Beautiful

I'm amazed by your writings. So full of images, feelings...


From Life: The whole writing is wonderful. (That's the one I like most)

Music, just wow
Eye of the storm : " Absolute nothing becomes absolute chaos " Strong line
Fallen : all of it.

I'm looking foward to read more of your work. You have mayor talent

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Thanks Eugenia.

And you know the story bro...


So this one needs a new title, not my best....but I was ticked at stupid people a few nights ago.

Bliss
They walk in herds,
Like sheep, blindly following,
A guide they cannot see,
Let alone comprehend.

Were they to step into a chasm,
Fall into the fiery depths,
They could not notice.

Ignorance multiplied,
Blind indcotrination has overtaken their ability to think.

The true problems of the world,
Consumed by their own vanity.

What justice is this?
Where is the vindication?

While the sufferers lie dying in the street,
The lambs bleet on about their bruises.
Warnings of the wise are ignored,
Ignorant bliss overtaking progress.

As the world falls inexorably toward dischord,
Chaos,
Entropy,
Destruction.
The mass remains unaware,
Blinded in their own passions,
Thier own misconceptions,
Their false perception.

Why do you suffer these worthless fools?
Where is the vindication?
Why do the children suffer while the childish thrive?

Stupidity is nigh upon being encouraged,
While truth is buried beneath the veils and falsehoods,
Trapped within a cage of blissful obliviousness.

Where is the retribution?
Why are these mindless lemmings not punished?
Why do you keep the waiting lions from taking their due,
From thinning the herd.

Where is the justice?
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Comments are appreciated, as always.

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"It is dreadful when something weighs on your mind, not to have a soul to unburden yourself to. You know what I mean. I tell my piano the things I used to tell you."

Great Job Chris. Bliss reminds me of high school, Walking the halls between classes we were like a heard of cattle.

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TANJ!!!!!!

There Ain't No Justice . .. . ..

this piece kicks some ass shadow wolf...the imagery is awesome...the lions thinning the herd of sheep...also, love that line `why do the children suffer while the childish thrive?'...wow.

Thanks.

As for new writing, awhile back I was listening to The End Has Come...did a bit of writing...I think it sounds angry, but I like it.

Comments are appreciated, like always.

Anger
I am not here to bargain,
Not to parley,
Not to listen to you plead.

I offered to be your best friend,
At worst, I would have been indifferent.
But you crossed that minute line,
And now I have become your last enemy.

Turn your back, blink.
Give me the moment,
And you will end.

You have made your choice,
To steal my life, crush my soul.
Now I obliterate yours.

Vengeance, pure and cold.
Hatred, dark and burning.
Fury, all-encompassing and eternal.

I will tear you apart,
Decimate your livelyhood.
Shatter your hopes and dreams.
Beat you into the waiting coffin.

You may run,
You will hide,
But you cannot escape the hell you unchained.
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"It is dreadful when something weighs on your mind, not to have a soul to unburden yourself to. You know what I mean. I tell my piano the things I used to tell you."

holy shyte, Chris...
if i could write even half as well as you, i would be a proud little Aussie...
*huge hug* congratulations... you are one talented little bastard! :P
i wish i had time to read all of these... i read fallen as well as Anger, and i loved it. the imagery and words were so powerful!
you rawk, man! luv ya-
Lyr

I agree. You're very, very talented, Chris. I miss you.

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You are a special person,with very deep emotions,and fantastic talent to show that!
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