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yr_superheroine · 12-29-2003, 12:36 AM

my GOD, woman! you are amazing!! your stuff just blows me away! why did i never come to this thread before?! you rock. *mwah*

HUNTRESS · 12-29-2003, 12:38 AM

wow!!!!!!!1 :shock: that's all i can say *fading to black*

alone_i_break · 12-29-2003, 01:51 AM

wow!! :shock: i loved that one. i can really relate to how you feel. youve done a great job of capturing the feelings

Euge · 12-29-2003, 06:36 AM

Steph, I am so happy that you posted again. You know I love all your stuff, and this one is no exception... Is so beautiful, and touching, is wonderful.

You have a gift with words, please, do not ever hide it from the world...
I think you make my word better with your words...

*you made her cry*

I love you
Euge

music box · 12-29-2003, 08:14 PM

*tears streaming down her face*

Steph... thank you so much for posting again and I want you to keep it up girl. I love you so much and like Eug said... You make my world better with your words. Thank you so much for posting again and I want to se it again and again and again and again untl my eyes pop out of my head, that is if you want to. lol.
Thanks for still standing. I love you so much.

Emmalee

Shivercide · 12-30-2003, 02:46 PM

Thanks so much for your comments, everyone...really, it means a lot...

Euge and Em...I love you. *Many hugs for both of you*

Shivercide · 01-04-2004, 12:32 AM

Blame

So many tears
falling,
falling,
growing colder,
frozen...

Is it my heart's
reflection
before me,
punctured through and through
with painful shards
of my own guilt...
that glistens in the darkness,
whispers to me
each night,
and clings onto my shadow
every day?

Never could I find a way
to end this pain, this torture,
this everlasting betrayal
of myself...

[fade]It's all my fault
It's all my fault
It's all my fault[/fade]

music box · 01-04-2004, 12:37 AM

Steph,

I feel your poem you know I do. But it's not your fault ok. I love you girl.

Emmalee

Fairy.org · 01-04-2004, 12:38 AM

I love your writing

darknight20 · 01-04-2004, 12:39 AM

wow i love all ur stuff both of u guys tomorrow ill put one of my songs up im sure it wont be nearly as good though oh well i just writie my emotions at the time!

12-29-2003, 12:38 AM	#112 (permalink)
HUNTRESS Lucian Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Wherever my dreams take me Age: 21 Posts: 849 Points: 2,266.53 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 2,266.53 Donate	wow!!!!!!!1 :shock: that's all i can say fading to black __________________ YOU'RE THE LOVE OF MY LIFE, U KNOW IT

12-29-2003, 06:36 AM	#114 (permalink)
Euge Koroleva Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Buenos Aires Posts: 8,443 Points: 26,144.54 Bank: 322,251.37 Total Points: 348,395.91 Donate	Falling Stars Steph, I am so happy that you posted again. You know I love all your stuff, and this one is no exception... Is so beautiful, and touching, is wonderful. You have a gift with words, please, do not ever hide it from the world... I think you make my word better with your words... you made her cry I love you Euge __________________ I believe this is heaven to no one else but me And I'll defend it as long as I can be left here to linger in silence If I choose to would you try to understand?

12-29-2003, 08:14 PM	#115 (permalink)
music box .has sexy hair. Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Part time in Hell. Part time in your pants. Age: 20 Posts: 1,054 Points: 310,399.17 Bank: 6.20 Total Points: 310,405.38 Donate	tears streaming down her face Steph... thank you so much for posting again and I want you to keep it up girl. I love you so much and like Eug said... You make my world better with your words. Thank you so much for posting again and I want to se it again and again and again and again untl my eyes pop out of my head, that is if you want to. lol. Thanks for still standing. I love you so much. Emmalee __________________ Be my friend. Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small, I'm needy. Warm me up, and breathe me.

01-04-2004, 12:32 AM	#117 (permalink)
Shivercide burn my heart to dust Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,470 Points: 9,499.75 Bank: 18,771,948.56 Total Points: 18,781,448.31 Donate	Blame Blame So many tears falling, falling, growing colder, frozen... Is it my heart's reflection before me, punctured through and through with painful shards of my own guilt... that glistens in the darkness, whispers to me each night, and clings onto my shadow every day? Never could I find a way to end this pain, this torture, this everlasting betrayal of myself... [fade]It's all my fault It's all my fault It's all my fault[/fade]

01-04-2004, 12:37 AM	#118 (permalink)
music box .has sexy hair. Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Part time in Hell. Part time in your pants. Age: 20 Posts: 1,054 Points: 310,399.17 Bank: 6.20 Total Points: 310,405.38 Donate	Steph, I feel your poem you know I do. But it's not your fault ok. I love you girl. Emmalee __________________ Be my friend. Hold me, wrap me up. Unfold me. I am small, I'm needy. Warm me up, and breathe me.

12-29-2003, 12:36 AM	#111 (permalink)
yr_superheroine le jones soda freak Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Kansas Age: 17 Posts: 103 Points: 24.78 Bank: 570.89 Total Points: 595.67 Donate	my GOD, woman! you are amazing!! your stuff just blows me away! why did i never come to this thread before?! you rock. mwah

12-29-2003, 01:51 AM	#113 (permalink)
alone_i_break Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: gone...always gone Age: 22 Posts: 734 Points: 779.55 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 779.55 Donate	wow!! :shock: i loved that one. i can really relate to how you feel. youve done a great job of capturing the feelings

01-04-2004, 12:38 AM	#119 (permalink)
Fairy.org Member of the Banned PERMA BANNED Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: In Brandon's bed. Age: 22 Posts: 738 Points: 286.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 286.00 Donate	I love your writing

01-04-2004, 12:39 AM	#120 (permalink)
darknight20 n00blet Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 18 Points: 100.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 100.00 Donate	wow i love all ur stuff both of u guys tomorrow ill put one of my songs up im sure it wont be nearly as good though oh well i just writie my emotions at the time!

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