admit i love the eyes. __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

09-04-2006, 02:33 AM	#45 (permalink)
Istimiel Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In fantasy land where I could sing for Nightwish Age: 24 Posts: 152 Points: 272.35 Bank: 1,260.06 Total Points: 1,532.41 Donate	for a program you don't really know how to use, you used it well I love the pic you used __________________ deviantART being strange is normal MySpace I'm a melancholy closet clown with a shoe fetish

09-04-2006, 03:31 AM	#46 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,832 Points: 157.70 Bank: 138,455.72 Total Points: 138,613.42 Donate	and another one... i had to do this twice as my computer played up so here we go and thanks itsimiel for again your kind words. i have to admit i am lucky to have you check what i am doing. thanks again __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night. Last edited by ~river~ : 09-04-2006 at 03:34 AM.

09-05-2006, 06:16 AM	#47 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,832 Points: 157.70 Bank: 138,455.72 Total Points: 138,613.42 Donate	another one i am trying to learn to use my photo editing thing so here goes. tyra banks. ladies and gentlemen. __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

09-05-2006, 08:22 PM	#48 (permalink)
FelicityS Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,403 Points: 700.64 Bank: 41.06 Total Points: 741.70 Donate	I love the solitude one, you're really good at working with colours! I haven't figured half that stuff out yet! <3 I will let you know when i write it (if i write it) for sure! __________________ My Space My Stuff

09-08-2006, 01:32 AM	#49 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,832 Points: 157.70 Bank: 138,455.72 Total Points: 138,613.42 Donate	well my creative/ writting block that i have complained off has kind of lifted so that was able to write this one crystal tears Can you fault me Crystal tears Can you blame me Crystal fears Falling softly Captured light Summer storm No will to fight Shadowed mask Bejewelled face Left to dangle Indefinite space Can you fault me Crystal tears Can you blame Crystal fears Precious I am fragile Hidden beauty in my shame The crystal tears Of captured light Bejewel a shadowed mask Crystal tears my crystal fears Splinter in an anguished cry Again I call for Advocacy __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

09-08-2006, 02:01 AM	#50 (permalink)
FelicityS Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,403 Points: 700.64 Bank: 41.06 Total Points: 741.70 Donate	Cool! i love it! i love how It's like a song, very lyrical. I love how in ways you repeat the imagery the whole way through but by changing words slightly each stanza is still new. Its kinda angry yet hopeless. I must have Super germs.... hehe! __________________ My Space My Stuff

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