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~river~ · 09-08-2006, 02:11 AM

thanks and not many people can brag about having super powered germs.
but i think you have the right too.
superpower germed fliss. i think it has a ring to it.

plus i like how you described it angry yet hopeless cus it is and it right to a t

~river~ · 09-09-2006, 04:53 AM

i should have been working on my assignment on Parkinson's Disease but lets face it boring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so instead i decided to play around again

so here goes (i know it has the same tree background but smeh)

it is summer glau (river) from serenity/ firefly
the words are from an episode i really like where she feels out of place and i think i quote answers more then it doesnt.

~river~ · 09-10-2006, 12:05 AM

another one,

Like Home

There is something about today
The sunlights rays
Through my gold gilded cage

Breakaway
Find away

A bare branched tree
Against the winter grey
Open lonesome

Nesting in
A hollow trunk
No song
No love
No one
Alone

Breakaway
Find away

And yet I will return
To you,

It is all I’ve ever known
in this cage
It feels like home

~river~ · 09-10-2006, 12:13 AM

i am so happy about this poem, which is strange as i find it really sad.
but yes i am happy with it. there is something about it that i like

Tide

Sitting at end of the pier
Little between me and the horizon
Grey clouds roll in
Wind whips up my hair
My wet dress
Embraces my broken body

I sit I watch
The waves rise up
And pass me by
Each whisper to me
Tells me lies

Sitting at the edge of the world
Existence I have felt
Crumbled in my hand

No one like you
To hold me close
And murmur in my ear
The pretty words
I long to hear

Like the shoreline
I give way
i go under pulled
to the tide

~river~ · 09-10-2006, 12:14 AM

i learnt a little more today about my paint program. yay! well i am happy

FelicityS · 09-11-2006, 07:42 PM

I love the structure of Like Home and it's cool to see you experimenting with different forms. I love the last 2 lines... <3

Tide is beautiful, the imagery is so delicate tainted with morbidity <3

Nice photoshop too <3333

~river~ · 09-13-2006, 02:33 AM

i think this one is a real mixture of where i am at the moment and well the feeling i got when reading the book Shalott by felcity pulman (an aus author) she writes a non fiction about camelot and lady shalott's love for lancelot. it is a great story i recommend it and the following 2.

It is for you that I mourn
I long to feel your finger tips
Brush my hair back from
My face
Soft and gentle
True love’s embrace

My only chance
My saving grace
With you I’d be safe

Lost inside my
Waking dream
One where you take me
Lead me by my hand
A hidden world
A sacred grove

Tempting chance
My long lost grace
With you I know
That I’d be safe

I breathe without your mercy
I want to be left breathless
For I long to comprehend
The loss I made
Without your saving passion
The one desired
True love’s embrace

i have more to add but at the moment i havent typed them up.

it seems i have caught that writing/ creative bug

FelicityS · 09-13-2006, 02:40 AM

Wow i love it, and really gain a sense of the story through this peice! I love being inspired like that!

OMG my germs really have worked! (just jokes your just creative

)

~river~ · 09-13-2006, 03:26 AM

Ohhhhhhhhh shucks (don't ask me

) now im all embarrassed,
thanks alot it really really means alot to me... and plus i am happy as i think my writting has improved.
and a very big YAY as i have to say my block has really passed only problem is i would probably have more here if i was able to write when i get inspiration or a great idea/ flow going but i am stuck where i have nothing to write on or with.

Istimiel · 09-13-2006, 04:55 AM

sorry I haven't been here for awhile! I really like 'Tide', well done!

09-08-2006, 02:11 AM	#51 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,830 Points: 145.93 Bank: 138,455.72 Total Points: 138,601.65 Donate	thanks and not many people can brag about having super powered germs. but i think you have the right too. superpower germed fliss. i think it has a ring to it. plus i like how you described it angry yet hopeless cus it is and it right to a t __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

09-09-2006, 04:53 AM	#52 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,830 Points: 145.93 Bank: 138,455.72 Total Points: 138,601.65 Donate	i should have been working on my assignment on Parkinson's Disease but lets face it boring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so instead i decided to play around again so here goes (i know it has the same tree background but smeh) it is summer glau (river) from serenity/ firefly the words are from an episode i really like where she feels out of place and i think i quote answers more then it doesnt. __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

09-10-2006, 12:05 AM	#53 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,830 Points: 145.93 Bank: 138,455.72 Total Points: 138,601.65 Donate	another one, Like Home There is something about today The sunlights rays Through my gold gilded cage Breakaway Find away A bare branched tree Against the winter grey Open lonesome Nesting in A hollow trunk No song No love No one Alone Breakaway Find away And yet I will return To you, It is all I’ve ever known in this cage It feels like home __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

09-10-2006, 12:13 AM	#54 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,830 Points: 145.93 Bank: 138,455.72 Total Points: 138,601.65 Donate	i am so happy about this poem, which is strange as i find it really sad. but yes i am happy with it. there is something about it that i like Tide Sitting at end of the pier Little between me and the horizon Grey clouds roll in Wind whips up my hair My wet dress Embraces my broken body I sit I watch The waves rise up And pass me by Each whisper to me Tells me lies Sitting at the edge of the world Existence I have felt Crumbled in my hand No one like you To hold me close And murmur in my ear The pretty words I long to hear Like the shoreline I give way i go under pulled to the tide __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night. Last edited by ~river~ : 09-10-2006 at 12:16 AM.

09-10-2006, 12:14 AM	#55 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,830 Points: 145.93 Bank: 138,455.72 Total Points: 138,601.65 Donate	i learnt a little more today about my paint program. yay! well i am happy __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

09-11-2006, 07:42 PM	#56 (permalink)
FelicityS Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,403 Points: 700.64 Bank: 41.06 Total Points: 741.70 Donate	I love the structure of Like Home and it's cool to see you experimenting with different forms. I love the last 2 lines... <3 Tide is beautiful, the imagery is so delicate tainted with morbidity <3 Nice photoshop too <3333 __________________ My Space My Stuff

09-13-2006, 02:33 AM	#57 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,830 Points: 145.93 Bank: 138,455.72 Total Points: 138,601.65 Donate	i think this one is a real mixture of where i am at the moment and well the feeling i got when reading the book Shalott by felcity pulman (an aus author) she writes a non fiction about camelot and lady shalott's love for lancelot. it is a great story i recommend it and the following 2. It is for you that I mourn I long to feel your finger tips Brush my hair back from My face Soft and gentle True love’s embrace My only chance My saving grace With you I’d be safe Lost inside my Waking dream One where you take me Lead me by my hand A hidden world A sacred grove Tempting chance My long lost grace With you I know That I’d be safe I breathe without your mercy I want to be left breathless For I long to comprehend The loss I made Without your saving passion The one desired True love’s embrace i have more to add but at the moment i havent typed them up. it seems i have caught that writing/ creative bug __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night. Last edited by ~river~ : 09-13-2006 at 02:36 AM.

09-13-2006, 02:40 AM	#58 (permalink)
FelicityS Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,403 Points: 700.64 Bank: 41.06 Total Points: 741.70 Donate	Wow i love it, and really gain a sense of the story through this peice! I love being inspired like that! OMG my germs really have worked! (just jokes your just creative ) __________________ My Space My Stuff

09-13-2006, 03:26 AM	#59 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,830 Points: 145.93 Bank: 138,455.72 Total Points: 138,601.65 Donate	Ohhhhhhhhh shucks (don't ask me ) now im all embarrassed, thanks alot it really really means alot to me... and plus i am happy as i think my writting has improved. and a very big YAY as i have to say my block has really passed only problem is i would probably have more here if i was able to write when i get inspiration or a great idea/ flow going but i am stuck where i have nothing to write on or with. __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

09-13-2006, 04:55 AM	#60 (permalink)
Istimiel Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In fantasy land where I could sing for Nightwish Age: 24 Posts: 152 Points: 272.35 Bank: 1,260.06 Total Points: 1,532.41 Donate	sorry I haven't been here for awhile! I really like 'Tide', well done! __________________ deviantART being strange is normal MySpace I'm a melancholy closet clown with a shoe fetish