here are a few of my songs/poems..if i get enough feedback i will post some more

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Eyes like yours have never told
The lies you held inside your soul
But now the truth I've come to find
you tripped and fell on one last hope
Now you're struggling to breathe
The darkness engulfs you
Smiling down at you
I know I'll live another day

CHORUS
I may never understand
Just why you betrayed me
But at least now I know
That our love was just a fantasy

How did you make me believe
That for one second you had cared
I cried and screamed inside my head
But on the outside I smiled and loved you
My heart you broke...you laughed
Broken down I hid and screamed
I gave up and opened my soul
Now I'm free...I'm free to fly away

CHORUS

Make me believe
Make me forget
I'll make you regret
I'll make you remember

CHORUS

Story

I want to die
Never see the end
I want to cry
Never feel the cold
Givingup is all I know
So let me take this final blow
At making my life a living high
Let's see how much I can make you cry

Make me bleed
I like the sight
Make me choke
I like the pain
Watching you as you watch me
With this blade my soul is free
Feel it flow, watch it fade
This water now is red and stained

Needing the rush
I push down harder
Needing my closure
I watched you grieve
Draining my blood this is my end
Now that I'm gone you're left to fend
For yourself, I hope you can make it
Becuase I'm gone, my throat was slit

The Call
This is like a story kinda thing...so bear with it!

I don't knwo how
You brought me down
My soul shattered
But to you, nothing mattered
I've tried to forget my past
But the memories will always last
I try to hide my pain
By standing alone in the rain
Invisible tears fall with the pure drops
Then you hear a call from the cops
"We need you here to confirm for us"
Someone we found alone in her house"
On the way, your mind it wanders
Why me, what from me do they desire?
You walked in they brought you back
A table covered with cloth of black
Your adrenalin's rushing, what could it be?
They lift the cloth you saw it was me
I looke dup at you with dead dark eyes
Immediately you regret all the lies
"We found her alone, blood was all over"
"Was this your friend, was it your lover?"
You are left speechless, you can't believe
That someone you once loves, had to leave
"Her death was suicide, the reason unknown"
You knew the truth, you heard it over the phone
I told you last week I felt like giving up
You said whatever and just hung up
Now my voice it haunts your mind
Longing for my return, that you will never find
"I know this girl, she is my ex"
"I never thought she would actually do this"
Thinking of what you made me do
You fall into yourself, you're all aloone too
Calling my family, you tell them the news
They ask whyI never saw the clues

Over my casket, staring at my face
You wish you never had to see this place
Screaming cries, neverending tears
Slowly you realize all of your fears
You are alone you have no hope
You think, how can you ever cope
The reason I'm gone, the reason I'm dead
I found the writings under your bed
Written to her, written of your love
Right then my spirit flew like a dove
I knew it then, I knew I had to
End it now, there's nothing left to live for
So I did. I left this world
I bled my wrists, my fingers curled
Becuase of you
My life is through
Becuase of your lies
Forever closed are my eyes
Now I haunt your waking dreams
Those images are not all that they seem
I do it for me
So you can finally see
The hell you put me through
Now I'll do the same to you
You'll never rest, you'll never sleep
I'll infest your heart into the deep
So you can feel the pain
The pain that slowly came
Took me over, ended my life
I hope you're happy, hope you know
You killed my soul, you killed me

...and one last one...

My Lyrics of Love

The words are racing through my mind
But I can't put them in words on paper
The pen sits...
Waiting for the words
To flow freely along the lines
Inspiration comes rarely
Only when I hear your voice
See your dark, mysterious eyes
Only then will words find their place
Only then do the thoughts come out clearly
Only then will I find love

CHORUS

Free my heart
Free my soul
Till I no longer need these pens
The words will simply come out
In perfect rhyme
Perfect lyrical harmony

Your sacred words
Speak softly to my soul
Giving me new life
How do you do that?
Speak songs with no paper
No notes, no music
Only your ever harmonious words
Now your songs
Words of love
Lift me higher
Higher than the heavens
Higher than the stars
Higher until all that's left is dark

CHORUS

This world will never know
Never be good enough
For our love
Your lyrics
My harmony
Floating free
Among the angels

Nice writing!, I love your style

Untitled was my favourite, especiely this:

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April 24th 2007...

why thank you! ok since i am feeling generous (actually i am bored off my ass and have nothing better to do) here are a couple more...enjoy!

Don't Even Know

Eyes of the bluest ocean
Say you'll always be there
A smile that lights up my world
Proves I've nothing left to live for
That laugh never ceases to amaze me
I know you will keep me whole
Your voice echoes
Makes me think of you nonstop
You've taken over me
And you don't even know it
I see you in my dreams
But you've never seen me
These tears I cry
Are only because you're not mine
Just when I think of letting go
Those eyes beg and plead
Hold on just one more day
And soon you will be here
I will be safe in your arms
And you will be forever mine
That face you see but don't recognize
That is me, my love
Someday you'll realize
You belong to me
And I belong to you

Unbridled

Boundless
Unbridled
Untamed
Have my feelings become for you
Everytime I hear your name
Shiver run up my spine
When you speak
Those beautiful words
They puncture my every nerve
I'm weak when you're around
With you near no one else exists
There's only one problem
One thing keeping me from you

You don't even know my name
You don't even know I exist
And it kills me everyday
Knowing you could be mine
If only you could take two seconds
And look in my direction
And realize I've been right there
Right in front of you
Though you may not see it now
Someday you'll realize
Your thoughts, your dreams
Were visions of me
Disguising my face
To see if you would look
But that's ok
Becuase someday I know
Our love will be
Boundless
Unbridled
Untamed

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[quote=Angel_Whispers]here are a few of my songs/poems..if i get enough feedback i will post some more
Story

I want to die
Never see the end
I want to cry
Never feel the cold
Givingup is all I know
So let me take this final blow
At making my life a living high
Let's see how much I can make you cry

Make me bleed
I like the sight
Make me choke
I like the pain
Watching you as you watch me
With this blade my soul is free
Feel it flow, watch it fade
This water now is red and stained

Needing the rush
I push down harder
Needing my closure
I watched you grieve
Draining my blood this is my end
Now that I'm gone you're left to fend
For yourself, I hope you can make it
Becuase I'm gone, my throat was slit

The Call
This is like a story kinda thing...so bear with it!

I don't knwo how
You brought me down
My soul shattered
But to you, nothing mattered
I've tried to forget my past
But the memories will always last
I try to hide my pain
By standing alone in the rain
Invisible tears fall with the pure drops
Then you hear a call from the cops
"We need you here to confirm for us"
Someone we found alone in her house"
On the way, your mind it wanders
Why me, what from me do they desire?
You walked in they brought you back
A table covered with cloth of black
Your adrenalin's rushing, what could it be?
They lift the cloth you saw it was me
I looke dup at you with dead dark eyes
Immediately you regret all the lies
"We found her alone, blood was all over"
"Was this your friend, was it your lover?"
You are left speechless, you can't believe
That someone you once loves, had to leave
"Her death was suicide, the reason unknown"
You knew the truth, you heard it over the phone
I told you last week I felt like giving up
You said whatever and just hung up
Now my voice it haunts your mind
Longing for my return, that you will never find
"I know this girl, she is my ex"
"I never thought she would actually do this"
Thinking of what you made me do
You fall into yourself, you're all aloone too
Calling my family, you tell them the news
They ask whyI never saw the clues

Over my casket, staring at my face
You wish you never had to see this place
Screaming cries, neverending tears
Slowly you realize all of your fears
You are alone you have no hope
You think, how can you ever cope
The reason I'm gone, the reason I'm dead
I found the writings under your bed
Written to her, written of your love
Right then my spirit flew like a dove
I knew it then, I knew I had to
End it now, there's nothing left to live for
So I did. I left this world
I bled my wrists, my fingers curled
Becuase of you
My life is through
Becuase of your lies
Forever closed are my eyes
Now I haunt your waking dreams
Those images are not all that they seem
I do it for me
So you can finally see
The hell you put me through
Now I'll do the same to you
You'll never rest, you'll never sleep
I'll infest your heart into the deep
So you can feel the pain
The pain that slowly came
Took me over, ended my life
I hope you're happy, hope you know
You killed my soul, you killed me

Those were wicked good I really enjoyed them especially these two. can't wait to seee more

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Great poems and songs. I enjoyed them. Also, I'm loving the avatars and such. Awesome job. Hope to see more.

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another new banner...feel free to use...just gimme credit!!!

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Great banner! I love the red with it. Looks great!

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hey ya'll...i know i have been gone for a while...but i made a few new banners....and i have a couple new poems!! enjoy!!


^the angel of grief from Ev's Whisper EP cover!







Echo
All alone she sat and she cried
These beautiful scars she cannot hide
The crimson flood in her mind
Her soul she is longing to find
The soul she once cherished has now died
Everyone throught she was okay, she lied
Holding back the tears, she tried and she tried

The memories of her past
Every thought erased from mind and soul
Dirty little manakins are her only escape
Sitting in the rain, no one sees her tears
Back in her corner, she curled and cried
End it now, there's nothing left
Take it across, spill those emotions

All along she was afraid
Afraid to feel, to tell anyone her problem
Now I look down upon her
A cold and lifeless ord
All color drained, all life stolen
Can you steal from yourself?
Her last words forever echo

"No one ever loved me"

My Other Half
Why can't I be her
Why can't I be the one they all want
Why am I the one shoved aside
Forgotten and left as everyone's leftovers
Walking with her
They stop and stare
But never is it for me
They walk up to her
Ask her name
I'm just the 'protective friend'
The one with her head on straight
I've heard them confess
Their love is only for her
"Do you think she'll say yes?"
"I like her so much--she's perfect"
Feeling alone everyday
Every one I love
Loves her
She's my best friend
Or my worst enemy
I smile for her and that she's found the one
But deep inside I'm screaming
I'm crying his name
As they kiss- my emotion slowly drains
Sick to my stomach
I run and feel alone
Why can't I be her
Why can't I hear confessions of love
Only for me
Why can't she feel
The way I feel day in and day out
I can't feel--so why should she?

The banners look great. I really like the 3rd one. You always make them look very good. The poems are awesome too.

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