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axeslinger0u812 · 12-15-2003, 08:37 PM

wow...that was great! I also just went back and read all your stuff..you are very good!

alone_i_break · 12-15-2003, 11:19 PM

i love the style you write with, it adds so much to the whole tone of your pieces, its so amzingly creative and artistic and im running out of good words to use!!! just wow. your stuff amazes me :shock:

Shivercide · 12-16-2003, 04:52 PM

Thank you, both of you, for your nice comments. : ) It really means a lot...

**Kaydee** · 12-16-2003, 04:54 PM

Beyond... Very Dark... you just keep getting better!!

EcLiPsE · 12-16-2003, 04:56 PM

Beyond was amazing! Absolutely brilliant! Great job in expressing your true emotions. YOu are so very talented, and I'm glad that I've gotten to read your work!

Shivercide · 12-16-2003, 06:26 PM

Euge, you put the inspiration in me to write something like this.

Breathe Again

I've cried out so many demons,
that I wonder why
they still attack me
from inside...
But I'm stabbed with the realization
that my tears are just
my spirit's way of fleeing
from my body,
[fade]trying to escape[/fade]
the torture chamber
of my mind...
...and in this time
I'm cleansed,
washed of all
this dirt,
clear-sighted
once more.
So although
a monster hurts me,
somewhere
deep within...

If only for this moment,
I can breathe again...

EcLiPsE · 12-16-2003, 06:29 PM

Great poem! I loved the imagery that it had, and the line breaks came at the right time and added a bit of pzazz. Great job!

**Kaydee** · 12-16-2003, 09:28 PM

So dark, i agree with eclipse too, everything flowed really well, and timing was great!!!

axeslinger0u812 · 12-16-2003, 09:39 PM

I love your style! The way you posted it really added to its effect. very cool

Shivercide · 12-17-2003, 06:21 PM

Thank you, all of you.

I'm glad you liked it...I'm glad you like reading all my crazy thoughts.

12-16-2003, 04:54 PM	#94 (permalink)
Kaydee Mommy 2 Be !! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Chesapeake, VA Age: 27 Posts: 1,547 Points: 6,703.75 Bank: 112,708.65 Total Points: 119,412.40 Donate	Beyond... Very Dark... you just keep getting better!! __________________ Space for rent!

12-16-2003, 04:56 PM	#95 (permalink)
EcLiPsE Mmm...Mmm...Good!!! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: claremont, nc. Age: 20 Posts: 360 Points: 451.00 Bank: 227.48 Total Points: 678.48 Donate	Beyond was amazing! Absolutely brilliant! Great job in expressing your true emotions. YOu are so very talented, and I'm glad that I've gotten to read your work! __________________ \|but i need to survive.\| \|tonight. tonight.\|

12-16-2003, 06:26 PM	#96 (permalink)
Shivercide burn my heart to dust Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,470 Points: 9,499.75 Bank: 18,771,948.56 Total Points: 18,781,448.31 Donate	Breathe Again Euge, you put the inspiration in me to write something like this. Breathe Again I've cried out so many demons, that I wonder why they still attack me from inside... But I'm stabbed with the realization that my tears are just my spirit's way of fleeing from my body, [fade]trying to escape[/fade] the torture chamber of my mind... ...and in this time I'm cleansed, washed of all this dirt, clear-sighted once more. So although a monster hurts me, somewhere deep within... If only for this moment, I can breathe again...

12-16-2003, 06:29 PM	#97 (permalink)
EcLiPsE Mmm...Mmm...Good!!! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: claremont, nc. Age: 20 Posts: 360 Points: 451.00 Bank: 227.48 Total Points: 678.48 Donate	Great poem! I loved the imagery that it had, and the line breaks came at the right time and added a bit of pzazz. Great job! __________________ \|but i need to survive.\| \|tonight. tonight.\|

12-16-2003, 09:28 PM	#98 (permalink)
Kaydee Mommy 2 Be !! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Chesapeake, VA Age: 27 Posts: 1,547 Points: 6,703.75 Bank: 112,708.65 Total Points: 119,412.40 Donate	So dark, i agree with eclipse too, everything flowed really well, and timing was great!!! __________________ Space for rent!

12-15-2003, 08:37 PM	#91 (permalink)
axeslinger0u812 Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Neither here, nor there Age: 24 Posts: 1,695 Points: 814.28 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 814.28 Donate	wow...that was great! I also just went back and read all your stuff..you are very good!

12-15-2003, 11:19 PM	#92 (permalink)
alone_i_break Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: gone...always gone Age: 22 Posts: 734 Points: 779.55 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 779.55 Donate	i love the style you write with, it adds so much to the whole tone of your pieces, its so amzingly creative and artistic and im running out of good words to use!!! just wow. your stuff amazes me :shock:

12-16-2003, 09:39 PM	#99 (permalink)
axeslinger0u812 Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Neither here, nor there Age: 24 Posts: 1,695 Points: 814.28 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 814.28 Donate	I love your style! The way you posted it really added to its effect. very cool

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