|10-17-2005, 01:19 PM||saranewt24's attempt(s)... Post #1|
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: The big LC, New Mexico
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Hmm... This is my first attempt at writing (song), so don't be too awfully harsh . Hope you like it and will offer suggestions, constructive critisms, etc.
Have a great one and thanks for taking a lookasee!
In my box of memories
I find pain
Hurt from those who bring me down
Falling so fast I can't stopped
Can I outrun this,
Possibly get better?
-I'm too far gone-
There is nothing more to say
Do you know I'm here?
You sense my prescence no more
And I'm falling away
Falling so fast I can't be stopped
If I can't get past this
There's no getting better
-I'm too far gone-
Have I hit the bottom?
Have I reached the end?
Will this all go away?
Will a new phase begin?
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