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10-17-2005, 01:19 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: The big LC, New Mexico
Age: 28
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Hmm... This is my first attempt at writing (song), so don't be too awfully harsh
 . Hope you like it and will offer suggestions, constructive critisms, etc.Have a great one and thanks for taking a lookasee! In my box of memories I find pain Hurt from those who bring me down -Falling- Falling so fast I can't stopped Ever Can I outrun this, Possibly get better? -I'm too far gone- There is nothing more to say Do you know I'm here? You sense my prescence no more And I'm falling away -Faster, Faster- Falling so fast I can't be stopped Ever If I can't get past this There's no getting better -I'm too far gone- Have I hit the bottom? Have I reached the end? Will this all go away? Will a new phase begin? I'm Gone FOREVER. 
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