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Amysbiggestfan · 10-25-2003, 03:49 PM

I can relate to that, sort of.

Good work.

Shivercide · 11-01-2003, 02:28 PM

CLOUD OF SMOKE

I saw you standing
in the midst of tragedy.
I reached out my hand.

Needing to escape,
you reached out your and to me,
groping pallid air.

Hearts scream all around,
sadness glistening your eyes.
You stagger closer.

Crying at your pain,
I hold you tight against me,
knowing what it's like.

Glass around our feet,
debris drifts down from above-
I am here for you.

Written April, 2002

Amysbiggestfan · 11-01-2003, 02:32 PM

Very powerful emotions.

Aubstress · 11-02-2003, 12:56 AM

A Difference is definatly my fav but i love them all

Shivercide · 11-02-2003, 08:34 PM

Aww, thanks people.

Shivercide · 11-08-2003, 06:49 PM

Here's a song I just finished writing that I've been working on for awhile now...

Shivers

All light fades away.
All my strength leaves me behind
in this cold space
(such a lonely place)
and no one is here,
only me...

In this darkness, this darkness,
where monsters are looking to feed,
I keep to myself and I pray
that they won't find me
(in this darkness).

All hope disappears.
So frigid my insides have grown
that my tears freeze
(can you hear me?)
.......But no one is here,
only me...

In this darkness, this darkness,
where monsters are looking to feed,
I keep to myself and I pray
that they won't find me
in this darkness, such darkness,
where pain won't let me leave,
where I can barely move,
where I can hardly scream.

Trapped inside my shivers,
trapped inside my head,
I can't escape myself,
I can't escape the dread.
As I surrender to my sorrow,
I must remember, then-
when darkness swallows up my world,
my light still shines within.

-instrumental-

In this darkness, this darkness,
where monsters are looking to feed,
I keep to myself and I pray
that they won't find me
in this darkness, such darkness,
where pain won't let me leave,
where I can barely move,
where I can hardly breathe.

Amysbiggestfan · 11-09-2003, 03:15 AM

I love the image the song paints in your head. Fantastic!

music box · 11-11-2003, 12:33 PM

thanks for everything steph!

**Kaydee** · 11-11-2003, 02:17 PM

WOW!!!!!! Very original!! I loved it!!!

Euge · 11-13-2003, 04:09 PM

They are amazing

I Love shivers, and the other too.
They are so descriptive, and so deep.

I wish sometime I could write like that

Euge

11-01-2003, 02:28 PM	#22 (permalink)
Shivercide In pieces. Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,944 Points: 7,079.62 Bank: 2,382,332.99 Total Points: 2,389,412.61 Donate	Cloud of Smoke (Haiku) CLOUD OF SMOKE I saw you standing in the midst of tragedy. I reached out my hand. Needing to escape, you reached out your and to me, groping pallid air. Hearts scream all around, sadness glistening your eyes. You stagger closer. Crying at your pain, I hold you tight against me, knowing what it's like. Glass around our feet, debris drifts down from above- I am here for you. Written April, 2002

11-08-2003, 06:49 PM	#26 (permalink)
Shivercide In pieces. Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,944 Points: 7,079.62 Bank: 2,382,332.99 Total Points: 2,389,412.61 Donate	-Shivers- lyrics Here's a song I just finished writing that I've been working on for awhile now... Shivers All light fades away. All my strength leaves me behind in this cold space (such a lonely place) and no one is here, only me... In this darkness, this darkness, where monsters are looking to feed, I keep to myself and I pray that they won't find me (in this darkness). All hope disappears. So frigid my insides have grown that my tears freeze (can you hear me?) .......But no one is here, only me... In this darkness, this darkness, where monsters are looking to feed, I keep to myself and I pray that they won't find me in this darkness, such darkness, where pain won't let me leave, where I can barely move, where I can hardly scream. Trapped inside my shivers, trapped inside my head, I can't escape myself, I can't escape the dread. As I surrender to my sorrow, I must remember, then- when darkness swallows up my world, my light still shines within. -instrumental- In this darkness, this darkness, where monsters are looking to feed, I keep to myself and I pray that they won't find me in this darkness, such darkness, where pain won't let me leave, where I can barely move, where I can hardly breathe.

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Kaydee Mommy 2 Be !! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Chesapeake, VA Age: 26 Posts: 1,547 Points: 6,703.75 Bank: 112,708.65 Total Points: 119,412.40 Donate	WOW!!!!!! Very original!! I loved it!!! __________________ Space for rent!

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Euge .:: She-Wolf ::. Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Buenos Aires Posts: 2,561 Points: 2,139.13 Bank: 42,453.66 Total Points: 44,592.79 Donate	They are amazing I Love shivers, and the other too. They are so descriptive, and so deep. I wish sometime I could write like that Euge __________________

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Amysbiggestfan Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 188 Points: 100.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 100.00 Donate	I can relate to that, sort of. Good work.

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Amysbiggestfan Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 188 Points: 100.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 100.00 Donate	Very powerful emotions.

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Aubstress Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: New England Posts: 156 Points: 356.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 356.00 Donate	A Difference is definatly my fav but i love them all

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Amysbiggestfan Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 188 Points: 100.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 100.00 Donate	I love the image the song paints in your head. Fantastic!

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